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Reviewer: glitterpix Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2013 09:03 am Title: Chapter 21: Father McCleary - Part 1

oh my gosh this is getting juicy :O not tht it wasn't tho i love it continue!

Reviewer: MJSHOTZWELL22 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2013 03:12 am Title: Chapter 20 : Creeping Towards the Truth - Pt2

ROXANNE! 

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Date: Jul 13, 2013 01:42 am Title: Chapter 16: And so it Begins

My dumb butt decided to read this at 3:00 in the morning and I'm now curled up into a ball, singing off key with Eddie. Lol,

Reviewer: angleindisguise Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2013 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 20 : Creeping Towards the Truth - Pt2

Yaaay mjs still gonna live

Reviewer: Ni-Ni Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2013 09:39 am Title: Chapter 20 : Creeping Towards the Truth - Pt2

I want to hit Lisa so freakin bad!

Reviewer: Ni-Ni Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2013 09:33 am Title: Chapter 19: Creeping Toward The Truth - Pt 1

Finally someone besides the gang notices something!

Reviewer: Ni-Ni Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2013 09:21 am Title: Chapter 18: Sweet Dream Or A Beautiful Nightmare

I would have just died seeing those bugs!

Reviewer: Ni-Ni Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2013 09:13 am Title: Chapter 17: An EVIL This Way COMES

Ahhh shiznit! His day is really coming close!

Reviewer: Ni-Ni Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2013 08:54 am Title: Chapter 16: And so it Begins

Well damn .!

Reviewer: glitterpix Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2013 08:12 am Title: Chapter 20 : Creeping Towards the Truth - Pt2

oh my gosh see i dont say omg anymore 

:P but dam 

Reviewer: Bubbles_Sparxxx Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2013 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 19: Creeping Toward The Truth - Pt 1

Woah two words scary AF!


#Damn

Author's Response:

Thanks sorry I didn't get a chance to welcome you to the fold but now this gives you the opertunity to get your hands dirty I'm asking my fans to go look at the new story concept and let me know what you think and if you want to contribute some thing to add to the drama of the story line do you want Michael to appear gentle bad or bad bad even thought as the story goes he won't be bad just observed that way which character do you like in the list and in your opinion how do you think they should act and so on 

Reviewer: angleindisguise Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2013 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 19: Creeping Toward The Truth - Pt 1

I like the fact that the other dead members pop up when they haunt someone and i really want to know y they were never saved from the curse and does mj die

Reviewer: angleindisguise Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2013 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 17: An EVIL This Way COMES

Yaaaaay lol

Reviewer: angleindisguise Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2013 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 16: And so it Begins

Yaaaaay its amazingly scary

Reviewer: glitterpix Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2013 01:44 pm Title: Prologue: Introduction

oh my god why lord why :O 



Author's Response:

there are no words nfor that none at all Don't forget to comment on the 4 new chapters

 

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