[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2013 09:53 am Title: Chapter 85
OH MY FUCKING GOD ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME?!! THERE'S JUST TOO MUCH GOING ON I CAN'T HANDLE THESE EMOTIONS JKSDHASDVSDFFDH OH GIDEON.
Author's Response:
HAHA! Stay alive the sequel is online haha :D
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2013 07:59 am Title: Chapter 83
oh god, i would love to read Michael's POV! great idea :D can't wait for the third partttt!
Author's Response:
The third part is online and it is called "Hang on to your love" :) Thank you for ther review, the rate and the support bb :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2013 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 85
Oh, wow! I was right in guessing that Gideon is Kalli's brother! But the story took such a dramantc twist! This is why Kalli needs bodyguards to protect her and her family. Oh my god Michael is going to freak out thinking something happen to Kalli! He'll never let her leave the house alone after this and if she has any sense she wouldn't want to either. And poor Liu, everything was hurt starting for her and Gideon's relationship, smh. I hope he'll be ok and won't stuffer from any major complications.
My god! This is going to shock the hell out of Kalli's family! Lukas is going to be so jealous because Gideon already spends more time with Kalli than he does. I just realized that if Liu and Gideon get married then Liu and Kalli will be sisters!!! Yeessss! Dream come true. So he has to survive this horrible accident now. I'm so looking forward to the next sequel just to see where the story goes now.
Did I mention that once again you have surprised me Annie? First in Poetic Justice and now this drama filled ending to Your Love Is King. Your imagination is limitless, lol! Thanks for the shout out and I'll see you in the sequel (and other stories)!
Author's Response:
Yes! You guessed it! I was getting worried that nobody was suspecting it lol. And like you said, I left plenty of clues :) Kalli will never be able to go out without bodyguards. She needs to get used to be Michael's wife. She is "famous" know. And you're right when you said, she'll be afraid to go out by herself.
Let's pray that everything will be ok for Liu, her baby and Gideon! This man saved Kalliope's life :o
"My god! This is going to shock the hell out of Kalli's family! Lukas is going to be so jealous because Gideon already spends more time with Kalli than he does"
LMAO! I have to write a scene about it :D!! YAAAASS, to Kalli and Liu being sisters! That's so cute!! The new sequel is up and it is called "Hang On To Your Love" :D
"Did I mention that once again you have surprised me Annie? First in Poetic Justice and now this drama filled ending to Your Love Is King. Your imagination is limitless, lol!"
THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!! I am so happy you liked this story. I hope you'll love the new one :D
Date: Sep 27, 2013 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 85
GIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIRL!!!! this chapter killt me! U ain't a good writer...u a good ass powerful ass writer!!! I hope Gideon stays alive omg he's her sister!!!?!!
Author's Response:
Thank you
The sequel is online and it is called "Hang On To Your Love" :D
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2013 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 84
Maybe if Michael planned their honeymoon on private property then the pictures wouldn't have been taken. As matter of fact for now all their vacations should be taken on privately owned land that they can have the kids with them too. God knows that Michael knows people who let him vacation in their islands, homes or countries.
Kalli is never going to be able to vacation like regular couples. So she better get used to it for now on.
Author's Response:
Michael should have known better :/ Thank you for the review and the rate :D
Date: Sep 27, 2013 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 85
Ok I'm back.. I am still speechless! I am so glad Kalli is ok! She does NOT need this kinda shit while she is pregnant! I can't wait til Michael hears of this. If we thought he was overprotective before, that man is gonna have a damn fit!!! This totally caught me off guard. I just.. OMG. Kalli is definitely gonna need security with her now and I don't give a damn what she says. She needs protection! She is not just little Kalliope Suarez of Seattle anymore. She is Kalliope Jackson, the King of Pop's wife!!!!! Not to mention she's a mommy now. She needs to be around for her babies. That was too close for comfort. Thank God for Gideon! And omg.. Speaking of him, please let him be alright! I can't believe he and Kalli are brother and sister. That's crazy and amazing all at the same time. Now his baby with Liu will be her niece and they'll really be like sisters now. That's so sweet. Man, this chapter was complete over stimulation. I went through too many emotions at one time. Smh. OMG. I knew that man was a fuckin creep! I'm just glad Kalli and the baby are ok, and I need for Gideon to be ok as well. Michael needs to be notified immediately!!
