[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2013 02:36 am Title: Chapter Eight: Losing a Battle I Could Never Win
This is like so interesting. Ive been reading this for a while, trying to review, lol :-) I'm sorry I didn't review earlier, but I've been kind of busy. I just wanted to say this is a good story. I actually dreamt of it, after I read the third chapter. Weird, right? :p
This chapter was particularly sad. It almost made me cry. Im a sucker for sad stories. Lol.
I was wondering before, when will she get adopted by Michael? Doesn't make sense. But I understand it now :D I hope Avery can cope with it. She's only a child. She seems so mature for her age! I like it. Can't wait to see what'll happen next.
Much Love
Shiniee xx
Author's Response:
thank you so much! hahaha that's awesome you'd have a dream on it. yeah in the latest chapter the whole "jackson" thing ties together. that was my goal. it was really hard to write considering the amount of violence in it, and that an eleven year-old wass experiencing it. but i'm updating now! you'll see how avery copes in the upcoming chapter.
much love to you
Date: Jun 25, 2013 09:43 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Things Move Quickly
I can not wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
writing the next chapter now! it might not be up tonight though, we'll see. :)
much love to you
[Report This]Date: Jun 23, 2013 01:34 pm Title: Chapter Five: Tour #1
more i love it
Date: Jun 23, 2013 02:57 am Title: Chapter Four: The Truth
This story is so cute! I love your updates! Please continue ASAP...
Author's Response:
aw thank you so much! means a lot to me. chapter five should be up either very soon or later today. i'm busy today so i'm trying to get the chapter done now. :)
Date: Jun 21, 2013 04:37 am Title: Prologue
I loved it!! Great job on making it longer. :) can I ask who's the girl you're using for Avery now and Avery at five years Old? I know I've seen the girl before I just can't think of who she is, lol.
Author's Response:
honestly, i don't know! i found all of those pictures on google images.. but i am curious now to find out haha. i only know who Jake is and that's Guy Pearce. other than that i don't know the rest. i will try to find out, though, cause i'm now quite curious myself lol.. i'm glad you like the story! chapter three should be up sometime today :)
much love to you x
Date: Jun 20, 2013 10:45 pm Title: Prologue
I'm intrigued to read the rest
Author's Response:
thank you! chapter two was added! i might do chapter three tonight too, i've been on a writing spree lately. stay tuned and don't forget to leave comments.
♥
Date: Jun 20, 2013 01:15 pm Title: Chapter One: The Beginning
I'm liking your story so far, you should definitely start making the chapters a bit longer though. :) Update soon, girl!
Author's Response:
Thank you SO much! I noticed after I added the first chapter that it was a bit short. so i'll for sure make the coming chapters longer :). I plan on writing chapter two today, so stay tuned!
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