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Reviewer: mimi404 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2014 01:54 am Title: Episode 14b

Valeria is one the most jealous bitches in the house. What Christina said was very true her body does look like a boys body. She ain't got nothing going on in the front and nothing going on in the back. And not only does she have a distasteful exterior but also a distasteful interior which makes her all the more ugly to me. And until the day Michael sees that, sadly that means she is here to stay. I just really want to tell Michael how fake she is. I know that one of Michael friends told him that and some of the girls in the house but that never really seemed to have a huge impact on the way Michael feels about her, it only tainted his perception of her a little bit. Ugh I want her gone. 



Author's Response:

I feel it's safe to say that in the next episode, one of the girls takes it upon herself to tell Michael about Valeria and point out some of her... questionable character traits. Before Valeria's true colors began coming out, Michael had developing some deeep feelings for that girl and as a result, those feelings are blinding him to what should be red flags. One of these girls needs to set him straight. 

Reviewer: moonwalking24_7 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2014 01:44 am Title: Episode 14b

 Valeria is like the God of all bitches, and I know a lot of bitches but Val, She is like the biggest bitch and I mean that the worst way possible. The things that Christina was opening up about were serious and that whole time that bitch had some other intentions, Those things that the Christina were talking about were not no joke and Val played with it to her disposal. She doesn't deserve to be here and she does deserve to be in Michael's presence because she is just bad all the way around. 



Author's Response:

Valeria definitely hit an all time low in this episode; to take advantage of someone opening up about something so serious is definitely the lowest. Yes it's a competition, but she views it TOO MUCH as a game and not enough as a chance to really get to know Michael. She's focusing too much on these other girls.

 

 

Reviewer: mslovesmj Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2014 01:30 am Title: Episode 14b

Valeria is always doing the most. If I were christina I would have pushed her in the deepest part of the water and let her fend for herself. Why can't she just be herself she always has to put someone else down to make herself look better, but then again being her real self won't be all that great either because she clearly got many issues going in in her brain. It is just so frustrating that Michael does not really see all the bullshit. I think someone needs to beat Valeria at her own game and do the same to her that she does to everyone else. Can't wait for the next update. 



Author's Response:

Since it is a competition, you do need some sort of strategy, but Valeria takes it too far at times. Whenever you have to put down another person to make yourself look better, that's a problem! Before Valeria started acting up, Michael had developed some deep feelings for her so sometimes he can be blind to things that are clearly in his face. Poor chump :-/. 

THANK YOU HONEY!!! :D :D

Reviewer: hannah4mj Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2014 02:04 pm Title: Episode 14a

Okay I have been thinking for like an hour or so of what Valeria could do. I can't think of shit. To me I feel that she has already done it all. I don't know if she is going to target Michelle again but I highly suggest she doesn't. One because she got her ass whooped last time and two it would be obvious that you are trying to get her out. I am interested to see what this bitch does because I got no idea. 



Author's Response:

You are exactly on point. Two thumbs up!

THANKS HUN!!!

Reviewer: thatgirlcrazy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2014 04:56 pm Title: Episode 14a

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. Tomorrow seems so far away when you are anxious. I honestly don't know what else Valeria can have up her selve. I cannot believe she did not learn that her plans always backfire in some way or another. She need to stop playing this game like it is the hunger games. Bitch you don't need no technique or strategy, you just need to get to know Michael. I really just want to scream that in her face. 



Author's Response:

LOL@ "She need to stop playing this game like it is the hunger games." 

THANK YOU BOO!!!

Reviewer: EliseMarie Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2014 11:18 am Title: Episode 14a

About time Michael sees that Sasha ain't right. Last week when she got the first crown I was like that will be the first and the last time you will ever get the first crown so sit yo arrogant ass all the way down cause you not the shit. I hope he finds out whatever it is soon because I really can't stand her. Also what the fuck was she doing in the challenge. That bitch is so dumb. RIght now I just really want to call Ben and dulce to come back and just beat her ass one more time cause this bitch just hasn't learned. When Sasha and Valeria leave the house I will be forever happy...at least for the moment because I know them others got things in their closet as well. But for right now, I need Sasha to be gone and then Valeria. 



Author's Response:

Sasha and Valeria are definitely the most hated girls in the house. All I have to say is what is hidden in the dark, will come to the light.

THANK YOU ELISEMARIE!!! SUCH A BEAUTIFUL NAME!!! 

Reviewer: mjlover1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2014 07:48 pm Title: Episode 14a

Update 2nite? ;)



Author's Response:

Hey girl, I finally updated for you. I had a really busy weekend, (conference on Saturday, church all day Sunday) so I was unable to update. I'll have another update for you later on today or Thursday! MUAH!!! KISSES!!!

Reviewer: DariahXxXJackson Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2014 05:36 pm Title: Episode 14a

I don't even know what to say. But if I had to say anything about what I just read it would be that Christina is a hot mess and in that challenge most of the girls were a hot mess and if they were to take care of Neverland while Michael was away it would be a disaster and they would probably burn the whole ranch down. It would be a nightmare. 



Author's Response:

Heyyy Dariah :D

Christina... smh, so pretty, and yet so messy.

Those girls had those animals scared!!! 

