Date: Jun 06, 2013 09:57 am Title: Chapter 5: Welcome to Acapuloco - Pt 1
The fact that he's even entertaining this bony bitch.. I can't. And Michael you kissed tho ho, lets not act like that isn't cheating. I'm sure Lisa could meet an attractive man and have a few glasses of wine with him and kiss him too. Lets see what he'd say about that. There are no excuses. Wine or not, he still kissed her bony bird lookin ass then on top of that, he told the bitch he'd be married to her instead of Lisa if they had worked out. Chile cheese. I'm already done wit Michael. His friendship with this frail ho is highly inappropriate and wrong.
Author's Response:
Leave Tati Alone you are observing relatiy in fiction, yes he cheated by kising, and No if lisa did the same Michaels ass would have used that as a reason Not to feel bad if he went on ahead and screwed someon else. NO not really whic actually made tatia the victim in that situation but she was strong enought to stop him.
yes he did tell her that and that was the achol bring out true feeling in his heart he had long burried bit for him it was longing to connect with something that was familar he he began to start to lose grip on the relationship at hand
yes the friend ship is wrong shes there shes who he feel can trust and she giving him good advice from a woman persective only problem is she can't just be friend with a man that shes still in love with.
Date: Jun 06, 2013 08:59 am Title: Chapter 5: Welcome to Acapuloco - Pt 1
yas they are all on my shit list. tatiana sit your ugly bony ass down. Ugh, i know she wants michael! & Im guessing michael still wants her! Because the fuck you doing trying to get her to call you! your married for gods sake! & yes that is def cheating if you kiss another women!! I feel kinda bad for lisa , but not all the time. She should just tell michael about the threats & why she had the abortion. Lets ser where his fucking cheating ass is going to be when he finds out she might even get preagnent again!!!!
Author's Response:
for tatia Michael is that Love that got away and she wants to respect his life but she is drawn to him and she knows it really bad because he's married and she really trying to think clearly but hey as a femaile and MICHAEL was your EX and he had pit it DOWN on you and ain't NOBOY done it it better wouldn't you be stuck on that too.
Michael sees tatiana as someone he did wrong in the past and he sees her as that what if the only problem is yes he's married but he''s NOT a cheater type so he doesn't dream of doing that coniously but the more the layers of lisa lies pull back Tatia looks more and more like someone he is willing to chance it with there only problem is timing, He is still married.
Yeah Lisa need to tell him about the threats but you have to see in her mind if she tells the threats she would have to go ALL the way ans say that her mother put her up to marring him in the first place which let shim know automaticaly that she not only betrayed him by doing this but also his ENTIRE marriage was a Lie and waiste of time ONLY to set him up for wat her mother wanted because her Mother has hold of her on that alone and she can NEVER tell that get me
and you are right to a degree with some of the opservations but just wate and see how it turns out





Date: Jun 06, 2013 07:48 am Title: Chapter 5: Welcome to Acapuloco - Pt 1
So I thought I would eventually be on at least one persons side but in fact they're all on my shit list.
Michael kissed Tati. Say what you want but that's cheating. And his attitude about Lisas attitude is hypercritical seeing as he has already confirmed her worst fears.
Tati needs to sit her ass down. She can talk all that mess with her friends about "he wasn't married the other night" and then get in Lisa's face and say she only wants friendship and she hasn't done anything? Child please.
And Lisa's desicion to have an abortion makes no damn sense to me if she's going to try and have a baby again. I think the main problem for me wth HER is that she I'd it without telling Michael. Shes kept just as important a secret as he has. So her attitude towards Tati, while actually justified, are nothing more than her Own skeletons coming to haut her ad she needs to take it out on someone.
To put it succintly, they're all shit stains. Can't wait to see what happens now.
