Date: Jul 19, 2014 02:42 pm Title: An update is coming
happy one year anniversary. b25;
Date: Jul 19, 2014 10:26 am Title: Episode 16 part a
"Girl this is great, I am already addicted from just reading two chapters. I see this story is going to be hot!!!!!"
Gosh this was my first review of this story and I already knew this was going to be an amazing story just from two chapters. But back then I didn't even really comprehend all the drama that was going to go down and unfold and now today I can say that I am even more addicted then I was back then. I love this story and I love you as an author even more. You always respond to our reviews and you always work to give us the best story possible. Thank you so much. Happy one year anniversary.
Author's Response:
Wowwww that was my Lillian's FIRST review! Look at how far we've came, girl! I remember when I was updating every single day back in those days; definitely need to get back to that level. I am so glad you're "addicted" because I LOVE having you as a reader and I have no problem feeding that addiction! You've been here from the very beginning and have continuously come back to show your love and support and that means more to me then you'll ever know. Seriously!
Thank YOU for consistently being here, Lillian! :D
Date: Jul 19, 2014 10:06 am Title: Episode 16 part a
1 year anniversary...I can't believe it. I feel like it was just yesterday when I started this story. On this day last year you had zero reads, zero reviews, and zero favorites. And now a year later you have more than 13 thousand reads, over 700 reviews, and you are one of the top 10 most favorited authors on this site just from one story (all the others have various stories that allowed them to make the list). These accomplishments say a lot and most of all they say that your are a brilliant author with a true talent and it is something you should cherish and continue to do forever. This is your gift ad I TRUELY mean that, don't ever let this gift go.
Author's Response:
Yesss, girl, we've made it one year!!! We here!!! Thank youuu so much; you made me feel so good reading those stats. And I did not know that all the author top 10 favorited authors were from more then one story. That's good to know! I wouldn't have gotten this far if it wasn't for you dolls. Seriously. There's been times where I wasn't in the mood to write and then I came here and you gave me the fire I needed. I'll come online to read your reviews and I'll get turnt up lol.
Thank you again lover! I will never let this gift go! :D
Date: Jul 18, 2014 09:50 pm Title: Episode 16 part a
Haha I just realized you had Iggy in your story before she went mainstream
Author's Response:
Yay, I was wondering when someone would notice! I lovvve Iggy Azalea, I've been listening to her for years and I'm so glad she's finally finding success.
THANKS FOR READING AND COMMENTING!!! :D
Date: Jul 18, 2014 08:19 am Title: Episode 16 part a
So glad Michael and Mari are back on cause I thought that the situation was going to ruin them. I thought Lionel was gonna come back and make things worse but no he did the opposite.
When Michael started the water balloon fight I was like finally. They were at Neverland all this time and no one got wet...well some people did (Ava). It has been so long since we have seen this side of Michael in the competition. He has been so focused dealing with people's bullshit and I forgot Michael had a fun side.
Damn, Sasha is hating so hard in this episode and I was like bitch calm down don't forget what happened last time you let your jealousy get the best of you. All I know I that with the two Michelle haters in the house (Sasha and Ava) there is gonna be some serious shit talking on the way home with all the girls when Michelle ain't there.
Author's Response:
Yes, Lionel gave us all a surprise. He knows that Marisela deserves happiness and though he's not jumping over the moon that she's dating his best friend, he'd rather her be happy and with his bestie than sad and alone.
Yes, girl, all this time at Neverland and no water balloon fight. Can you believe it? Michael desrves some drama-free fun right now and I'm glade he finally got it.
Sasha is a verrry observant person. Sometimes she watches a little too hard and it lands her into trouble (like in the last episode when she thought Beatriz was flirting with Michael). Yes, Sasha and Ava both feel threatened by Michelle, and are not happy that Michael chose to ride home with her.
THANK YOU PYT!!! :D
Date: Jul 17, 2014 07:35 pm Title: Episode 16 part a
Hi, my name is Diamond & I just joined this site as a member but I've been reading your story for months and I am honestly blown away. It's so realistic & I always look foward to seeing you update. this is the best story I've read on here & I love how you show your appreciation! I have to say Michelle and Rocky are my favorite. I like Sasha (a little) but I wish her jealous ways could stop. I can't wait for them [ Michael & Michelle ] to talk & for Laurent to come back! I am SO glad Valeria is gone. she was not to be trusted. you are not supposed to put your man's business out there and now she's FINALLY got the boot for it. God bless doll.