Author's Response:
Hey Kat!! ;D I'm glad you're back to review lol ;) Fortunately, Kalli and her baby are ok. And Gideon, god bless his soul. He saved her life! When Michael hear the new, he won't let Kalli go out anymore lol. He will be pissed, scared and super angry!
I tried to leave some clues about Gideon being Kalliope's brother lol. Yes, he is! And like you said, LIU AND KALLI WILL BE SISTER
Gideon needs to heal now!
Thank you so much for this long review, just like I like it haha ;) I'm happy you weren't expecting this lol! The new sequel is online and it is called "Hang On To Your Love". Still naming the story after a Sade's song lol. See u there :D
Date: Sep 27, 2013 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 85
Omg!!!!!!!!!!!!? I have to comment later. I am too in shock.
Author's Response:
I can't wait for your reviewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2013 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 73
ahhhhhhhhhh OMG! One of my favorite chapters ever!! I kind of suspected something was up, but jsafnsjdsjdhvs that was too perfect. <3 I fucking love this story!!!
Author's Response:
Hello! I remember you! I left a review on "The Sweetest Gift" lol :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2013 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 73
ahhhhhhhhhh OMG! One of my favorite chapters ever!! I kind of suspected something was up, but jsafnsjdsjdhvs that was too perfect. <3 I fucking love this story!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review and the rate :D
Date: Sep 26, 2013 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 84
Awww how sweet. Hopefully things will be fine with Kalli working. I just hope it won't draw too much attention based on who she's married to. And if she's working with any men, especially attractive ones Michael is gon have a fit. Lol smh. But they're married now. Nothing can come between them. They've grown too much and come too far.
Author's Response:
Hey Kat :)! Thank you for the review :) I can't wait to see how Michael will be once Kalli gets back to work :D!! Last chapter up ;)
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2013 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 83
I'm so looking forward to the updates this weekend. I'll have something to read in between homework breaks.
I absolutely love the ideal of you writing the next sequel from Michael's point of view! I've been wanting to see you do this for forever now! The only thing that would make this better is if you did a side story of Liu and Gideon. Speaking of which I've been wondering for sometime if its possible Gideon could be Kalli's half brother? I feel like you've been hinting at it for a while now but maybe your saving that for the sequel?
Author's Response:
Hey Vicki! :) I'll try my best to update everything :D
Thank you! HAHAHA! A side story with Gideon and Liu would be hilarious! But you'll definitely read more about them with the omniscient's POV ;)
"Speaking of which I've been wondering for sometime if its possible Gideon could be Kalli's half brother? I feel like you've been hinting at it for a while now but maybe your saving that for the sequel?"
I can't say! :)
Thank you for the review and the rate :D
Date: Sep 25, 2013 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 83
Hmm depends on who the 3rd person is. But I definitely would love Michael's point of view! That'd be nice. We can see all his perverted thoughts and how much he loves Kalli. And see his jealousy firsthand too. Lol. Damn paparazzi!! Thought they were gonna ruin their time together, nope! They'll still do them, literally and figuratively.
Author's Response:
Hey girl :) Don't worry it'll only be Kalliope's POV, Michael's POV and an omniscient's POV. I think that will be great to know what DM thinks and the people round them :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2013 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 82
These two are too cute acting like teenagers on their honeymoon. I bet the neighbors really enjoyed their game of catch me if can, lol. Though I wonder if they know enough English to understand what was being said but they saw for their own eyes Michael Jackson chasing his woman around, lol.
Author's Response:
IKR!!
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2013 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 81
“I dare you to...” Michael rubs his chin “Go out and scream ‘Michael Jackson's Thriller is thrilling and took me to the max!’”
Lord have mercy, lol! Michael would go there, smh.
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Date: Sep 24, 2013 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 82
The caveman reared his head as I knew he would! Kalli knows how to get him each as every time chile. Lol I love it. We shoulda known that would end in sex too. As soon as she was about to strip for the neighbors, possessive caveman came out and literally dragged her in the house. Lol a mess. They're so cute.
Author's Response:
Kalli knows her man so well! She knew exactly what to do! New chapter up :D