Author's Response:
I ccan totally understand that, everyone has done wrong but there circumstance as altered there case. Lisa infuenced by her mother but she was guilty of everything she did after she made that decison.she never told michael due to fear because she knew what she had done had and would REALLY screw her life up further and she knew living with the mistake was better for her but worse for everyone else
Michael is guilty of still carrying feeling for Tati and Lisa's deciet is pushing him towards her, yes Michael has confirmed his worst fears of her but he started to doubt her by her astion and that affeated hsi trust and Tati became the person he could talk to
Tati though she wants to be good she can't resist Michael. yeah tati got in like that with her friends but heart heart is in the right place though her loins beg to differ
Date: Jun 06, 2013 05:45 am Title: Chapter 5: Welcome to Acapuloco - Pt 1
i think he is still in love with tati





Date: Jun 05, 2013 01:15 pm Title: Prologue: At the end of her Rope
A combination of Lisa and Tatiana omg Lawed!
You put a hurting on this story lol
Wooo this is gonna be juicy!!!!
You did a wild combination yo and Michael i see is clearly gonna get his ass in some serious mess with these women oh shittt!
Thank You for making my story fantasy come true!!!
Author's Response:
Liusa and Tatiana is a combination that is NEVER used it Just came to me one ay i usually play thses character in there own story lines accpt in another stoy i wrote on here called marrage unconentional where they BOTH are really eil coniving bitches that end up working together but that one I didn't finsh Posting because the the read count dropped off but i might start posting it agin when 'm done with this one
I always put a hurtting on my stories I want people to feel where eery character is comeing form what they are thinking and feeling and yes it really is going to be juicy you haven't even egun to see the juice in this story and yes Michael is going to get himself into some MAJOR shit with these woman and i plan to do something SO unexpected in the end of this story everyone will be shocked
your welcome I'm here to make dreams and fantasies come true Lol keep commenting
Date: Jun 05, 2013 04:37 am Title: Chapter 4:Doctor Visit
poor Michael i hope he will finde out soon
Date: Jun 04, 2013 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 3; Making it Right
oooh seems like lisa landin herself in a bigger hole, she should jus tell him & get it done & over wiv lol
Author's Response:
shes young and scared she know she fucked up and she will do anything to cover her mistake lie her ass off but as you know liars always get caught eventually and it usually happens when they think they have out run the lie and they stop worrying about because they gained what hey want but the thing about lies is they ALWAYS come out and at the most INCONVINENT times
Date: Jun 04, 2013 01:35 am Title: Chapter 2: of all the restaurants in town you had to walk into Mine
If Michael cheats while he is married, I swear I won't feel a lick of sorrow for him when he finds out Lisa killed their baby. He better get his shit together and KEEP it together. Let Tatiana's bony ass go her way and he go his. That entire scene was highly inappropriate for a married man. He should've let her ass go to her room immediately. Fuck spending the night. That's the problem now, he's too damn nice. Lets see how nice he is when he finds out his mother in law bullied his wife into aborting their child. Michael better not piss me off with this stupid shit.
