Date: Aug 06, 2014 06:35 pm Title: Episode #1 Part a
I didn't say this in the last review but I hope that you're okay. I realize you have a lot of things to take care of & I know you've been through a lot! best wishes. (:
Date: Aug 06, 2014 04:18 pm Title: Episode 16 part c
Hope everything is alright, haven't heard anything from you in a bit. Are you okay?
Author's Response:
I'm sorry, love, I didn't mean for you to worry. I finally got to go on a much needed vacation; when I returned home, however, my internet was being mean to me :(. It's still not working, so I'm at the Barnes&Noble using their wifi connection. Love you, hun! Another update tomorrow!
Thank you, GiGi!!! :D
Date: Aug 05, 2014 07:24 pm Title: Episode 16 part c
Hey, it's been awhile since the last update, I have been so anxious to see what happens next and I am hoping you will update soon.
Author's Response:
Hey, girly, I just updated for ya! Another update tomorrow!
Thank you, gorgeous! :D
Date: Jul 30, 2014 05:57 pm Title: Episode 16 part c
I can't wait for another update. I am on edge, haha. I literally check everyday to see if you've did one. I feel as if what Rocky might do could get her eliminated and I really hope that doesn't happen but we'll see.
Author's Response:
Just updated for you, mami! Another one will bere tomorrow!
Love ya and thanks for reading!!! :D
Date: Jul 28, 2014 07:01 pm Title: Episode 16 part c
Is another update coming soon? I am literally going insane, I've gotta see what Rocky is gonna do. Shit bout to go down. I love it. :D
Author's Response:
Hey, Julie!!!
I just updated! Sorry it took so long. I went on an overdue vacation, but now I'm back. My interenet has been mean to me for the past week since I came back so now I'm at Barnes&Noble's bumming off their wifi.
Shit is definitely about to go down.
Thank you, babe!!! :D
Date: Jul 25, 2014 02:14 pm Title: Episode 16 part c
Michael is about to spend time with Sasha and Rocky. That sounds interesting to me because they were the girls he left on that dates he had with them. And they both are hating on other girls and are not at the top right now. Something about to get started.
Author's Response:
Something definitely gets start in this next update I just added. Michael hasn't spent time with Sasha and Rocky lately and he can't send them home without getting to know them better, so he takes them out in this next update.
Thank you, baby!!!
Date: Jul 25, 2014 02:09 pm Title: Episode 16 part c
Damn Michael, putting it down on the balcony. I wish I was Ava, but I know paradise don’t always last that long. And from what it looks like Rocky is about to mess things up.
Author's Response:
HAHA I love your name!
Yes, Michael and Ava were definitely in their own world out there on that balcony. Rocky steps it up in the next update.
Thank you for reading, love!!!
Date: Jul 25, 2014 11:57 am Title: Episode 16 part c
I was thinking that Rocky was going to win, but no Ava won and I was like damn Rocky needs her time. I know now she is about to get desperate because if she wasn’t desperate then this thing would not bother her.
Author's Response:
Yes, Rocky definitely needs more time with Michael and they both know it. He doesn't want to send anyone home just because he didn't get to spend enough time with them and get to know them better, so he takes Sasha and Rocky out.
Thank you for reading, dawling!!!
Date: Jul 25, 2014 11:48 am Title: Episode 16 part c
Rocky is gonna get herself eliminated. This is not a way to step it up, it is more like a way to step down. If knows what is best for her fate in the competition it would be to focus on your own relationship with Michael.
Author's Response:
Hey Meagan!!!
Rocky's information definitely causes a stir in the house.
THANK YOU, MEAGAN!!! :D
Date: Jul 25, 2014 08:37 am Title: Episode 16 part c
Really Rocky, really? You should know very well that schemes don’t work in the competition. They always backfire every time. There is a difference when you have a piece of information about a girl that doesn’t involve Michael to when it doesn’t. It is okay when you call out a girl for her own bullshit, but when it involves Michael it is best you just leave that alone.
Author's Response:
Rocky knows she needs to step her game up; hearing that, lit even more fire under her ass. Hopefully she doesn't send herself home in the process of stepping her game up.
THANK YOU, PRETTY!!! :D
Date: Jul 25, 2014 08:34 am Title: Episode #1 Part a
HAHAHA Ava was fooled, if a man who is not a real doctor ask to see your lady parts it is most likely not to make sure you are alright. Only “unexperienced used to be a couple days ago virgins” would fall for that. And when she saying she could not handle it I was like girl stop acting. Even if I were in pain I would not give a damn, I would just give all up for him immediately.
Date: Jul 24, 2014 06:46 pm Title: Episode 16 part c
Michael might as well have been fucking Ava on the kitchen table cause that was risky as hell and they got caught. All Hell is about to break lose, and I need to go get my popcorn and drank ready.
Author's Response:
Hey, Marina!!!
Yes that was very risky. You are RIGHT, honey! All hell breaks lose in the next episode.
Love ya, Marina!!! THANK YOU, DOLL!!!! :D
Date: Jul 24, 2014 06:41 pm Title: Episode 16 part c
Checking to see if her pussy is alright…yeah right Michael, you knew what you were doing and you damn sure were not looking to see if she was alright. Gosh Michael keeps getting freakier and freakier I sweat. But hey, I aint complaining. That freakier the better.
Author's Response:
Hahaha, Michael's a pussyologist now. Michael is definitely a freak!!!
THANK YOU, DOLL!!! :D
Date: Jul 24, 2014 06:37 pm Title: Episode 16 part c
OMG MICHAEL IS SOOOOOOO SEXY. THAT WHOLE SCENE ON THE BALCONY GOT ME FEELING SOME TYPE OF WAY. UGH MICHAEL, I LOVE IT. MICHAEL IS A FREAAAAAAAAAK!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
LMAO! We're just going to refer to that as the "balcony scene" from now on. I'm so glad you loved it, doll!
THANK YOU FOR REVIEWING, HUNTI!!! :D
Date: Jul 24, 2014 06:31 pm Title: Episode 16 part c
If there is a girl stealing your shine the immediate reaction is to do something about it, but then it should cross your mind about whether or not your choice of action is going to jeopardize your position in the competition. I hope rocky really thinks about that before she does something she is going to regret.
Author's Response:
Rocky knows she needs to step her game up, so in this next update we see her take the necessary steps. She knows she can't be like Valeria and blurt out Michael's business, so she goes about it a different way.
THANK YOU, BEAUTIFUL!!!