Author's Response:
Oh wow I have another Diamond! Lol I have another reader named Diamond too! WELCOME HONEY!!! I love new readers and I want to thank you for taking the time out to read my [sometimes] ratchet little story. I LOVE hearing who your favorite girls are in the house! It gives me lots of direction. In the beginning, when I had so many characters, I never knew who's POV to write from (I would literally have to toss a coin) so hearing your favorites lets me know who I need to feature more.
THANK YOU DIAMOND!!!
Date: Jul 15, 2014 07:46 pm Title: Episode 16 part a
I don't know if anyone else realized this but the 19th is gonna be the 1 year anniversary of the story....WOW...look how far this story has come. I remember last summer I came to this website as a brand new reader not knowing what I would find. I remember reading some things and thinking to myself that some stories were dumb ass shit and basic as hell. And I remember thinking I was wasting my precious time. But then I came across this story and I remember thinking it was something different. And then as I kept reading this story I became addicted and here I am almost a year later still feeling that same feeling when I first began to read this story. You amaze me.
This update was too good. It is nice to see Michael's playful side again after such a long period of seeing Michael constantly stressed with the girls bull. But what the fuck, are Ava and Sasha getting along a little bit..what the fuck. Update ASAP.
Author's Response:
MY DIAMOND!!!!
Your review made me tear up, girl. Literally, the first time I read it, I had to get a tissue. Well... a couple of tissues hehe. I want to thank you so much for sticking with me throughout everything. This has been a CRAZY year and you've been here for every step, encouraging, motivating, and making me LAUGH MY ASS off every step of the way! I love you Diamond, I truly do.
Yes, I missed seeing Michael's playful side. It's been dorment due to the girls and their damn drama but now it's back in full effect. Yes, Ava and Sasha actually shared a joke at Michelle's expense. You know what they say... "the enemy of my enemy is my friend."
THANK YOU DIAMOND!!! :D
Date: Jul 15, 2014 07:32 pm Title: Episode 16 part a
YESSSSSS!!!! My boy Laurent is coming back. I was wondering when he was coming back. These girls better watch out cause Laurent as always is gonna keep it real, and now more than ever since they are his top 5. This update was like a breath of fresh air. No more Valeria, Mari and Michael's drama has simmered down, and a old classic Neverland water balloon fight. Couldn't have gotten better. I can't wait for the next update. Also you truely deserve every review you get, 800 here we come!!!
Author's Response:
YASSSSS, girl, I love Laurent and I'm so glad you do too! With all the drama in the last episode, Laurent needs to come back and show his ass.
Yes, Mj couldn't let the girls leave without getting them wet ;) in a classic water balloon fight.
Haha, that "800 here we come" just gave me SO much LIFE!!!
THANK YOU SPICY!!! :D
Date: Jul 15, 2014 06:47 pm Title: Episode 16 part a
It is good to see that Mari and Michael are finally moving on and getting over that whole Lionel situation cause the longer they were holding on to it the worse it was getting. And it is so refreshing seeing everyone getting along...for the most part, and having fun. All there has been in the house was drama and it is about time everybody let loose . This seriously was like the perfect way to move on after Valeria's elimination. She seriously was a drag on the whole atmosphere in the house. Well damn, I actually dont blame Sasha for being mad when Michael asked Michelle to go with him. I would have been pissed off too, but I know that it is her best interest to back the fuck out cause her ass was almost eliminated for her jealous behavior.
Author's Response:
Girl, yes, Michael and the girls needed a break from the drama. Even writing the scenes became a bit draining, just because it was beginning to feel like a soap opera. Now I love my Young and the Restless just like anyone else, but that's not what I envisioned for this story, chile. People like to call Flavor of Love, I Love New York and shows like it "ratchet television" (and it is) but it was also a reprieve from life and that's what I want this story to be--somewhere you can come to and laugh and forget your worries.
Valeria has taken her negative aura with her, and Michael and his girls can let lose and have fun without her insecurities getting in the way.
THANK YOU BABE!!! :D
Date: Jul 08, 2014 08:33 pm Title: Episode 15d Part 2 ELIMINATIONS
Are you updating anything 2night?
Date: Jul 08, 2014 08:32 pm Title: Episode 15d Part 2 ELIMINATIONS
Are you updating anything 2night?
Date: Jul 08, 2014 07:55 pm Title: Episode 15d Part 2 ELIMINATIONS
700 views girrrl, you are toooooooo good!!!!! I love ya!!!!I am gonna hate it when this story ends, I cant believe there a few more episodes. This story has come a long way and so have you. Despite your sickness you continuously amaze us with your gift of writing. I am proud of you, keep it up.
