Date: Mar 12, 2014 11:01 am Title: Better Than Divorce Court
Dude wtf is Michael hiding? I wanna smack his narrow ass. After all the shit she's been through with her wack ass husband, I'll be damned if she walks right into another pitiful ass relationship. She deserves better! She needs to tell Michael that whatever he's hiding that if it comes out havin to do with another woman, she will leave his narrow ass. She better get some damn self esteem. It's about time she stood up to Adam. Can't wait til that divorce is final. But she needs to get on Michael's skinny ass.
Author's Response:
Oh you know how men are...lol I'm happy you're so into the story! thank you for reading :)
Date: Mar 12, 2014 07:38 am Title: Better Than Divorce Court
Also I love your name ofniceandpens is that like "of mice and men" like the band or like the book :D
-Kunda
Author's Response:
Like the book!
Date: Mar 12, 2014 07:36 am Title: Welcome to the Neighborhood
I'm not gonna lie this is one of my all time favorite stories. Been waiting for an update for a minute lol. You are a fantastic writer, I love this :)
I'm Kunda by the way, you can check out my stuff too if you want and give a beginner some pointers cuz you're le bomb ;p
Author's Response:
Oh my god thank you thank you thank youuu. It's so weird that people actually wanna read something I wrote. I will definitely check it out when I get some time!
Date: Jan 08, 2014 09:27 am Title: Hard Working Woman
Chile.. Imma need for Carolina to stop with the Adam and Michael comparisons. She needs to hurry up with this divorce. Maybe then these damn comparisons would stop. And lol at her boss!! I surely hope she won't be doing anything strange for some change. And it's sad that every time Michael is being nice to her, it's not believable. Lol oh well. I just feel that he's hiding something.
Author's Response:
Yeah, she's insecure sooooo. thank you for being a sweet angel and taking time to read and review! :)
Date: Jan 02, 2014 05:16 pm Title: Too Fast
Well damn! I still feel like they need to talk. The sex is a temporary bandaid. Michael is wrong as hell for not talking to her for days, it was just handled poorly on both ends and it makes me question their relationship. And now Michael claims he loves her. I don't believe his skinny ass.
Author's Response:
Yeah definitely never believe a boy that tells you he loves you and tries to take off your pants the next second. Actually don't believe any boy ever. thanks for reviewing! Please keep reading. <3
Date: Nov 13, 2013 07:58 pm Title: Bitten by the Bug
They sure argue about a whole lot of nothing. I agree that Michael should've told his manager where the fuck to get off. Yeah she's not officially divorced yet but who really needs to know that? She's already sacrificing to be with him. The least he could do is take her out. Now on top of that, he's taking giraffe ass Brooke shields. Just an all around mess. He doesn't need to be an asshole about it. Smh he's going to end up pushing her away. They are both acting poorly at this point. He's forgetting that yes, she's a newly divorced woman which means just as quick as he snatched her up, somebody else can too.
Author's Response:
Omggg I love reviews where you guys actually talk to me. But yeah they fight a lot because I wanted them to be mean little shits with strong personalities. They need to be too stubborn to see their own problems. Thanks you for reviewing and please keep reading it. I hope you like it!
[Report This]Date: Oct 12, 2013 07:35 pm Title: Over
Hello! New reader alert :) I love this story! I remember you saying that it was ok to hate Carolina at first but I immediately liked her. I can't blame her for having this attitude when her life is miserable. I have to admit, I was so surprised by Michael's character. He is so blod, but I love it! It's great to see him like this and not as an over sensitive man child for once :) I am very curious to know where this story is going. I wish Carolina would kick Adam in the balls for hitting her! Or Michael would! Or better, Andy!
Good job! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response:
I sorta appreciate that you actually like Carolina when I expected literally everyone to hate her. Thanks for giving so much feedback. I'm really happy you're reading. :* <3
[Report This]Date: Oct 08, 2013 07:56 pm Title: Welcome to the Neighborhood
Hey girl! I'm a new reader, I'm Sammi, and I'm 18 from NZ :) and I just wanted to say your story is seriously something. I've just spent most of the day readng it all so far, I love your style of writing and your humor in the story is seriously exactly like mine! "You're in a shitty mood. What happened? Did they close Disney World?" I was laughing my ass off when I read that, no joke. Update soon babe hehe xoxo
Author's Response:
Heyyyyyy Sammi! I'm Alex! Thanks for laughing at my jokes. We're immediately friends now that you think I'm funny. That's it. You do not have a choice. And thanks for reading!!
Date: Oct 08, 2013 04:26 am Title: Over
I loves it, more soon plz!
Author's Response:
thank youuuuuu. you're A1 Day 1. So faithful with the reviews boo. <3333 hahaha
[Report This]Date: Sep 21, 2013 10:30 am Title: Welcome to the Neighborhood
So I just started reading this and I'm all caught up now. I really appreciate the uniqueness of this story. It's interesting seeing the development of the characters. You've created a very different Michael than most other stories, which I think is a real treat.
You've done a great job with this so far. I hope you update soon.
Author's Response:
Reviews like this make me so happy thank youuuuu
Author's Response:
Reviews like this make me so happy thank youuuuu
Date: Sep 03, 2013 01:20 pm Title: Altercations with Adam
You see this is one of the MANY reasons why I love Michael.
LMAO, "Are u callin me a bitch!"
Date: Sep 02, 2013 04:06 pm Title: Altercations with Adam
She just needs to leave Adam already. Enough with the damn excuses. There is no real reason for her to still be with him. He's hitting her now. And I'm pretty sure he's cheating or will be soon. The longer her dumb ass stays with him, the more she deserves whatever he does to her. Stop being a fuckin idiot and LEAVE girl! She's making too many damn excuses for me and it's annoying as hell.
Author's Response:
lmaoooo girl she did leave him thanks for reviewing!
Date: Aug 25, 2013 04:39 pm Title: How Lying Works
Gurl this was a reaaaal good chapter, good job. More soon plz! ....
I juss about fell out my chair wen I read Adam checked his breath wen Carolina pushed him away from the kiss .. *inhales big breath* AHAHAHAHAHAHA, DAAAAYYYYYMMMMMNNNN. Youz rly have me trippin n ev'ry chapter.
Author's Response:
Lmaooo thanks boo!
[Report This]Date: Aug 25, 2013 03:14 pm Title: How Lying Works
This story is good. I feel bad for Carolina
Author's Response:
Thank you sweetheart! Please keep reading!
Date: Aug 21, 2013 03:58 pm Title: Wake Up
Lol, gurl u had me trippin.. "YOUR SON SURE LOVES IT!"
Author's Response:
Haha Carolina is so gloomy I feel like I have to make jokes somewhere. Bless you for laughing at something I said. thanks for reading. :*