Date: Jul 01, 2014 05:50 am Title: Episode 15c
What the fuck you gonna do Valeria?
Author's Response:
I bust out laughing when I saw this! LOL!!!
Date: Jun 30, 2014 10:04 pm Title: Episode 15c
I AM ACTUALLY FLIPPING MY SHIT RIGHT NOW!!!!!!
Has the moment I have been waiting for finally come. Is Valeria about to be sent packing. After I finish writing my review I am gonna go pray on that because the bitch needs to go. My ass could not stop laughing when they was comparing notes on her. I slid out my chair on the floor laughing cause I am just so happy and overjoyed that Michael is finally getting an understanding of who she really has been all of along. Shante got her revenge and what goes around comes around. So happy now nothing can ruin this moment.
Mmhm Michael asked Ava for a date...at night...you know what that means. The last time Michael asked her for a date at night they were all over eachother kissing eachothers faces off. Now that she knows she needs to step up I know lips are not the only thing that are going to be touching. Ava's ex better bring his ass back to the hotel. Can't wait for the update.
Author's Response:
LOL@ "I AM ACTUALLY FLIPPING MY SHIT RIGHT NOW!!!!!!"
Valeria is in serious shit. I don't know if she's going to make it out of this one. Then again, she does have that hold over Michael. We'll see.
Shante roasted her ass at dinner. Glad you liked that part though :).
Something tells me that things are going to get very steamy between Michael and Ava in this next update.
Thank you girrrrl!!!
Date: Jun 30, 2014 09:49 pm Title: Episode 15c
Oh shit Michael is fucking pissed off as fuck. Even my ass is scared. He gonna let Valetia have it once he gets a chance to talk to her in private. Her story did not match her exes at all and I remember last time he got mad and yelled at her in Vegas and I know for sure Michael ain't gonna be holding back this time. He gonna curse her ass out which is very well derserved. She can't do anything about, I mean absolutely nothing. I m really curious as to what she gonna do cause we all know the bitch be pulling schemes out of her ass. I know you said you were updating tomorrow but damn try not to make it late tomorrow cause I just became so anxious right now I can't even go to bed like I was going to do after reading the update.
Author's Response:
You're right. Michael is livid! Valeria is a diabolical person so I'm sure she's trying to concoct some plan to get back in Michael's good graces. I don't know how she's going to get herself out of this one.
As usual, your feedback has put a smile on my face and had me rolling on the floor laughing. I luh ya Diamond!
Date: Jun 30, 2014 09:05 pm Title: Episode 15b
Oh and girl you ain't never lost your mojo. I got bored so I went back and re read some of my comments and I must say I done said some dumb ass shit and I read others peoples responses and I also read some of your responses and I think there is so many ideas left for you to use. I mean some ideas you said yourself and never used. Oh like the vibrator scene...oh yes you said that if you don't believe me look it up. But anyway girl don't be getting insecure on me with this story. You got this.
Author's Response:
Your comments give me life! Lol they always manage to crack me up some way some how even when I'm not in a humorous mood. Thanks for the idea; I'll go back and read previous comments for some inspirations. Thanks hun!
Date: Jun 30, 2014 08:49 pm Title: Episode 15b
Alright y'all I usually right some perverted or dumb ass silly ass comments but I am getting serious now. Michael has got to speak to Lionel. This interrogation made me realize that their issue needs to be confronted. While the other girls got interrogated, Mari and her brother didn't reveal anything. What needs to be asked is why the hell did she got involved with a MARRIED MAN. The fact that she dated Michael best friend does not bother me as much as the fact the she got serious with a married man. No matter how she approaches this question to try to prove herself right, there are no justifications when it comes to dating a married person. It is considered to be ethically wrong and could hamper your life in more ways than one. I mean for fucking sake when you get involved with a married man, no matter how much he claims you to be his true love, at the end of the day, his wife and family (kids) will be his first priority. When it comes to choosing between his family and you, it will always be his family. Not only that but why didn't she realize that what Lionel did to his wife would most likely be done to her? What made her think that she was so special to take him away from his wife and mother of their PLANNED child? Did she think that he will eventually leave his wife for her? No matter what angle you look at, she is a side piece and some extra side ass... Or in better words in her case she is some extra extra extra extra extra extra extra extra side ass. I don't know there whole circumstance yet but usually when a man has an affair outside of his marriage the mistress is being used as an outlet. Mari probably was stress reliever from his day to day life cause we all know how chill she is. I don't think he really was invested in her. He probably was invested in his wife and his daughter. However, He may have liked her and he very well have loved some great qualities about her but he wasn't invested in her. And this is just my opinion I don't understand why would any man respect a woman who is willing to settle for less than she deserves. Now on top of all of this If you date a married man you WILL be considered a whore – Yeah I said it. A whore is more than just a woman who gets paid to have sex. A whore will sleep with your man and not bat an eye about it. She will even justify why she thinks it okay for her to sleep with a married man and keep doing it and enjoy it. So this is all just me ranting and I still don't know the whole situation but I don't think there is much to say that will make it better. Don't think that this is just me attacking Mari because despite the situation I do think she is a cool chick but I just have strong feelings about women who date married men that's all. Thank The Lord you back, and I TRUELY mean this because I know how long term health issues can be.
