Date: Jul 24, 2013 06:21 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Family Comes First: Part Two
Awe. <3 Please update this story soon. :)
Author's Response:
i'm working on the new chapter now! this one will be interesting.
:)
[Report This]Date: Jul 18, 2013 11:26 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Family Comes First: Part One
This is a beautiful story love it 100%
Author's Response:
thank you so much! new chapter should be up soon :~)
much love
Date: Jul 17, 2013 07:49 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Family Comes First: Part One
This was the most adorable thing I have ever read. They should hurry up and go to the hospital though, lol. I've been very anxious for your update, I hope you update soon!
Author's Response:
hahaha! sorry i didn't reply before i put the next chapter up. thank you so much, i'll try to update as soon as possible!
thanks for being a dedicated reader. love you ;)
Date: Jul 03, 2013 08:48 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Psycho
Update soon! :)
Author's Response:
I'm so sorry I haven't updated! I'm writing the next chapter now!
much love
[Report This]Date: Jul 03, 2013 05:13 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Psycho
Awesome sad but awesome...
Author's Response:
Agh I'm SO sorry I haven't been updating! I'll try to get something up tonight, promise! But thank you!
much love to you
[Report This]Date: Jul 03, 2013 05:39 am Title: Chapter Twelve: Demons Part Two
Poor Avery :( I wonder how Michael will react. Loving this story :D
Author's Response:
you'll see! i just updated the new (and quite long) chapter!
much love
[Report This]Date: Jul 01, 2013 07:44 pm Title: Chapter Twelve: Demons Part Two
I love this fanfic so much, update please!
Author's Response:
JUST updated! i'm sorry for the long wait!
Date: Jun 30, 2013 03:07 pm Title: Chapter Twelve: Demons Part Two
Update soon! Loving this story, I hope there are a lot more chapters to come. :)
Author's Response:
thank you so much! i found out who Avery is! one of the people who reviewed said her nams is Molly C. Quinn. :)
much love, new chapter coming today :)
Date: Jun 29, 2013 01:34 pm Title: Prologue
Omg I love this story so far!!!! Poor Avery though :( I think the girl that you have a picture of to play Avery in the biography is in the tv show Castle and her name is Molly C. Quinn. I liked how you picked her to play Avery too :D 😘
Author's Response:
holy crap you're right! THANK YOU SO MUCH! i've been trying to find that for FOREVER! and thank you! new chapter will MAYBE be up tonight. we're having a power outage so maybe not.
THANK YOU SO MUCH OMG.
much love
Date: Jun 28, 2013 08:24 pm Title: Chapter Ten: Under Oath
The part about Michael being horny and the "Debs" thing made me laugh so hard, lmao. Update soon! Did ya ever find out who the girl playing Avery was?
Author's Response:
i honestly couldn't stop laughing either as i was writing it. probably my favorite part so far. no i didn't find out! i keep trying to find out though!!
update coming tonight!
much love
[Report This]Date: Jun 28, 2013 02:09 pm Title: Chapter Ten: Under Oath
I Love it.... :)
Author's Response:
avery says thank you! ;). update coming in the next few hours!
much love
Date: Jun 27, 2013 12:14 am Title: Chapter Nine: Michael Jackson's Daughter
Awww!! So sweet I wanna die!!
Author's Response:
i know! michael's so adorable! don't worry, it only gets cuter. ;) new chapter coming tonight!
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2013 03:31 pm Title: Chapter Eight: Losing a Battle I Could Never Win
Wow... can't wait for the next chapter darling.
GO GO GO!
Author's Response:
writing it right now! it'll be up in the next hour. i'm happy you enjoy.
much love to you.
Date: Jun 26, 2013 01:18 pm Title: Prologue
omg is mj gonna die D:
Author's Response:
towards the end, yeah. it's gonna be tough to write about.
much love.
Date: Jun 26, 2013 07:19 am Title: Chapter Eight: Losing a Battle I Could Never Win
Lol! mature eleven year old! Can't wait for the next update
Author's Response:
hahah i know! i'm updating now, i've been updating a lot lately! i honestly love writing this, though, so i write a new chapter every chance i get :)