Date: Jun 13, 2013 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 12: Phone Calls, - I can't wait till we No Longer Have to Lie about us - Part One
PREACHHHHHH ITTTAT IAM_MUSIC & RYTHMCHILD!!! THANK YOU LORD JESUSS SOMEBODY AGREES WITH ME! Michael did play around ( not sex ) BEFORE! He knew about the abortion. I do feel bad for lisa since he first says hell try to work it out with her. He said it clearly over the phone. Then this nigga had the damn nerve to tell tatiana he can never forgive. WHAT THE FUCK IS THAT? Which fucking side are you on? Lisa or That bony ass ho tati? Obviously he must be fucked up in the brain because HES STILL FUCKING TATIANA!! Im so done with michael! I mean sure , abortion is wrong but she had no other choice because her mom would take everything away from her including her kids! I cant believe it. And lisa COULD call whenever the hell she wants! Its her husband but apperantly her husband is pretending to care about her & then Is fucking somebody else. GOOD GODD Oh you know what. Karma will come and bite him in the ass. When its all over the tabloids & Media saying tatiana ruined thie mirradge or something like that she & him wouldnt have damn normal fucking life. When clearly he doesnt even give a fuck about his wife & only the babys! Michael is at the TOP of my shitlist following priscillia & Tati.
Author's Response:
Yes MICHAEL did mess around BUT he was DRUNK BOTH times and when she kissed him and him having not had sex for weeks WAITING for Lisa's Obvulation cycle he was like a dog in heat and he was a bit easily pushed to do what he did in the cove, YES he took his but home and slept with his wife but he would have screwed anything does it make it right NO but he had extenuating circumstances
Michael is playing both sides sorry but it is the truth he has to keep his wife happy till he can officially file for divorce and he is only telling Tatiana the truth THOUGH he didn't tell her he was back with his wife when he left and went back but he was telling the truth about getting ready to leave her THAT was ALWAYS his plan from the poit he was in the car with her realising he wanted to be with her.
Who's fault would it be that he was screwed up in the head Lisa had the opertunity to stop it all in the begining but she lied if she had not LIED and been truth and HONEST he would have been MORE likely to STAY with his wife if she told him THE WHOLE TRUTH Tatiana HAS NOT lied so his HEART feels safer with her then his wife because SHE CAN'T seem to tell the truth.
YES lisa had a choice SHE made the choice to marry him against her mothers wishes Why not have the baby too that is what she turned around and did anyway, Yes he choose someone else but the leson is that is you can't have a baby to keep a man and you can't change a mans mind when it's made up.
Michael and Tatiana won't be liked for a while gues it's a good thing that michael Likes to keep his personal life private. but you never know what can happen just wait and see how it plays out
Michael cares about his babies and he cares more for his wife as a person not as a lover and wife anymore because SHE didn't think of him as a husband or lover when she laid daown and aborted there baby why she he care what she thinks as long as he cares for there children them as a relationship is pretty much a wrap and again a say EVERYONE is WRONG in this situation
[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2013 11:48 am Title: Prologue: At the end of her Rope
I'm interested in how this goes. As far as whether or not Abortion is right or wrong. There is a reason why it's controversial. I don't believe in abortion not for religious reasons but because I find scientists who say it's not wrong to be a little contradictory. I learned in Biology class that anything that, made up of cells, consumes nutrients, grow, and can reproduce is living. But the intetesting thing is they say well the fetus doesn't have a heart so therefore it can be considered living. but neither do cells. Cells don't have heartbeat yet scientist say they are living. and if a planet turned up with cells they would say that planet has life. So I perfer to stick to the simpler scientific approach and say that if it Grows, made up of cells, consumes nutrients, and can reproduce to sustain survival. It's living. But hey people disagree. I would have say that what made me even more against abortion is when a Pro-abortionist,tell that yes fetuses are living but they are just parasites. WHOA! Way to convince me. LOL.
As I said people are going to pick who they like according to their own priorities. I find what they are doing wrong. But I put Lisa above because she knew how Michael felt about Children and yet she did it anyway and then lied about it twice. in the doctors office, and when Michael confronted her, she lied to his face. I looked him in the eye and the lie was out my mouth before I could stop it, why couldn’t I just tell him the truth, that my mother made me do it, because I knew he may not accept it any better and this would cushion the blow “I’M NOT LYING!! The doctor told me when I went in that day that the fetus got trapped in the fallopian tube and if I didn’t abort it, it would rupture the tube and kill me” that lie rolled off my tongue so smoothly I almost believe it to be true” I feel that was worse than what Michael is doing.
I support him because the man endured pain from people hurting him in his daily life before Lisa came into the picture. The last thing he needed was for Lisa to add to it. I just feel that he could have reacted worse than he is now but he's not so I give that. Had Michael been like my Brother he would have blasted her on T.V.