Author's Response:
YASSSSSSSS, THANKS TO ALL OF YOU AND THE REST OF MY LOVELIES!!! MUAH MUAH MUAH!!!
Date: Jul 08, 2014 07:54 pm Title: Episode 15d Part 2 ELIMINATIONS
I wonder if Michael will tell any of the other girls that he loves them because he keeps saying how he is really feeling them and how he has deep feelings for them but never says anything beyond that. I have an idea of how he feels about every girl but his actions like when he ices people out or like when out of nowhere he takes someone’s virginity are throwing my head in a loop and confuse me on knowing what he is feeling.
Author's Response:
You never know... It's the top 5 and Michael has feelings for all the girls. I really wanted our Michael to reflect the real Michael, and from what I've heard and seen, Michael had a temper on him. Not the yelling, violent kind of temper, but the type to ice you out and be through with you. I vaguely remember Kathy Hilton (Paris Hilton's Mom and one of MJ's friends) saying that she upset Michael some how and he didn't talk to her for like two years--don't quote me. And I've read similar accounts like that. My point in saying all that is that Michael didn't always give a reaction and as a result could be a hard person to read when he wanted to. Lisa Marie, herself, said that the reason she filed for divorce from Michael was to, basically, get a reaction out of him. So with that said, I think the girls (sans Michelle) are feeling the same way you are, in terms of wondering just how deeply Michael's feelings run for them. So far we know he's head over heels in love with Michelle and that he was on the VERGE of falling in love with Valeria (which is why it took him so long to get rid of her). Could Michael be falling in love with any of the other girls? I think so *wink*. We'll have to see who else has captured Mikey's heart.
THANK YOU HUN!!! You made a wonderfully good point! Gah, this is why I love reading yalls feedback so much! You make me think! :D
Author's Response:
You never know... It's the top 5 and Michael has feelings for all the girls. I really wanted our Michael to reflect the real Michael, and from what I've heard and seen, Michael had a temper on him. Not the yelling, violent kind of temper, but the type to ice you out and be through with you. I vaguely remember Kathy Hilton (Paris Hilton's Mom and one of MJ's friends) saying that she upset Michael some how and he didn't talk to her for like two years--don't quote me. And I've read similar accounts like that. My point in saying all that is that Michael didn't always give a reaction and as a result could be a hard person to read when he wanted to. Lisa Marie, herself, said that the reason she filed for divorce from Michael was to, basically, get a reaction out of him. So with that said, I think the girls (sans Michelle) are feeling the same way you are, in terms of wondering just how deeply Michael's feelings run for them. So far we know he's head over heels in love with Michelle and that he was on the VERGE of falling in love with Valeria (which is why it took him so long to get rid of her). Could Michael be falling in love with any of the other girls? I think so *wink*. We'll have to see who else has captured Mikey's heart.
THANK YOU HUN!!! You made a wonderfully good point! Gah, this is why I love reading yalls feedback so much! You make me think! :D
Date: Jul 08, 2014 07:34 pm Title: Episode 15d Part 2 ELIMINATIONS
Marisela got problems. She was acting all crazy like a psycho side bitch and I was like girl come down. She was so naïve back then and it was so weird because I wasn’t expecting her to be like that. I was expecting her to be her chill self but no she slapped him. I was like damn watch out.
Author's Response:
Yes, Marisela was a completely different person back in the day. She's come such a long way, and it is because of this relationship that she refined her ways. In her defense, she was drunk when she got violent with Lionel. She'd been drankin *singing Beyonce*, she'd been drankin... lol. Damn song stuck in my head.
THANK YOU!!! :D
Date: Jul 08, 2014 07:32 pm Title: Episode 15d Part 2 ELIMINATIONS
Who is Rocky and why is she in the house again. I don’t know about everyone else but she just got to where she is by coincidence. Michael thinks she is a beautiful girl, but what else. If she does let her presence be known she isn’t going to make it.
Author's Response:
Rocky and Michael actually had one of the strongest connections initially. She was the first girl to greet Michael when he pulled up to the house the first time and the first to kiss him on the lips out of all the girls. She stayed in the top five through a lot of the competition. However, she's allowed herself to fade to the background and as Michael develops strong feelings for the other girls, Rocky's light becomes dimmer and dimmer, and it doesn't seem like she's doing much about it. Frenchie better step it up!
THANK YOU, BABY!!! :D