Author's Response:
While reading your review, I kept glancing back up at the username to make sure this was MY Diamond writing this insightful serious review! Lol! I love it! We will have more insight on Lionel and Marisela's relationship soon. At this point, all we know is that Marisela knowingly had a year and a half long affair with a married man. We know there were feelings involved but we're not sure as to how deep those feelings ran or if love was involved. I don't want to give too much away too soon, but I can say that Lionel and Marisela were in love with one another. It was not a "fuckship" as Mari so would eloquently put it but as much of a relationship a married can have with another woman besides his wife. Mari knows she's wrong for being a "whore" (let's be real--that's what she was at the time and I completely agree with you) and feels guilty about it. In Vegas, when her and Michael were on their date, she revealed that she's a child of a broken home; her father left her and the rest of her family for another woman so she's very well aware of her actions which is quite sad.
You pointed out something that was very true. "The fact that she dated Michael's bestfriend does not bother me as much as the fact she got serious with a married man." These two things are weighing heavily on Mike's mind, which is why he's so "funny acting" with her right now. The fact that she knowingly did this speaks volumes of her character and I cannot wait for us to delve into her and Lionel's relationship so we can find out the tea and what's what. Until her and Michael discuss this, they will not be able to move forward.
I don't think you're attacking Mari at all; you're telling it like it is. If anything, you and the others are helping me by pointout everything that needs to be addressed when we finally do explore the affair.
LOVED the definition you used to describe a whore. Tell me why when I read that part, Joseline Hernandez from "Love and Hip Hop Atlant" came to mind (shade, no shade) lmao. I love the Puerto Rican princess but her face immediately popped in my head when I read "a whore will sleep with your man and not bat an eye about it. She will even justify why she thinks it's okay for her to sleep with a married man and keep doing it and enjoy it." It's because of movies and tv shows like this that being "the other woman" is glorified when it really shouldn't be.
THANK YOU DIAMOND!!! You were on point with everything you said!
Date: Jun 30, 2014 08:06 pm Title: Episode 15b
I think Mari got off easy and all the other girls had it rougher. If anything her brother helped her out and her interrogation with Shante didn't really do anything. Everyone had something revealed about them whether it was good or bad except her. I like Mari but I think Shante should have taken that homewrecker thing a bit further. Even though she claims to not be a home wrecker, she is an accomplice. Whether she likes it or not, she was a willing participant in a man violating his vows and betraying the trust of his wife, which reflects badly on Mari's character. And as much as I like Mari that is something Michael needs to take notice of.
Author's Response:
Hey GiGi!
I agree. Out of all the girls, Mari's interrogation was without a doubt the least insightful. You're right. Whether Mari likes it or not, she willingly slept with a married man. She can dress it up however she likes, but facts are facts and that's what Michael's having trouble deal with.
Thank you GiGi!
Date: Jun 30, 2014 09:12 am Title: Episode 15b
Valeria ain't got nowhere to turn. Once Shante talks to Michael I am sure here time is up. After they compare stories they are gonna see who is lying and clearly their stories didn't match up at all. It is about time Michael hears and sees her for what she TRUELY is: a fake ass bitch. I am just curious but since Shante clearly put in all the work for her man while she was in the competition does she still have those feelings. It wasn't that long ago since she was eliminated so her feelings can't just disappear that fast. Because if so that is really awkward cause they are going out to dinner and she has to talk about girls who are still in the competition.
