Date: Jul 29, 2013 09:19 am Title: Chapter 4: The Deal
Isabella gurl BIG mistake!
Pplz really kills me wit this, u see yo mate cheatin n you get mad at da other person ... most of the time its somebody u dnt even knw. (Its understandable if u do knw the other person) but
Look itz like this,
She's not the one that promised to never do u wrong... ur husband is.
She's not the one you gave love to... ur husband is.
She's not the one that's been constantly lying about her whereabouts... ur husband is.
She's not the that looks u in da face everyday and smiles yet doin da dirty behind ur back... ur husband is.
MOST OF ALL,
She's not da one u should be angry wit... UR HUSBAND IS!
Date: Jul 13, 2013 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 4: The Deal
Smh at daniel's wife calling him. " He'll never leave me for a tramp like you. " Then how come he basically had sex with her like 100 times. But anyways i hope she's done with daniel. He's probably gonna go crawling back to her. And oohhh, i cant wait to see this deal.
Author's Response: Thank you<3
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2013 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 4: The Deal
A deal is a 'Deal'...goodluck to them both
Author's Response: Thank you <3
Date: Jul 13, 2013 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 4: The Deal
Wow.. Let the games begin chile!! Smh at Daniel's wife calling Bella. Yikes. Didn't think that would happen, but I'm not surprised though. I hope she's done with Daniel's trifling ass. Ugh. Anyway the deal has been made now. I can't wait to see what happens. Since Isabella is single, she can date more than one man at a time. I don't think she'll have sex with them all but as far as dating, I think it'll be fun. Mike seems flabbergasted that a woman isn't being all clingy with him and only wants one thing from him. Lmao oh yes this is gonna be interesting. Bella probably plays the game a lot better than he think he does.
Author's Response: Haha, yeah you're right about that. This story is about to get verrry interesting. Keep reviewing love, its awesome <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2013 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 1: Michael, The Jerk
Heyyyy:) I'm In The Mist Of Writing A New Story And I Was Wondering If I Could Use You as My Main Girl. Cause You Are One Of My Main Supporters, So I Want To Use You As My Main Girl!! Please Let Me Now As Soon As You Can, Cuz I Want To Update It Today!!! P.S. I Love This Story Update Soon!!!<3
Author's Response: Sure, I'll be your mane girl
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2013 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 1: Michael, The Jerk
Heyyyy:) I'm In The Mist Of Writing A New Story And I Was Wondering If I Could Use You as My Main Girl. Cause You Are One Of My Main Supporters, So I Want To Use You As My Main Girl!! Please Let Me Now As Soon As You Can, Cuz I Want To Update It Today!!! P.S. I Love This Story Update Soon!!!<3
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2013 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 3: We Meet Again
Aylwin
Author's Response:
Haha, Thanks <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2013 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 3: We Meet Again
I Love The Chapter Girly, Please Update Soon!!!<3
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2013 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 3: We Meet Again
I Love The Chapter Girly, Please Update Soon!!!<3
Author's Response: I will :) thanks <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2013 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 3: We Meet Again
It's going to be interesting to see which one of them falls hard for the other first but in the mean it looks like there's going to a lot of hot sex. Hopefully Michael won't be an ass and give Isa and orgasm cause he did that girl in the first chapter wrong.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review <3
Date: Jul 12, 2013 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 3: We Meet Again
Oh lawd. This is gon be good! So she's a homewreckin ho and Michael is just.. A ho. Lmao lawd! This is priceless. So she's basically gonna use him for what he's worth. I wonder how he will feel about that. She's gonna want him only for the sex as a way to get back at Daniel and it'll buy her some time until he gets divorced (which I doubt he will). A lady player.. I like it. Continue! Mike will get a taste of his own medicine.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review, it is funny lol. You basically said the truth bout these two. <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2013 02:11 am Title: Chapter 1: Michael, The Jerk
Your first chapter is a BANG! However sweetheart I got dizzy reading it. The words are all on the right side of my screen. Anywayz...continue with this. I'll reserve my opinionated review if you give me more juicy chapters like this...
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review <3
Date: Jul 11, 2013 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 2: Womanizer Meets Isabella
Great chapter I like how mysterious Isabella was.
Author's Response:
Thank you. <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2013 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 2: Womanizer Meets Isabella
Hahahahaaha to bad Mike didn't any from this spicy one. Lol good story looking foward to more updates!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your review
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2013 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 1: Michael, The Jerk
OK I'll make a couple, it's Michael in the BAD era and Shakira right?
And is Michael famous in the story or not? <3
Author's Response:
I thought dangerous era. Cuz of my banner i made, it said the michael pic was bad. Im confused lol. And ni Michael's a normal person