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Reviewer: tiyacts11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2013 11:27 am Title: Chapter 9: Welcome to Hawaii - "We Both Know This is NEVER gonna Work Out"

Damn these two went all the way out. If Lisa ever finds out about this whole situtation, I know all hell is definitely going to break loose for real. Bring on the drama girl, im in for the roller coaster ride lmao. BTW I dont know why some of the readers on here are taking the story so serious is just a story. As I recall the site is called MJ Fiction, hence the word "fiction" lol. But girl keep doing what you're doing, you have amazing talent. I admire your originality and this stroy of course!! :) 

 

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2013 10:05 am Title: Chapter 9: Welcome to Hawaii - "We Both Know This is NEVER gonna Work Out"

love it

Reviewer: MJJApplehead Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2013 08:20 am Title: Chapter 9: Welcome to Hawaii - "We Both Know This is NEVER gonna Work Out"

ohhh yes atlast i hope tati & michael no! i mean tati & michael need 2 be & stay together, sorry lisa u had ur chance & u blew girl! u blew it lol mike & tati forever, anyway lisa can get wiv jermaine so she wont be completely alone lol michael & tatiana forever. great story keep it up!

Reviewer: CrazyForMikezilla Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2013 07:18 am Title: Chapter 9: Welcome to Hawaii - "We Both Know This is NEVER gonna Work Out"

Im not even going to complain anymore. Let michael have his ways. And let lisa have hers. Its pretty obvious he doesn't even give a fuck about her since hes fucking Tatiana. He just cares about the child. Way to go michael. I just knew her & michael wouldn't work out. I just know if she ever finds out what went on , pshh. She should take full fucking custody of those kids! Dont even tell michael what the HELL is going on. I just dont get it , While shes carrying YOUR child, It maybe nice to eventually work things out. But not cheating. If she ever finds its not even an option shell take those babies away from him. Sure she did wrong , Sure he doesnt trust her. But that doesnt mean you go out and cheat! Smh all of them are on my shitlist 

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2013 11:55 pm Title: Prologue: At the end of her Rope

Quench: girl stop! Lmao this is the last time I'm goin to address your touched self so you better comprehend real good. I was commenting on her in the STORY! You are fan-girling harder than she has been for damn near 30 years! Lmao I am crying laughing. Omg. And how the hell would you tell me what I know? Girl sit and seethe or whatever it is you have to do because you are sounding completely dense right now. I just can't. Tatiana has Stan's?? Lmfaoooo I'm howling. Like I said before chile, stick to writing and reading fan fiction cuz neither you or her are ready to face reality and what actually IS. I don't know who's more deluded, you or your girl. She had a chance to live her life and chose not to, please use yours. Let her serve as a lesson to you. If a man does not want you or actively pursuing you, MOVE ON! He's not worth it. Don't be 50+ still living in the past and let your life pass you by. It's not healthy boo. She is a good looking lady but she's a lost cause. Don't be her. 

Reviewer: quenchmydesire Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2013 11:39 pm Title: Prologue: At the end of her Rope

iam_music: once again. I'm not going to sit down so cut that shit. You just called Tatiana a hoe and a bony bitch or skinny ass or thirsty or whatever the hell and now your saying you have nothing against her and and your saying shes good looking and all that? Just because you may have been around at that time doesn't mean you know the story, because it's clear that you don't. But I also do think that she can go a little too far with the obsessing stuff, but then again if she wants to than she can. the fact that people judge her for that pisses me off and that's why I came to you. I think MJ had feelings for her at a certain point, Katherine (in the maury interview and at MJs funeral) said it, and so did Joseph. If she wants to keep living in that time then let her. Shit, I would too.

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2013 10:55 pm Title: Prologue: At the end of her Rope

Quenchmydesire; like I said SIT DOWN. I know the story. I know about the bootleg, fairytale, Harlequin romance books, hell I probably know more than you think I do. I remember when her delusional ass did Maury's show back in the day. Your ability to be objective is compromised because you feel sorry for this girl. And that's laughable to me. I wouldn't care if y'all talked on twitter or face to face over tea and crumpets. The fact remains, that you are angry over my opinion. Lmao at the entire post. Kids these days. Hilarious. Like I said, If you wanna cape for her, then shit.. By all means cape. Just don't come for my font/posts as if your opinion is going to mean something to me. I have nothing against Tatiana, I think she's a sweet woman and its a damn shame that she wasted her life obsessing over a man who clearly was not into her, unrequited love is a bitch. She's just sad because she's still obsessing over what could've happened and didn't. Shes a good lookin woman, she shouldve gotten married and had kids instead of throwing her life away. Hopefully she's still not selling MJ shirts cuz I would hate for Estate to go after her. 

Reviewer: quenchmydesire Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2013 10:37 pm Title: Prologue: At the end of her Rope

iam_music: Lmao quenchmyDESIRE - you must be hella dumb to be getting Michael's lyrics wrong. And no, I will not 'sit the entire fuck down'. I don't give a fuck about if i was born in the bad era (which i wasnt (; ) or not, i still know the real story of what happened between them and you CLEARLY don't. Look at your dumb ass spitting false shit about Tatiana when you don't even KNOW her. Did you know the kiss had absolutely nothing to do with her being fired? Did you know the kiss was planned? Of course you didn't. Listen I don't care if you like her or not -- the thing that's really pissing me off is that your spitting false and judgemental shit about her. Lmao callin' me little girl because I'm younger than you, girl please. And no, she was not an escort or prostitude. I'm talking about the other book she wrote, The Way He Made Me Feel. That explains everything along with the once more with feeling crap. I'm not gonna lie, I didn't like Tatiana at all before i read the book, but now look at me. I judged her and I had no idea who she was until I read her book. It made me cry.  Now, she's my inspiration and we talk on twitter often. Now I'm NOT saying you should go and buy that book, i'm just saying you shouldn't judge her when you have no idea who she really is. If Tatiana wants to be stuck in time, then let her. Listen I'm not gonna start more shit on canyoufeelit's page so if you're gonna reply to this then kik me at 2aibaajackson or something. 