THANK YOU HONEY!!! :D :D

 

 

Reviewer: moonwalking24_7 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2014 05:32 pm Title: Episode 14a

OMG Christina. That was a disaster, and I don't get why Michael was all calm and shit if I were him I would have been like bitch take your dirty pussy out if my room. God Damn that was fucking gross. Ugh so nasty!!! She is always so sloppy I don't get it it. Ugh. He should have brought back Ben but whatever. The challenge was hilarious. I knew that when they got the letter for their challenge something was not right. Michael would be crazy to let the girls meet his family. Right now all I can hope is that Val does not win the date. 



Author's Response:

If I was Michael... dawg, I would run. 

Lol@ "She is always so sloppy I don't get it." Yo... I did not notice how sloppy Xtina was until y'all pointed that out. Yes, a part of her character is basically being a "hot mess", but I didn't notice how badly she'd fucked up till Diamond pointed it out. 

It's funny you say that about Ben because I was wondering how far Ben would've went had she never whooped Sasha's ass. 

Glad you loved the challenge! 

I don't know why those girls thought they were gonna meet the parents and the rest of the Jackson clan. Not the way they been acting! Chile plz!!!

THANK YOU BOO!!! :D :D 



Author's Response:

If I was Michael... dawg, I would run. 

Lol@ "She is always so sloppy I don't get it." Yo... I did not notice how sloppy Xtina was until y'all pointed that out. Yes, a part of her character is basically being a "hot mess", but I didn't notice how badly she'd fucked up till Diamond pointed it out. 

It's funny you say that about Ben because I was wondering how far Ben would've went had she never whooped Sasha's ass. 

Glad you loved the challenge! 

I don't know why those girls thought they were gonna meet the parents and the rest of the Jackson clan. Not the way they been acting! Chile plz!!!

THANK YOU BOO!!! :D :D 

Reviewer: NatalieK Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2014 05:28 pm Title: Episode 14a

OMG !!!!!!!!!!!!! You are back. I have been waiting for this moment for the longest and no matter how long you may be gone I would never give up on you and I will continue to be a dedicated reader because you truly deserve it. Sorry if I seem a bit rude in my last comment I made here. I know that you were going through some things and you did not deserve that. Welcome back



Author's Response:

HEYYYYYYYY NAT!!! *hugs* *jumps up and down excited* *hugs again*

You were not rude at all, just issuing tough love. I don't plan on going another hiatus but if I do, I will have the respect to at least let you guys know. I really do feel like I have the best readers and you all deserve so much more than that. So don't feel bad, hun ;)

Reviewer: ratedRwithMJ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2014 05:26 pm Title: Episode 14a

Dayum Michael is hypnotized by Mari's body. He in the car holding himself and I was like clearly Christina did not give a good blowjob last night because if she did Michael would have not been that horny. Christina trying to surprise and seduce him. Bitch you failed. 



Author's Response:

Mari's body always puts a smell on Mike. Poor chump.

Lol@ "Bitch you failed."

THANK YOU HONEY!!!

Reviewer: Mexicanaspice Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2014 07:44 pm Title: Episode 14a

Damnit. Why have I just saw that you updated. Sorry it is really late but I am very relieved knowing that you are better and with us again. Myself and everyone else as you can see missed you very much.

The only thing I have to say about the last updates is that Michael is a jackass and had me so scared for a minute at the elimination and  that Christina is an embrassasment to all Hispanic girls all over the world. As I was reading I just put my palm to forehead. So embrassing. 



Author's Response:

It's ok mamicita, I missed you though!!!

LMAO@ "Christina is an embarassment to all Hispanic girls all over the world." -->Don't be surprised if you see this quote in the story somewhere haha.

THANK YOU CHICA!!!

Reviewer: MeaganG Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2014 07:34 pm Title: Episode 14a

Gosh this episode is already starting out like a hot mess. First the failed Christina and Michael hookup and the challenge. I know that the rest of this episode is gonna be filled with drama. Bring on the hot mess. Update soon. 



Author's Response:

Heyyyy Ms. Meagan!!! I'm still reeling from failed hook up attempt. And the girls in the challenge=ridiculous. More hot messiness coming up for you soon.

THANK YOU SWEETS!!! :D :D 

Reviewer: mimi404 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2014 04:36 am Title: Episode 14a

First of all, why was Michael fucking Christina. That clearly was just lust because out of all the girls I think they have the least deepest connection beyond physical. But that shit that happened in that bed was just fucking gross. In the words of Michelle she need to get her life. I loved the challenge. It was funny as hell especially because they all thought they were meeting the family. HELL NO. I think that some more girls need to go before they are introduced to the family because some girls are a mess. Seriously a mess. Can't wait for the next update. I haven't said it yet but I am so glad you are back. 



Author's Response:

Christina hasn't been here as long as the other girls so she knows she needs to step her game up.

I felt soooo bad and utterly disgusted for Michael when he discovered that shit. LMAO@ "she need to get her life."

Glad you loved the challenge. This one was inspired by Real Chance of Love. Remember that show? 

THANK YOU MIMI!!! MUAH!!!

Reviewer: Chanel21 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2014 12:45 am Title: Episode 14a

These girls need help. I don't know what the fuck some of them were doing. If I were Michael I would be scared to leave them alone at neverland. These girls need supervision at all times because they just messing everything up. 



Author's Response:

LOL@ "If I were Michael I would be scared to leave them alone at neverland." I cosign that statement!!! These girls were a HOTTT MESS!!! 

THANK YOU CHANEL!!!

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