Date: Apr 23, 2016 07:58 am Title: Chapter 5
Very descriptive
Date: Apr 23, 2016 07:54 am Title: Chapter 3
Nice way to put it.
Date: Apr 23, 2016 07:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Good start...
Date: Jul 01, 2013 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 5
Update soon! You should try making the chapters a little longer too, I like this story so far! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks hun, I'll work on it!
Date: Jul 01, 2013 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm gon beat you, I swear.
Author's Response:
What'd I do? Dang.
Date: Jun 29, 2013 12:05 am Title: Chapter 3
They should name the baby Whitley. Just saying.
Author's Response:
Lol, I'll take that into consideration.
Date: Jun 28, 2013 03:28 am Title: Chapter 3
awwww i want to know his reaction please next part
Author's Response:
It will be posted when I get off work :)
Date: Jun 27, 2013 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
this was reallly gooodd girl:DdD
Author's Response:
You think so? Thanks :)) Chapter 3 is up!
Date: Jun 21, 2013 02:25 am Title: Chapter 1
I hope Michael made breakfast in his underwear
Author's Response:
No, hooker.
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2013 11:37 am Title: Chapter 1
yes definitely continue!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I will :)
Date: Jun 18, 2013 09:03 am Title: Chapter 1
I like it! Chapter was too short though. However, if you're willing to keep going, I'm in. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm going to continue cause I have more than one part to this story :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2013 08:18 am Title: Chapter 1
It's good but the chapter is too short...
btw...She has my name...Adriana!
Author's Response:
Sorry! My computer is a bitch so I had to post as much as I could before the page locked me out.