Date: Sep 02, 2014 08:16 pm Title: Episode 17 part b
Sorry I haven't written a review, I have been reading updates but I just haven't had a chance to just sit down and write review cause moving into college has been a pain in the ass fo real. But anyway, Ava is acting like a real bitch messing with Michelle like that and then had the nerve to be all worried about her in front of Michael. Bitch you know you cause her to act that way so stop playing. But anyway, Michael is in some deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep shit right now because the families are here and I am sure there are going to be some members who don't want there daughters dating the King of Pop and don't want their daughters face on every mother fucking magazine out there.
Author's Response:
I hope you have a wonderful semester, darling! I remember you telling me you were settling back into the college style a year ago. We've come so far!
Ava's sneaky side is definitely coming out. Before she was a wallflower, but being with Michael has allowed for her confidence to blossom. She has an idea of how Michael and Michelle feel for one another, so she's taken it upon herself to let Michelle know that she's not Michael's top girl anymore. She truly believes that she is the one for Michael now, whereas before she was just going with the flow.
You're exactly right. Some family members aren't phased by him being the King of Pop. He still has to prove himself and show why he's good enough to date their daughter/sister.
Thank you, girl! Again, good luck and God bless with your studies :D
Date: Sep 02, 2014 08:14 pm Title: Episode 17 part b
What? Sasha weren't you packing your shit, why did you decide to stay. I really can't understand why she can't get it through her thick head of hers that Michael does not want her. If he wanted her he would not have reacted the way he did when she told him she loved him. She needs to recognize that she is no where near close to then top right now.
Author's Response:
Hey, Julie, my Julie. Sasha knew good and well she wasn't going anywhere! She was just being a drama queen. She wanted to test Michael to see if he would stop her, but as Marisela said, MJ was not here for her bullshit. Michael likes her, but he's not here for the dramatics and the further she acts like a drama queen, the further he pulls away. Thank you, Julie!!! :D
Date: Sep 02, 2014 04:12 pm Title: Episode 17 part b
Really? Did Ava just really confirm to Michelle what has been going on in the bedroom. I know that Michelle sort of already has a sense of what was going on but damn, seriously. Whether people know or not, you should still keep your mouth closed, that is just a common rule a person should follow if you are in Michael's life. Hopefully nothing else happens to make people suspicious because Mike and Ava are really are skating on thin ice.
Author's Response:
Yes, girl, Ava confirmed it. Michael confirmed it for Michelle as well when they had their talk during the last episode, so she knew. I don't know what Ava hoped to achieve by bringing that up other than rubbing it in Michelle's face that her pussy was poppin' and Michelle's wasn't lol. Thank you for your review, Cheryl!!! :D I love having you as a reader.
Date: Sep 02, 2014 04:09 pm Title: Episode 17 part b
Bringing a bunch of families together is supposed to be a positive thing, but it never turns out that way. I hope Michael knows what he is putting himself into
Author's Response:
I foresee a lot of family drama ahead :). Thank you babydoll!!! :D
Date: Sep 01, 2014 08:58 am Title: Episode 17 part b
Dang at Ava lying
Author's Response:
That's exactly what I did when I saw this review! Was this inspired by the Miss Jay gif? Lol I remember watching that episode live and being like ooooooh! lol Thanks for the review, gorgeous!
Date: Aug 30, 2014 10:05 pm Title: Episode 17 part b
can't wait for all the families to put all their thoughts in. just wanted to say I love this story more & more! you're amazing at what you do! love ya. :D
Author's Response:
Thanks, love!!! I'm so glad you love this story; another update will be here no later than tomorrow! And I love you more, Diamond! :D
Date: Aug 30, 2014 07:32 am Title: Episode 17 part b
Seriously Sasha, you think your confident. Girl please. Jeaously is a form of insecurity and bitch you are always jealous of everybody. All that confident queen shit that you said was a straight up lie. Michael send that bitch home. He was completely right when he said that she would stress him out. Please Michael don't let her bull shit talk confuse you, send her over dramatic ass home.
Author's Response:
Very good point! If she's as confident as she says she is, why is she so jealous? THANK YOU GIGI FOR REVIEWING!!! :D
Date: Aug 28, 2014 03:22 pm Title: Episode 17
I really really hope michelle wins overall shes the realest out of all the girls and the best overall for michael <3
Author's Response:
I'd have to agree with you on your character assessment on her being the realest :D. I thought of Iggy Azalea when you said that lol.
Thank you for reading, sweetie!!! :D
Date: Aug 27, 2014 06:12 pm Title: Episode 17
Great chapter! Ava getting sneaky and it seems like Marisela is falling off. I wanna see what the parents and siblings have to say lol
Author's Response:
Ava's the worst kind of "sneaky." She's soft spoken and sweet, so when she stings you, you never see it coming. Michelle is very perceptive, however, so we'll have to see what happens. The parents and siblings are coming in the next update!
Date: Aug 20, 2014 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 71
YESSSS!!! You're back, all this time I have been thinking of a million ways this competition could end and damn I must say I am driving myself crazy. I mean damn I even came up with a scenario of how Sasha could win...now I know I'm trippin. Glad ya back.
Author's Response:
I'm bacccccck! Lol just updated for ya. Another one will be here tomorrow! Love ya, babe!
Date: Aug 18, 2014 07:14 pm Title: Episode 16 part c
Please come back this week!
Author's Response:
I'm back, babe!!! lol :D
Date: Aug 15, 2014 11:52 am Title: Episode 16 part c
I can't wait anymore I need this story, please come back, I'm begging you.
Author's Response:
The wait is anymore, hun! Love you!
Thanks so much reading!!! :D
Date: Aug 12, 2014 02:31 pm Title: Episode 16 part c
Can we get an update tonight? I've been missing this story really bad. :(
Author's Response:
Just updated for ya, Passion! Another one will be here tomorrow!
Thanks for reading! :D
Date: Aug 11, 2014 01:14 pm Title: Episode 16 part c
Everything OK? I've been checking for this story non stop, please come back soon.
Author's Response:
Just updated for ya babe! Another one tomorrow!
Thank you for reading, hun!!! :D
Date: Aug 09, 2014 01:33 pm Title: Episode 16 part c
It has been a minute since the last update, I hope to hear from you soon. All love :)
Author's Response:
I just updated, babe! Love you!
Thanks for reading! :D