Date: Feb 26, 2015 11:16 am Title: After Dinner Car Ride
Michael is hilarious 😂😂😂
Author's Response:
I'm trying with his character! thanks for reading!
Date: Feb 26, 2015 11:07 am Title: Welcome to the Neighborhood
Her husband makes me want to vomit at the spot! Lmaoo talks to her like she's four!
"Nothing got him off like the idea of making money. If I ever found lingerie made out of hundred dollar bills, he cum right at the sight of me."<<ROOOLLIN
[Report This]Date: Feb 26, 2015 10:17 am Title: After Dinner Car Ride
Gawd! Although it takes you forever and a day to post, everytime you post I am just as excited as the first time I discovered the story... this story is everything. I wish there were more writers like you.
Author's Response:
Are you trying to make me blush?! Thank you so much and I know I take so long to update and I honestly don't have an excuse but thanks for staying faithful lol
Date: Nov 09, 2014 09:14 pm Title: Dinner Party
So glad the dinner is going well. I wonder what Adam has to say
Author's Response:
Well now you can find out because after 20 years I finally updated thank you :*
Date: Sep 26, 2014 09:27 am Title: Waiting Game and Ice Cream
You have interesting dialogue. I'd love to hear more about the scene, so as to help me come up with a visual. What are they wearing? What was his car? What did the ice cream parlor look like?
Author's Response:
thank youuuu for the tip dear i'll try harder :)
Date: Sep 26, 2014 09:19 am Title: Playdate
The only thing that threw me was why they were eating pizza at 9am. Did it suddenly jump time? I'd have loved to hear more of their conversation
[Report This]Date: Sep 26, 2014 09:11 am Title: Awful Advice from Andy
Please update, I read fast ;)
Damn, Adam is dense. As if Michael doesn't have his own chef!
Date: Sep 25, 2014 08:32 pm Title: The Dinner
You are off to a great start. I definitely want to read more and almost skipped leaving a comment because I was so eager to get to the next chapter :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2014 08:28 pm Title: Welcome to the Neighborhood
Creative and spunky start!
Date: Jul 09, 2014 08:12 pm Title: Bliss of Solitude
Lmao Mike aint going to that dinner
[Report This]Date: Jul 09, 2014 08:05 pm Title: Bliss of Solitude
oh no she trippin lol michael can not go!
[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2014 11:45 pm Title: Thriller
These two are so funny and cute. Love it please continue.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm happy you enjoyed it!
Date: Jun 15, 2014 08:21 pm Title: Thriller
Loved it. So cute at the end
Author's Response:
Thank you thank you thank youuu. I was worried about getting too sappy.
Date: Jun 12, 2014 06:30 am Title: Birthday Fun
please continue. and please make mike feelin' jealous to carolina, idk why i loved the way mike feel jealous
Author's Response:
lmao thanks. please continue reading :)
Date: Mar 16, 2014 02:55 pm Title: Welcome to the Neighborhood
I hope that Michael isn't hiding anything bad! I'm going to stop reading this story if Michael is cheating on her haha! no but really, she divorced her man because of Michael, he can't throw everything away! She deserves better! and I hope that Michael really loves her and didn't just say it.
Author's Response:
Well they might be running into a few problems sooner or later...lol Thank you for reading!