Date: Jun 13, 2013 09:17 am Title: Chapter 12: Phone Calls, - I can't wait till we No Longer Have to Lie about us - Part One
I mean RhythmChild. Lol
Date: Jun 13, 2013 08:50 am Title: Chapter 12: Phone Calls, - I can't wait till we No Longer Have to Lie about us - Part One
It's a hot ass mess. Like Rhythm City said, I've had more problems with Michael's trifling ass than Lisa. I can't wait til all this blows up in his face. Lisa is being punished for a mistake she made, but Michael is STILL making his. Why crucify her when your ass is just as, actually MORE trifling at this point? Furthermore that phone shit is proof. You got the side ho thinking she's the main chick. Lmao that's an ultimate no no. And for Tatiana's ditzy, hoish ass to even ask why is she calling him, bitch that is still his wife and she's pregnant. She can call whenever she needs to, and that retarded ass phone trick is not gonna change that. Michael is going to reap what he has sewn VERY soon, and I'm looking for to it. If Lisa can prove his infidelity, does Michael really think the media won't rip his ass a new one? And even bigger than usual? And Tatiana's frail ass can forget it, she will never have a real career or be taken seriously because she will always carry the stigma of bein the side ho, and desperate slut who broke up a marriage. That's the way the media will spin that.
I actually hope Lisa has somethin up her sleeve when they go to court or whatever it is they're gonna do for the divorce proceedings. I say she needs to air his ass out, take her babies and let Michael and his ho suffer the storm alone. She really needs to start keeping track or hire a PI. Because airing out his infidelity in court would be the ultimate F-U.
Author's Response:
Michael and Lisa are a pair they are No longer in love they hold to much resentment for each other and all they want to do is be vengeful towards one another. it's funny you sound like he cheated on you but the Phone trick was a way of covering without getting caught and the reson she asked michael was because of the fact that he wasn't the type to slip up like that and have his wife call the condo she would call his cell or call the assiant and have it connected it STARTLED them both she called the condo she wasn't supose to call like that but after Michael called her she felt tracking him down wasn't a issue and Michael even asked when she called that he wasn't expecting her call
Lisa has to prove infidelity and then she acytually need to care enough to want to cause him that much pain in a divorce but you'll see what happens with that yes saidly Tatiana will have a hard time dropping that stigma but you'll see how that goes The media is tricky bastards remeber that and because of that it may work out in Michaels favor ONLY if you think about it this way, do you REALY think they want to portray him as headerosexual man that has sex and can get woman knocked up it slapps in the face the theory he's a pedofile and they CAN"T let that happen so what do YOU think they are going to do to cover there own asses
Lisa atually has a another BIGGER secret that will come out before the end of the story but you have to read till the end to find out what it is
[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2013 08:34 am Title: Chapter 12: Phone Calls, - I can't wait till we No Longer Have to Lie about us - Part One
I'm sorry, but now I have more problems with Mike than with Lisa.
Hear me out.
I believe in a woman's right to choose--if you know that you can't raise the child, or if having a child could kill you and/or the baby, and you believe you should abort the fetus, then you should ahve the right to do so. A fetus is like an egg--it could turn into a baby, but it's not. You're not murderring a child, you're stopping something from becoming a child. To me, there is a difference, and regardless of whether or not I would do it, I can't fult another woman for doing so.
THAT BEING SAID! I have a problem with a woman who does not inform the potential father of the pregnancy OR her desicion. Lisa not only kept the pregnancy from him, but had the abortion without him knowing either. When caught, the first thing she said was "It was eptopic!" Which is a lie! But then she finallly admitted the truth--that her mother is EVIL and blackmailed her into feeling like she had no other choice.
At least she ended up being somewhat honest. And she tried to have babies AGAIN because she really wanted to have his child.
THIS IS WHERE MICHAEL FUCKS UP. He was already doing the WRONG with Tati (kinda) before he knew about Lisa, so he's dirty too. He keeps fucking with Tati AFTER he finds out, but at least he tells Lisa it's over first. But THEN!!! THEN he pretends to reconcile with her for the babies, but is actually planning on divorcing her anyway! He's planning on airing HER dirty laundry for the court but he's trying to hide HIS!
His vengeful shit would be less disugsting had he not been doing the dirt too. So his actions to me are hyprocritical and nasty, and for that, I've got beef with Michael.
Lisa's already come clean. it's time for Mike to do the same.
