Date: Jul 24, 2014 06:27 pm Title: Episode 16 part c
Ugh, that is not a good look. Rocky you are to pretty to be smoking and the more she does that sensual voice she has is gonna be no more. You better find a new way to calm your nerves and you not do any schemes, that shit aint cool.
Author's Response:
Girrrl, Rocky's info causes a lot of drama in the next episode. However, she also gets to spend some quality time with Michael too.
THANK YOU, PRETTY!!!
Date: Jul 24, 2014 06:25 pm Title: Episode 16 part c
The title “Don’t Stop Till You Get Enough” really is fitting to the story. Michael clearly does not stop till he gets enough because he is all over Ava. I was like shit Michael how much pussy licking you gon do. He ate that shit like it was dessert.
Author's Response:
Haha, yasss, girl. Michael loves his pussy. He deeply dug in!
THANK YOU, BEAUTIFUL!!! :D
Date: Jul 24, 2014 06:19 pm Title: Episode 16 part c
Damn Ava is crushing these challenges, two in a row. I have to be honest even I under estimated her cause she always seemed to take a step back, but now near the end where everything you do matters she is stepping up. If I were Rocky I would chill because most of the time when you try to take someone else down, you tend to really only take down your own damn self.
Author's Response:
Yes, girl. Ava was the underdog in the house and now she's Michael's top girl. The other girls don't know what to think. This wasn't expected so they've basically been knocked under her feet. Taking someone down is a NASTY business. The blasians were the queens at it and even they eventually knocked themselves out.
THANK YOU, PASSION!!! :D
Date: Jul 24, 2014 06:14 pm Title: Episode 16 part c
How can she use this to her advantage, in my opinion it is more like a disadvantage. First, hearing Michael pleasing another girl must be very discourage and it probably made her realize she is far from number 1. Second, there nothing shecan do with this knowledge that won’t completely destroy her relationship with Michael and ruin the trust that Michael may have for you. She better be careful because its top 5 and you can’t be playing these games anymore, its time to be serious.
Author's Response:
Hey, Dariah!!!
Rocky's info definitely causes drama in the house, just not the way anyone expected.
You're exactly right. Giving your virginity to someone is an extremely big deal, especially for a girl like Ava, and Rocky knows that, so now she's feeling like "how do I compete with?" This may be the fire she needed lit under her ass. She's never had to be the one to pursue the man, so this is new for her. Hopefully, she doesn't get herself eliminated in the process. The road to hell is paved with good intentions.
THANK YOU, BEAUTIFUL!!! :D
Date: Jul 23, 2014 12:17 pm Title: Episode 16 part c
If they were up on the balcony they would have saw Rocky and her enormous smoke cloud, right? But wait then again they probably were too focused on what they were doing to even know she was walking around below them. Clearly Rocky will be showing her sneaky side but hopefully it won’t get her sent home because that would be a shame. But I hope Sasha is involved in the argument because I want her ass to be told off, she just gets on my nerves and I am glad Michael did not like her nasty lobster shit.
Author's Response:
Hey, MiMi!
Good point! They were up on the second level and it dark; Michael had his head in between Ava's thighs and she was high in a completely different world lololol. Rocky's info causes drama in the house, but she goes about it the smart way.
THANK YOU, MIMI!!!
Date: Jul 23, 2014 12:13 pm Title: Episode 16 part c
Damn Michael put in some work, the girl is still in pain. But I aint surprised because MIKEZILLA aint for no virgin. I was thinking this episode so far is so good, nothing could go wrong but then Rocky had to come out from her smoke cloud and hear Ava and Michael getting down. Oh shit something bout to happen.
Author's Response:
Hey, Julie!!!
Yes, poor baby's still sore days later. MIKEZILLA aint no joke! I'm sooo glad you're loving this episode. I was second guessing this one, but your reviews let me know I'm going in the right direction. Lmao@ "...Rocky had to come out from her smoke cloud"
Rocky's info definitely causes a stir in the house.
THANK YOU, JULIE!!! :D
Date: Jul 23, 2014 12:08 pm Title: Episode 16 part c
If you have recently lost your virginity and experiencing pain, soreness, and weakness call 1-800-Jackson. Dr. Jackson
Author's Response:
LMAOOOOO@ 1-800-Jackson.
Something tells me we need to make our appointments now before he gets booked up into the next decade!
THANK YOU TWYMMF!!! :D
Date: Jul 23, 2014 12:04 pm Title: Episode 16 part c
Ava is a lucky bitch. I’m not even in the competition and I am hating. Fuck you Ava, stop fucking my man. :| Get yourself an ice pack and sit the fuck down.
Author's Response:
Lmao Ava's is very lucky. You're not alone, beauty queen! I'm jealous of my own character! Lol
THANK YOU, HUNTI!!! :D
Date: Jul 23, 2014 06:52 am Title: Episode 16 part c
Please, Please, Please!!!! Rocky keep you mouth shut. Don't say shit! Although you really might want to say something, don't because we all know what happened to Valeria and don't think that won't happen to you. But from what is looks like Rocky is about to do something and it is about to go down.