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2013 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 7: My Wish Came True, Family Emergency... The Truth is OUT

Quenchmythirst or whatever the hell your name is, girl if you don't sit the entire fuck down! Lmao at you mad over MY opinion and take on this story. And in real life? Lmaoooo please tell us how you were there when Michael was giving a flying fuck about Tatiana after he threw her ass off the tour. Were you even born yet? lmao Was it before or after she wrote that tired ass book? That Once more with feeling bs. She was an escort or prostitute right? How pathetic to cape for a chick who's been obsessing over "what if" for the last 26 years. Stop the madness chile. If he wanted her, he would've been with her. Michael was his own man and his own boss. If he married Elvis in a wig and fucked with her YEARS after they divorced, what's this bird's excuse? lmao I can't with her writing books of fairy tales. Shana Mangatal had more of a relationship with Michael than Tatiana did. Stick to writing and reading fan fiction little girl. Stuck in the same fantasies she's been in since '87. 

Reviewer: True_Critic Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2013 07:45 pm Title: Prologue: At the end of her Rope

Now this story is right on the money!! I will read this to the end. You get 20 stars for this if that's possible.

Linking these two women together is epic in my opinion!

#Bring on the entertainment!

Author's Response:

Thank you... it happened as a fluke I want to do a stoy where Lisa got Pregant and I also wanted to do a song about an abortion and i felt it would be contovesial to between these two and tatiana was add as a last minute Idea I felt she would fit in the skem and I was shocked it actually worked ... hope to see more comments form you 

Reviewer: SineMj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2013 04:03 pm Title: Prologue: At the end of her Rope

LMBO "I’m not heartless you are the children’s mother and you can have full custody I would like to see them when I’m not heavily working and when they get older take them on vacation with me my only request is you keep them away from your family” Michael told Lisa that she could have full custody of the children, so there will be no need to sue him. Lisa can move on and find herself another Man(If she doesn't screw up a second time), Michael and Tatiana can do what they want. At least Michael is not being a dead beat father. I love it when men continue to do what they are suppose to do despite the mother. 

But anyway you said,"yes Pricilla and the whole Memphis clan are racist, her on aunt screamed at him when Lisa and Michael came with janet to the Elvis even in fron of a whole crowd of people calling him a child mosletor in front of the press, and you saw how pissed pricilla was at the fact Michael was getting more attention for being there with lisa then the whole damn EVENT." I'm curious is that something that you made up for the story or based on an actual happening, because I had been hearing something related to this story for some years but I ignored it.

Reviewer: melissmjj1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2013 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 8 when it all comes crumbling down

I just  love this story, please keep updating!! :) God bless you

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2013 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 8 when it all comes crumbling down

At the end of the damn day, two wrongs do NOT make a right. So fuck Michael and that bony broke ho Tatiana. I hope Lisa leaves his ass and takes the babies with her. I hope she sues his punk ass for full custody. 

Reviewer: SineMj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2013 01:45 pm Title: Prologue: At the end of her Rope

Lol I agree with quenchmydesire, Michael has every reason not to give Lisa another chance, to be honest I feel that Michael handled it better than I would have. He handled Lisa in a mature and respectful way. I probably would have walked out or started moving on with someone else without saying anything to Lisa. But he told her how he felt and handled it like a man, gotta give him credit for that. I happen to like Tatiana in this story, she's like SuperWoman for Michael, yea she made tiny mistakes so far but she's cleaning up Lisa's mess and that cancels out those tiny mistakes for me. I hope she makes Michael happy and Michael makes her happy, I can't wait to see how she makes Michael work for her. I would for once like to see Michael beg for the woman than the other way around. Lol



Author's Response:

Yes he does, YES THANK YOU he did handle it better then most, yes he did handle her in a mature and repectful way because he was 38 years old and she was 27 that makes a differnce in maturity level, yes he did handle it like a man when i invitioned that scene the first time he was supse to go off on her and take off but when I got to it and started getting into writting the scene I had to have it go down that way... it was his sympathy for her crying

yes she is cleaning up lisa's mess can you fault her for that when He is persuing her thaat is what he wants and she giving him that givng him more reason to not return home becuase she KNows how to treat him with the respect lisa did not the abortion should never have been a question and with tati he know it never would have been she doen't make him work to hard to long but she does resist

it's begging on both ends lol   

Reviewer: quenchmydesire Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2013 11:53 am Title: Chapter 7: My Wish Came True, Family Emergency... The Truth is OUT

Exactly. Thank God he found out, now I hope he leaves Lisa's sorry ass. Sure her mother may have been pressuring her to have the abortion, but if Lisa really loved michael then she would not have gone through with it. I say michael should file for divorce and him and Tatiana be together. & yes, Tatiana did nothing wrong! I'm looking at you, "iam_music" or whatever your username is. She may not have anything to do with the marriage, but there's nothing wrong with helping. It's not her fault michael still wants her, and it's obvious so get over it! Don't be mad because that's the truth, and it is in real life too (;

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