Author's Response:
I Love respnses Like this It gives me somthing to sink my teeth into really
Firist off I'm not going to tell you how it's going to go down but it's about the characters and the emotion behind them not saying he will not saying he won't everyone in this story is wrong in there own way but it's seeing there reasons for it makes the difference, now stop being meaned to Taiana at lease in this story it's not her fault he kissed her he moved in on her not the other way around rember she kept refusing him and HE insisted she has a soft spot for him still yes and that allows her to give in to his advances but shes not the problem 100% each action has a an equal and opiste reaction, Tatiana is trying to resit but Michael makes her weak, Lisa is wrong for what she did and she feels horiable for it
yes the hotel room scene was inaprotiate but she locked her key down stairs and she was exhausted what was he supse to go in his room and let her fall flat on her face from exhaustion while he called and got a key brought up he was kind yes, there are cracks in Michael marrage but alcohol into any picture and your bound to get a bad reaction, he wasn't in full control of himself either remember that
each character is dealling with things the best way they know how, but that is life, each character will make you mad at some point but this is the reation i want i like seeing people get into a stoy like this shows me your paying attention keep it up and there is MICH more to come
Keep commenting it keeps me writting
Date: Jun 03, 2013 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 2: of all the restaurants in town you had to walk into Mine
My GOD MICHAEL! Your married! Wtf is wrong with you kissing tatiana? No nigga! Your married to your wife. Ugh, im glad she had an abortion with his cheating ass
Author's Response:
Now in Michaels defense has he really cheated okay he kissed but some of us consider that cheeting but you also have to look at it like this was he of sound mind and body when he did it he had just had two golet sized glasses of wine full to the damn brim he was floating on a alchol high, would he have done the same if he was sober... No i don't think he would, see they all have there circumstance that caused there action but it's what they do within those action that makes the differnce... tatiana was not drunk but she still let him kiss her but as soon as it was over she realized what had happened and she didn't want it to go any further she barely wanted to acept the aplogy.... in fact in that part she didn't really she left him Not wanting to come in between there marriage... if he had slept with her it would have been a differnt story... he made a mistake yes but he hasn't becaome a true all out dog... but keep it commenting
Date: Jun 03, 2013 11:06 am Title: Chapter 2: of all the restaurants in town you had to walk into Mine
oh no michael what did u do?!!! silly boy & poor tatiana, i hope tati's not potrayed as a bad person in this story, kind of gettin tired of her character always beein the bitch i want a nice tatiana in this story !!!
Author's Response:
No she won't be and neather will Lisa you see this story is about cirumstance altering cases, by seeing through these womans eyes she get there emotions and what is going on in there head Neither has ill will for anyone or anything it's the situation they put themselves in and influnces from outside of themselves that alter what they do, neather woman has ill intention but that doesn'r mean there actions still won't get them into trouble
Date: Jun 03, 2013 07:36 am Title: Chapter 1: He's Home
awwww this will be so beautiful love story with them i always thought they were meant to be for ech other but life choose different ways for them :(
Author's Response:
It's going to be a bumpy eide that for damn sure I'm not trying to give any of my plot away fut you have to wait and see it's going to be interesting
Date: Jun 03, 2013 02:15 am Title: Chapter 1: He's Home
YESSSSS!!! AT LAST TATIANA & MICHAEL ARE REUNITED!!!! WOOHOOO sorry for my capitals cant contain my exctitement bring on the next chapter, oh wow i wonder... this is gonna b awwwwkwaaaaard lol
Author's Response:
Thanks for the excitement no I don't feel so bad about what i know is going to happen later on in the story because I know i'm going to get Mixed feeling from it and if you liked that chapter your goinh to LOVE the Next one
Date: Jun 02, 2013 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 1: He's Home
Tatiana better not come and ruin their relationship -__- I cant stans the ho in real life anyways with her flat chest & no ass. Lisa needs to tell michael what happened!! Before he might even go on with tatiana!!!
Author's Response:
All I can say is I'm writting the story how it came to me in my head yeah she is a ho in real life and ultra obsesed with reliving that era of her life for the rest of her life but when ever I write my female leads I like to use light hearted subtext and personal termol for the femailse and you never know what directions it going to go you have to read and find out but the fact that you are getting heated means I'm doing something right lol till the next chapter that is finshed by the way I'll be posting tomarrow you'll have to wait and see lol



Date: Jun 02, 2013 09:52 am Title: Prologue: At the end of her Rope
ohhh yeah i loving this story already!
Author's Response:
I thought people would like it and this is the first story i got so many heatted respnse from and I LOVE IT i never expect ed this reaction LOVE IT





Date: Jun 02, 2013 04:24 am Title: Prologue: At the end of her Rope
Damn her mother took it too damn far. But this is a great story so far keep it up!!
Author's Response:
Yes YES she did but if you keep reading you see that it only gets stickker from that point on keep reading because as Michael said "You Ain't Seen NOTHIN' YET!"