Date: Aug 24, 2013 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 66
I'm loving this so much. Update soon :)
Author's Response:
:-) will do!
Date: Aug 23, 2013 03:29 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter 1
really good story
Author's Response:
Thank you very much :-)
Date: Aug 18, 2013 04:56 am Title: Chapter 63
Awww this story was trés beautiful XDXDXD XDXDXD thankyou XD XD:3
Date: Aug 18, 2013 04:56 am Title: Chapter 63
Awww this story was trés beautiful XDXDXD XDXDXD thankyou XD XD:3
Date: Aug 17, 2013 12:25 am Title: Chapter 63
I'm so happy that they ended up together. And I would to see a part 2.😊
Date: Aug 16, 2013 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 63
THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL!!!!! DEFENITELY A PART 2 ! :D <33333333
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comment I am glad you enjoyed it :-). Im going to go over part two and tweak it a bit, its two years old after all lol.
Date: Aug 13, 2013 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 61
Noooo, they where suppose to be happy together.😭 *says inbetween sobs* lol. Please update soon.
Author's Response:
lol just did :-)
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2013 10:29 am Title: Chapter 61
So the baby is Michael's but because Lisa saw him kissing Leslie she told him its not his and she broke up with him. Thank god that never happened in real life! Michael is wrong for kissing Leslie and Lisa is wrong for lying to Michael about the baby. And it took all of this to happen for Lisa to finally think of how it all effects her children, smh. I bet Priscilla will be happy about this out come.
Date: Aug 13, 2013 10:21 am Title: Chapter 61
Uh Oh :(
Date: Aug 13, 2013 01:54 am Title: Chapter 61
I still hope that baby aint Michael.
Michael.just ewww.
Date: Aug 13, 2013 01:52 am Title: Chapter 61
Yes im happy as hell. Michael got what he deserve now all we need is some action with Debbie.and Paris with him and im all good.
[Report This]Date: Aug 12, 2013 12:34 am Title: Chapter 60
All Joe Jackson wants is a nice BBQ with his family but it doesn't seem as if that's going to happen with everyone intent on attacking Michael. My heart breaks for Paris in these last few chapters, I just wanna hug her. She's loosing her family because of Lisa Marie, smh. I can't believe Michael just thinks because he doesn't want to talk about it everything going to work out.
Priscilla is crazy and needs to get a life. I seriously hope Joe and Katherine put her in her place if she act a damn fool up in their home.
Author's Response:
Its funny that you say that because this story has been finished since 2010.
Date: Aug 11, 2013 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 60
Girl you bettef be writting the next chapter cause im hooked hell this is gonna be a fight. Michael is just stupid.his dumb ass. Team Paris , Leslie.
This shit finna be so funny though. Also check out my story Not Easily Broken Not Without.A Fight we wont bring you down.
Author's Response:
Love blinds you sometimes what can I say lol...and no problem I will check out your story tomorrow after my PowerPoint.
Date: Aug 10, 2013 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 58
I wouldn't want to go either. I think that Michael should understand where Paris is coming from although it may hurt, Debbie is her mother, and she's not happy being around Lisa, I believe the best thing to do is let Paris go, or... he could just get rid of Lisa*wink*
Author's Response:
lol we will see.
[Report This]Date: Aug 09, 2013 10:28 am Title: Chapter 56
Don't leave me hanging! Who's the daddy?!
Author's Response:
You'll find out in the next three chapters...lol but with the revelation comes the end to this story.