Reviewer: SmellyApplehead Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 24, 2013 11:49 am Title: Chapter 12: Phone Calls, - I can't wait till we No Longer Have to Lie about us - Part One

Michael..............................................



*throws loafers at Michael* *throws rock* *throws everything*




Michael, ya bitch, you have fun putting on with Tati's skinny ass u_________u

Author's Response:

I Love your comments stop throwing stiff at Michael Lisa deserves a little blacme she wouldn't be going though it if she hadn't Pushed him in her arms with her lies 

Reviewer: SmellyApplehead Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 24, 2013 11:09 am Title: Chapter 9: Welcome to Hawaii - "We Both Know This is NEVER gonna Work Out"

Wow, lisa got defeated. :( im truly sorry for her, i do. I dont know why but i really like her in this story.


Well done, girl. You succeed make those girls hollaring over a fiction story. Your fiction story :-)



Anyway, #teamLisabitch

or

#teamTatibitch

or maybe

#teamMikeTheOriginalBangerBitch.

Ya, maybe i rather choose #teamMike. I'll shut up now

Author's Response:

LOL, I Know They got so heated when I first saw the fight brewing I was in shock thery were really going at it I LOVED it this is the first story i wrote that got so much controversy I didn't get HIGH reviews but I got a good amount for it and Reviews I liked Long ones that i could sink my teeth in.... I Loved the groups they were fun 

Reviewer: SmellyApplehead Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 24, 2013 10:58 am Title: Chapter 8 when it all comes crumbling down

I see where this story's going. Wil be on Tatiana's side, isnt it?


Well, lisa. *friendly hugs*

Reviewer: Suzzanna Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 24, 2013 08:36 am Title: Chapter 21 The Last Straw

OMG ...... And thanks for this just before my grad . 

Reviewer: Suzzanna Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2013 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 20 : Please help me

wow Lisa is so messed up . And what is with her mind friend ?? LOL

Author's Response:

yeah she is... The lisa alter ego i in her head was a twist I added that I knew no one would dsee coming 

Reviewer: SineMj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 21, 2013 01:52 pm Title: Prologue: At the end of her Rope

I'm enjoying this story and haven't had time to read it. This might be my last review for sometime, but i'll be back. I agree MJJApplehead. I hope Michael and Tatiana get married and move on. I'm sure their going to have to fight for it, but hell it's worth it. 

I really can't say that I 100% believe that Wrong is just Wrong. I mean how can you say that and yet you're taking sides. If you believe that wrong is wrong then that would be a neutral prespective. I'm not neutral, I agree they are doing all wrong, but I don't feel that all their wrongs should be weighed equally. I feel Michael has every reason to want a divorce, but I don't agree that he should have started a relationship in the middle of the problem. And Tatiana should also waited until he was out of the marriage before going further with him.

Yet despite that I feel the one's who hold the most responsibility in this crap is Priscilla and Lisa. Priscilla should have kept her racism to herself and minded her own business. And Lisa should have cut the umbilical cord a long time ago, she should have stood up. All that time that Priscilla and Lisa were playing games, Michael was oblivious to somethings, found out in an unfortunate way, managed to talk Tatiana into the mess, and Tatiana walked into it. But I do not put majority of blame on Michael and Tatiana. ONLY A LITTLE. Priscilla should a big chunk of the the blame, then Lisa should a good amount, then Michael gets some, and lastly Tatiana. But not evenly.

Reviewer: MJJApplehead Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 21, 2013 10:46 am Title: Chapter 19 - It's Not fair - Visiting Michael

yayy i hope tati & michael get married, i'm also,glad lisa & michael are on good terms with eachother been lovin dis story since it began keep,goin, cant wait fo the next chapter

Author's Response:

Yeah it was good for them to be on good terms and for that period of time. Tatiana and Michael have a uphill battle you'll see where that turns out in the end.