Date: Aug 09, 2013 10:03 am Title: Prologue and Chapter 1
This shit can't be good
Date: Aug 09, 2013 09:57 am Title: Chapter 56
Uh oh ... this does not sound good
Date: Aug 08, 2013 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 54
I'm excited already.. I really hope the baby is Michael's and I hope that Paris comes around to liking Lisa, but I doubt it'll happen lol.
Date: Aug 06, 2013 04:59 am Title: Prologue and Chapter 1
I team Paris I dislike Lisa not hate her but dislike.
Paris and Michael need to talk big time but he so fucking focus on Lisa like breath a little dude.
Author's Response:
Team Paris, I like that lol! Thanks for commenting :-)
Date: Aug 05, 2013 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 54
I think paris is being a little too hard on lisa and should at least should give her a chance. I really hooe the baby is his.
Author's Response:
Who knows maybe Paris will come around where Lisa is concerned. Thank you for commenting :-) Much appreciated!
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2013 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 53
I have to agree with Paris I think Michael would be happier with Leslie. Michael can't force Paris or Blanket to like to like Lisa Marie and the sooner he realizes this it would make their lives better. It's seems to me that Michael and Lisa Marie are so focused on being together that their not thinking about how this will affect their children's lives.
Author's Response:
This is true, they are being a little selfish right now...thank you for reviewing, I love to hear feedback!
Date: Jul 27, 2013 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 50
This story is so wonderful. I love the way that you have made this story original in the sense of the girls competing for Michael and the way that his eventual choice is a total mystery when most stores he always ends up with the new girl. I really like the sense of unpredictability like the cat fight in the kitchen. I really like your story and I can not wait for the next installment.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad that you are enjoying the story!!! Thank you for your kind comments!
Date: Jul 26, 2013 09:23 am Title: Chapter 49
Nooo michael!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2013 03:26 am Title: Chapter 49
Leslie makes good points concerning Lisa Marie and Michael. Both of their lives are a mess right now and as much as they want together it just seems as if they aren't meant to be with one another. Lisa should focus on getting her girls back and Michael needs to figure out who he wants Leslie or Lisa cause right now he's just messing with their feelings by not choosing.
Author's Response:
I remember when I posted this story on another site that there was an all out war Team Lisa and Team Leslie lol...things got vicious to say the least!
Date: Jul 25, 2013 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 49
Oh noo. Mike, how could you?! And Leslie knows he's in a relationship... But still, this story got even more interesting, lolz. I really want Michael and Lisa together. Update soon. :)
Author's Response:
Boy will be boys I always say lol
Date: Jul 23, 2013 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 48
I really hope Lisa speaks to him soon... She's the one I want him to be with.
Date: Jul 21, 2013 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 47
Update soon.
Date: Jul 16, 2013 03:28 am Title: Chapter 46
I Don't even see why Leslie is there, I mean I understand common Curtisy but still... Anyway, I'm already hating Lockwood and Pricilla. I hope she gets custody of her girls and Mike loses them..
Author's Response:
Why is Leslie around, hmm your guess is as good as mine, lol. I can only write what my muse tells me. But after hearing things Lisa, Shana, and some other things that people have said concerning MJ and the ladies its probably closer to the truth. When MJ was married to LMP he was audited by the Church of Scientology and when asked what his greatest weakness was and he answered, women....so maybe thats why Leslie is there :-)
[Report This]Date: Jul 15, 2013 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 43
I love this Story
Author's Response:
thank u i am glad u r enjoying the story!
Date: Jul 15, 2013 08:57 am Title: Chapter 43
Oh goodness I'm hoping this baby is his... Please update! :)
Author's Response:
LOL, I'll be updating when I get off from work :-)