[Report This]Date: May 12, 2011 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 19
Omg I loved it I can't wait for an update im so excited to read what happens next!!! I got super happy when I saw you posted a new chapter!!!! Loved it!!!! Michael needs to just tell her how he feels already & that he wants to be with her cuz even though he tells her he likes her it's not enough he's only adding to her insecurities!! Anyways can't wait to read the next one :)
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2011 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 19
i love this story
i hope she lets mike explain, i mean she did see Alice kiss him first
can't wait to read next update
Author's Response:
Thank you :) x
[Report This]Date: May 09, 2011 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 18
yay!!! I'm so happy you updated!!! I love the tone & vibe of this story so much!! I love how real there emotions are & how wonderfully your able to write them! I hope that they can stop being a afraid insecure & shy & finally tell each other what they really want cuz they are so cute together!!! but the bit of drama does make for a great story! :) can't wait for an update from this story!!!
Author's Response:
Aww thank you, so glad you like it so much :) xx
Date: May 08, 2011 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 18
Hey I just wanna say that I think this is an AWESOME love story! You totally made it realistic with how the characters think and act! And you didn't have them start having sex and making out by the first chapter, you actually let the relationship start out as a good friendship and the build up from there. Awesome job. I have read it at least three times. And Michael in this seems just like Michael in real life. One exception though, I never really pictured MJ being that outgoing, he was maybe a little bit more shy than that. Even in a deep friendship he might be a little quiet. But either way its hard to write such a long story about Michael frickin Jackson falling in love, and I don't think anybody could have done it better than you. I am looking forward to the next chapter (if you plan on writing one). Rock on and don't stop 'til you get enough. Luv from Frigg and Gemini (my dog)
Author's Response:
Hey Frigg :) So glad you like it! Yes I think it's really important to keep it realistic.. in relationships you need to build a foundation etc. Yes I try to keep Michael true to what we know about him, and yes, I think he was very shy in real life. I just wanted to bring out a more outgoing as you say side of him because maybe he might have been more confident around friends? I dunno, it's hard to get right because of course we can't know everything.. even after watching probably every single Michael jackson footage ever recorded on youtube! Anyways I'm so glad you like it, and I think you'll find lots of other stories you like on here that similarly don't jump in too soon. One of my favourites is "Back To You" by SweetSeducingSighs. Yes, I will be writing more chapters of course so stay tuned. Aww Gemini is such a cute name for a dog! Haha. Lots of love xxx
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2011 01:42 am Title: Chapter 18
Love it! They need to go puplic already, everyone knows they are meant to be together haha :) just make it offical :) cnt wait for the next part
Author's Response:
I know they keep beating about the bush don't they! Haha, thanks for the review! xx
Date: May 07, 2011 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 18
love this I hope they can get it together
Author's Response:
Glad you like, thanks for reviewing! xx
Date: May 07, 2011 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 15
HAHAAA! That was the I just can't stop loving you one! My spanish is goooooood! (no not really i just know tidbits, but HEY! You get my point.)
Author's Response:
Haha well done ;) Thanks for reviewing! xxx
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2011 12:08 am Title: Chapter 17
I love this story :D! haha the party was really well written. I knew someone would want michael & her to kiss haha cnt wait for the next part :)
Date: May 05, 2011 12:04 am Title: Chapter 17
Ohh damn they gone get caught with this secert whatevr they got going on.
[Report This]Date: Apr 24, 2011 02:47 am Title: Chapter 16
Lol they way they act together theres like no way they can hide their love for one another haha they are just the cutest :)!! I loveee this story! Keep up the great work
Author's Response:
Aww I always love your reviews :) Thank you xx
[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2011 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 16
this story is so great I'm always waiting for an update!! I love how much Michael likes carla I think it's just the cutest!!! & I also love how she teases him!! I just love this story, can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much :) xx
[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2011 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 16
Lol i wear heels to school... But i dont look like a slut lol. Great uppdate cant wait for the party. :)
Author's Response:
Haha I'm sure you don't :) Thanks for the review, means alot xx
[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2011 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 15
loved it. At first i forgot about this story but when i seen it i was like yay im about to finish reading it lol
[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2011 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 15
Omg this story is just so freakin cute! You capture everything perfectly and i love the way you express there emotions thru movement and words. Your a wonderful writer! Keep up the great work :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :) x