Author's Response:
Hey babydoll!
Valeria has no where to run and no where to hide. She gave Shante the perfect ammunition to shoot her with, and she definitely pulls the trigger in this next update.
Shante's feelings for Michael will be addressed in the next update. She really liked him and could picture herself in a relationship with him. She was eliminated in Vegas only a few weeks ago, so I'm sure those feelings are still there. I wonder if her opinions on the girls will be unbiased or not?
Thanks hun :).
Date: Jun 30, 2014 05:58 am Title: Episode 15b
These girls and their exes tho!!! I don't understand what is wrong with Valeria but she really fucked up. I don't have any idea of how she gonna get out of this one. She gonna have to do some major ass kissing real soon cause the chances of her making out of elimination safe is highly unlikely. The best thing she did in the interview was remaining silent and ignoring Shante because everything that did come out of her mouth only was damaging to her. Her and her ex had the worst interrogation so I think it is her time to go. Michelle's ex is just ugly as hell. He is probably somewhere is his mid to late 50s so I just don't get. I had to laugh at Michael's reaction, he was like what the fuck. But god damn, Michael was being so bold coming out with some slick comments. When Michael said he was going to be her last I was like woah woah woah, someone is getting a bit too possessive. I wasn't really shocked with what was revealed in her interrogation because everything that was said is something I would expect Michelle to do. It just shows that she really is the same person outside of the competition. Then Rocky and her ex just got on my damn nerves really bad and I don't know why. First of all Rocky's ex is ugly as hell and I don't understand how they got together. Second of all their stories were different which shows that there is something shady going on. What the hell was she doing with her ex two weeks before competition. What the fuck were you doing. That is some shady shit right there. Sasha's interrogation shocked the hell out of me and it actually helped her out and I can tell it makes her look different in Michael's eyes because it sure as hell made her look different in mine. But I agree with how the fact her own brother calling her manipulative is very damaging. And then there was Mari and her brother. She probably had the least insightful interrogation of all the girls and I know it is because her gigantic brother was there. Also she never really had a problem with Shante so she wasn't really grilled like the rest of the girls. I don't think that it is fair and sooner or later Michael is gonna need to talk to Lionel. The longer he avoids it the worst it is gonna get. But one thing is for sure this next update is gonna be crazy. I know Shante gonna get her revenge. Glad your back, and gurl you crazy if you think you lost your mojo.
Author's Response:
Valeria has made a mess of herself for the umpteenth time. Look at that. I done lost count. She's so emotional! She's a smart, calculating girl but sometimes like this (and the moment in Vegas) she acts before she thinks and it gets her in DEEP shit with Michael. Will Valeria charm Michael and slide by, I'm not sure, but she better pull something out of her ass if she wants Michael.
Yes, Michael's confused as far as Mikhail and Michelle go. They are the odd couple in his mind.
Rocky felt that by tweaking her answers, the blow wouldn't be as bad, but she made herself look ridiculous in Michael's eyes.
Yes, our Sasha is just a hopeless romantic at heart. At the end of the day, she just wants someone to love and for them to love her highness back.
Yes, Mari's interrogation wasn't nearly as insightful as the others. Michael already knows that she's a loyal person. We want the tea! lol
And thank you, love. As of now, I'm kicking my insecurities in the ass.
Date: Jun 29, 2014 09:37 pm Title: Episode 15b
I am sorry for being greedy and disregarding the fact that your health is not the best right now. I truly apologize. And I just want to say that from the last update I never would have thought you have lost your mojo. Every update you have given us we have loved so much and always made everyone want more. I have never read a review that has criticized the quality of your work so don't ever think that. I love what you do and everyone else does too. Don't go thinking you have lost your spark because that is just false and you being over critical of yourself. The thought of you losing you mojo is something that has never crossed my mind so just know that you updates are getting better and better. And as someone who has just gone back and re read the story it is very evident that your writing is only getting better by the update.
Author's Response:
You have nothing to apologize for, love. Like I said, I've been in your position before looking like "Wth? Bring back the story!" You weren't being greedy at all. You leave such great feedback, I would hate to lose you as a reader, Julie, and I'm glad I haven't. Like you said, I'm being over critical of myself and truth is, I've always been that way but lately it's been worth. I'm not only trying to find my "groove" in writing but in life as well and as a result of over analyzing everything, I've held myself back, this story being a prime example. The way this story has been received has gone ABOVE AND BEYOND my expectations, so I want to give each update my best shot. Thank you for being such a loyal reader!