Author's Response:
JanelleMarie, baby!!! I'm interested to see how Rocky uses this information. Her information definitely causes a stir in the houses but not in the same tacky fashion as Valeria :). THANK YOU, DOLL!!! :D
Date: Jul 23, 2014 06:01 am Title: Episode 16 part c
Two dates in a row, what the fuck? Ava is truly winning right now and the others girls need to watch the fuck out. I don't know how Rocky is going to use this to her advantage, but hopefully she don't put they business out there because that will get her sent home real quick. But then again Michael needs to be more careful because doing it on the balcony of a house where a bunch of girls are living is way too risky. He need to keep that behind closed doors because this is like the second time they have gotten caught. First Michelle caught them and now Rocky. Although the girls need to watch out for Ava, Ava needs to watch out for the other girls because she is about to deal with a house full of haters.
Author's Response:
Yes, girl, Ava is WINNING *Charlie Sheen voice*. She's one of the girls that Michael's closest to right now. Michael definitely needs to be more careful. Yes, it's a competition, but all the girls have deep feelings for him so they don't need to see that.
What's interesting about Ava is that all the girls underestimated her. Sasha and Rocky were telling her to step her game up and now that she's Michael's top girl, they're looking like they don't know what hit them. They better come with it.
THANK YOU, CHANEL!!! :D
Date: Jul 23, 2014 05:28 am Title: Episode 16 part c
Damn, Michael sure does know his pussy. When Ava was all hesitant and would not let him see I was like "BITCH!!!! Move your used to be fat ass to the side so I can get mine checked!!!" I don't mean to say I am a hoe or anything but if he asked to see my punani, my legs would have been opened so far so quick. I am honestly amazed by everything Michael can do, He really is so talented. SINGER, SONGWRITER, ACTOR, PRODUCER....PUSSYOLOGIST. Damn what's next.
Author's Response:
Diamond my Diamond!!!
LMAO, yes Michael knows his pussy very well. Lol@ "BITCH!!! Move your used to be fat ass to the side so I can get mine checked!!!" I bust out laughing so hard at that!
I know you're not a ho, girl. Whoever says they wouldn't spread their legs for MJ is lying (kidding, not kidding) lol.
LMAO@ PUSSYOLOGIST!!!
Love you, girl! THANK YOU!!! :D :D :D
Date: Jul 22, 2014 10:55 pm Title: Episode 16 part c
Right when I thought all the drama was slowly fading this happens. I can't believe it, they were caught red handed and now Rocky knows for sure that Ava gave him her virginity which is a big slap in her face and everybody else's face in the competition. Seriously how can you compete against someone who has given that up. I don't know what Rocky is going to do with the information, but I just pray to god she don't blab it out like Valeria.
Author's Response:
Exactly. Giving someone your virginity is a big deal, especially for Ava's who's basically the good girl in the house. Rocky and Michelle knows this is a big deal and are feelng the exact way you described. Like, "how do I compete against that?"
THANK YOU BAD!!! :D
Date: Jul 22, 2014 05:49 pm Title: Episode 16 part b
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT. Michelle what the hell are you doing. Them cookies look like the traveled from hell and back. When I read the part when her cookies were served, I seriously jumped back from my computer and out of my chair, I could not believe it, what the fuck.
Author's Response:
OOH SHIT is right, hunti! Michelle needs to stay far far far far FAR away from the kitchen.
Sorry I'm just now responding. I missed this review somehow. Love you, MiMi!!! :D
Date: Jul 22, 2014 05:47 pm Title: Episode 16 part b
*new reader*
Wow this story is great, I have just read this whole thing in like one day non stop and I can't get enough this it is so fucking amazing. I read that it was your one year anniversary so congratulations about that. What impressed me so much was your ability to develop each character , because with so many people in one story it is hard to portray and define everyone's character but you did that very well. I do write myself, not mjfiction but I do write and I am vey impressed with your ability to do that so well. Thanks for this fantastic story.
Author's Response:
I love new readers! WELCOME, BEAUTY QUEEN!!!
Sorry I'm just now responding. I missed your review along with a few others. I have no clue how that happened!
Thank you so much for giving my ratchet little story a chance and leaving me with your thoughts. I love hearing what you guys think, who your favorite girls are and what you like/don't like in the story. It's impacted this story SO MUCH!
Thank you Passion!!! :D :D
Date: Jul 22, 2014 05:38 pm Title: Episode 16 part b
Everything is back to normal. First Mari and Michael dealt with their issues and now Michelle has dealt with her issues with Michael. So nice to have the drama simmer down. When reading this update I was really happy with the way things were looking in the house until Michelle made them cookies. I was sick to my stomach thinking about them. Michelle don’t ever cook again.
Author's Response:
Yes, this episode is more of a resolution episode. Valeria has left and took a lot of the drama with her! This episode, you'll see a lot of making up between Michael and the girls.
And yes, chile, Michelle needs to stay as far away from the kitchen as possible.
Sorry so late, love. This was one of the reviews I missed :-/. I don't know why I'm just now seeing it. Know that I appreciate you, baby doll! Muah!!! :D