Author's Response:
yeah Michael isn't Mr Perfect in this story
and I am Listening
But when it a situation when the woman does the abortion because she had NOTHING wrong with the baby then there is NO just reason for it and true ONLY it its a GOOD reaon for it but Lisa didn't do it for any of those reasons
That was a problem but she didn't tell him because she wasn't sure what to do and she would have had to double back her lie if she told him that she was pregant and then Lied about it then she would have had two lies she would have had to pretend she was pregant for a while while she tried to get pregant again see how much WORSE that would have been
Yes she told the truth out of fear of his anger to make it easier for her to say it that way hoping it would be better on him and he would be eaiser on her didn't really work
Well He's about preotecting his business and he had to keep her in his back pocket in order to sew up loose ends anf keep her at bay onhis side
Men do that shit I know my ex did he moved on before he left me and then when I found out I was PISSED and he tied to hug all over me like he was innnocent but he moved on in less then a week but I knew he was seeing that chick 3 months before we broke up so MEN do that shit
Men like to be the victim they will Never tell the truth
[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2013 07:07 am Title: Chapter 12: Phone Calls, - I can't wait till we No Longer Have to Lie about us - Part One
I like the phone strick but I hope lisa is okay, and deep in my haert t I want them back together
Date: Jun 12, 2013 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 11 What she Don't Know won't Hurt her
didnt Michael in real like stay at the towers
Author's Response:
he had a apartment in trump towers I can't remember where where I got the information but I know it to be true maybe VH1 faulous life but he had a apartent in trump tower weather it was the world towers not certain
Date: Jun 12, 2013 05:12 am Title: Chapter 11 What she Don't Know won't Hurt her
God i'm scared that michael won't have those kids at the end
Author's Response:
No Comment you just have to see how it turns out
Date: Jun 11, 2013 06:38 am Title: Chapter 10: Tying up Loose ends
omg the drama is so close
Author's Response:
just around the corner
Date: Jun 10, 2013 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 9: Welcome to Hawaii - "We Both Know This is NEVER gonna Work Out"
Lol at the bothered up in here off of a story and folks cant handle others opinions about the story and its characters. Fiction. Lmao too damn funny. Who knew my font would have folks so bothered? Bow down bishes! lmao Any whoo, not surprised at the turn of events. But hoes never prosper for too long. In the end once that image gets hit and the controversy spills over, all hell will for sure break loose. The drama is on and poppin.
Author's Response:
yes they are and yes it's funny but unless your the lord or jeus don't no body need to be bowing down to you, true there is always a consciquense for peoples action if there wasn't you would be interested would you lol, it most definatly is and you aint seen nothing yet
Date: Jun 10, 2013 08:42 pm Title: Prologue: At the end of her Rope
But you know what Lisa is in her own messed up for listening to her mother she is a grown. a**s women!
Author's Response:
EXACTLY she never had to listen even if she made the apointment all she had to do was cancel it and tell HER HUSBAND when he got home she was pregnant and let them deal with it and iif it came down to them still not making it after kids and it was all said and done then I KNOW Michael would have looked out for her BECAUSE she was the mother of his children just like he did debbie rowe she was grown she should have been an adult and said no
but there is that sense of you don't go against a parent some get it confused in repscting your elders and letting them walk all over you she letting her mother walk all over her because she wants to be accepted by her but at what cost
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2013 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 9: Welcome to Hawaii - "We Both Know This is NEVER gonna Work Out"
Wow awhole lotta BS happening here. Poor Lisa smh... it isn't the girl's fault though Michael smh but oh well Tatiana can give him what his wife can't that's F**cked up.
Keep updating whenever you can cause im hooked.
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2013 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 9: Welcome to Hawaii - "We Both Know This is NEVER gonna Work Out"
I like the change of the story You are a great auther . Just hope Lisa is happy I dont know why but I really like her in this story .
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2013 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 9: Welcome to Hawaii - "We Both Know This is NEVER gonna Work Out"
Alright, alright, for the sake of the author, I'll stop doggin' you. But don't judge someone you don't even know. (before you start denying it -- You DID judge her in real life) (;
ANYWAY.
DAMN.
They went all out!!! Finally Lisa's ass been defeated! Lol karma is a bitch. Now Michael & Tatiana need to stay together and STRONG.
*fist pumps* GET IT TATI!
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2013 12:53 pm Title: Prologue: At the end of her Rope
Oook! Yea I feel this story was taken too serious, I was enjoying the debate about the story and the characters, I found it refreshing that for once the readers couldn't agree on who was the good guy and the bad guy. But not to the extent that we are dissing each other and people we dont know. Yet again like I said in my past comment this is a story, so why judge the Tatiana in the story off of what you m feel about her in real life when this story is obviously fiction. I'm not dissing anyone but I don't feel any of us know enough about Tatiana to really say who she was as a person. She could be a really cool person for all we know. I refuse to hate someone based on hearsay. The Tatiana in the story is cool to me, and the one in real life.
I would also like to apologize to he Author for the situation if I in anyway had aided in this fight, I feel that it's kind of rude to the Author to start fighting on their story. There is no need to be mean to each other. That's just my opinion out of dislike when MJ fans start arguing.
Btw Author I love the story keep going.
Author's Response:
It was and i LOVE the debate to I never expect the dramaright i thought everyone would have a character and when no one could agree stick behind mis put on blast in this yeah the dissing was un needed but i look at it as the chater were WRITTEN so well they forgot they weren't really the real deal
Exactly No one here knows tati personally even those that think they know here from chatting if you know the saying anyone can be anything they want behind a computer screen as long as they portay themseves as Nice on the internet people will believe it. but true don't judge them if you don't know the MICHAEL SAID THAT MUCH
Thank you i wrote each character with a sense of vunerablity that I was hoping would not make people hate them right away, Don't apoligize you had nothing to do with it i actually thought it was fun until they started in on each other and the whole bow down thing need to calm down No one here is a god so no one needs to bow down to anyone unless they are the lord himself
I will keep it going already on chapter 22 and counting think it will be 26 chapters I think not sure yet it all depends on how much it takes to reach my goal point in the end