Date: Jun 27, 2014 07:47 pm Title: Episode 15b
Girl I understand how it is when you are sick for a long period of time. Sickness totally affects and halts everything in your life. I got really sick because of my asthma since I wasn't not taking care of myself when I went to college because as a freshman last year I just let lose and packed so much weight in a little bit of time and it made my asthma so much worse to the point where I could not participate in many activities. It was so bad my doctor didn't not want to to workout to lose the weight and instead I was put on medication. This struggle made me miss classes resulting in me taking classes over the summer to catch up. Girl I know EXACTLY how it is and with that experience I had with my sickness I cannot be made at you at all. Just keep doing your best like you have been doing and TAKE CARE OF YOURSELF FIRST. Glad your back and I hope the one day you can fully recover.
Author's Response:
Hey Hannah banana :) :D.Thank you for being so understanding. You're comment really inspired me. I'm so glad to have someone to relate to. I don't expect others to understand unless they've been in the same position; it's very hard. I am so proud that you were able to overcome that. Thank you for being my motivation Hannah :). I mean that :).
Date: Jun 22, 2014 09:16 pm Title: Episode 15a
What is going on with this story? You come back and update a few episodes then all of a sudden your gone and you don't come back for a month or two. Every time you come back we are welcoming and excited but now it is getting on my nerves because this repetitively happens and it is almost like a cycle. I don't know how to get your attention or how to make you come back as soon as possible but whenever you get this message just be mindful that you can't expect to continuously have a successful story if you keep disappearing on the readers who have been waiting.
Author's Response:
I understand your frustration; I've been in your position as a reader and have been frustrated too, but what I can say is I'm doing my best. When your health is not 100%, your creativity only goes so far. I don't expect you or anyone else to understand that unless you've been in my shoes and walked the path I've walked. Is my health better then what it was a few months ago? TREMENDOUSLY! But I'll be honest... I don't feel like I'm the writer that I was almost a year ago when I first started this story. For lack of better words, I feel like I've "lost my mojo." But one thing I refuse to do is give up on this story like I've seen so many other writers do with theirs. I've seen writers who are in perfect health update their stories once or twice a year, so the way I see it, at least I'm trying. I could easily upload some low quality crap that I wrote spur of the moment, but you guys deserve MUCH better than that! You've all supported me when I was sure none of you would want to read anymore and I appreciate that, which is why I only want to give what I feel is my best. Your feedback and views gives me life, so it's my duty to upload quality work. I apologize for my writer's block, really I do; I really am trying to find my groove again. I went into my archives and began watching old episodes of Flavor of Love, I Love New York, Real Chance at Love and For the Love of Ray J to get inspired again since this story is a parody of those shows. So if my best is not good enough for you or anyone else, then I completely understand if you stop reading. Au revoir.
Thank you Julie!
Date: Jun 02, 2014 08:54 pm Title: Episode 15a
Hey what's going on, is everything alright? Please update soon.
Date: May 24, 2014 06:32 pm Title: Episode 15a
Something really drastic has to happen for Valeria not to go home this episode. If she doesn’t go I give up and I hope Michael the best because she clearly does not know what is good for him. I am so happy right now because I know this bitch is about to get exactly what she deserves. Michael didn’t know about any of those things and I kind of felt bad for him because he was completely misled. No more of your bullshit Valeria you are done.
Date: May 24, 2014 06:01 am Title: Episode 15a
Valeria you are a fake punk as bitch that was never good from the start. You never were the independent woman that Michael began to fall for so now there is nothing left. What does he have to like now? The answer is absolutely nothing so I think that it is time you go home because you don’t need to be here.
Date: May 24, 2014 06:00 am Title: Episode 15a
Oh my goodness. These girls and their exes. Michelle was the fuck was that. You are supposed to be high class and hard to get and then this is what you been dating, scratch that this is what you were about to get married to. I know you like to dance but damn girl that man look like your damn daddy. Then Rocky, I don’t know what to say but you exe is a hot mess. I can’t wait to hear his interrogation because I want to know how the hell they got into a relationship. I also don’t think it is fair at all that some girls had their brothers come in because it is completely biased. Unless one of their brothers says something that by accident that is damaging to his sister. Please update as soon as possible.