Date: Jun 09, 2013 09:25 am Title: Prologue: At the end of her Rope
Although it is true that Michael kissed her first, but as far as the first kiss Michael shouldn't have been drinking but he was, so he was intoxicated. Many people believe drinking is not an excuse and there are times when it isn't an excuse but if people could control themselves drinking then we wouldn't have laws prohibiting what drunk people can do. I feel Tatiana has some responsibility here because, Tatiana wasn't drunk and was sober enough to avoid the kiss to begin with. That's why I say they were both wrong. Then the second time they were making out in a cove, Tatiana wasn't drunk then either and knew she shouldn't have been there with him. And if my memory seres me correctly Michael wasn't drunk the second time either, so It's obvious the fact that Michael being married is starting to become less and less important to them, but hey like I said if Tatiana is who Michael wants then they should be together. Lisa screwed up, now it's about what Michael wants. I want Michaels happiness because I were Michael I would have contacted my lawyer immediately and started setting up a divorce and I would let Lisa have custody of he kiss as Long as I get visitation rights. It may seem mean of me but I couldn't deal with forcing myself to be in a marriage with someone who deceived me and then stole my right to be a parent the first time, even if her evil mother did pressure her, that didn't give her the right to do what she did. They are all wrong for what they are doing but I put Lisa and Priscilla at the top.
Author's Response:
I agree with you on the drinking thing and your right Tatia did have resposiblity because she noticed her was tipsy before he kissed so yes she could have stoppped him or moved before his lips came in contact with hers
everyone is a wrong to some extent in this story Michael lisa and tati but there wrongness has a impact on there lives yes Michael was drunk he had two glasses of scotch before he left, Michael just being a male in this situation but the ball is in his court was Lisa did is unthinkable the question is about his moral on the belief in abortion and does that trump his ablity to forgive her especially HIS child because of his love for children
Letting Lissa have custody can be trick to becuase her Mother could get involved and to let him squrim because she has FULL custody not let him see the kids AT ALL. Exxactly why should anyone have to be forced to be in a marriage when the feelings are gone BECAUSE of the cations of the othe person SO true she did steal his RIGHT to be a parent and THAT is the hard pilll to swallow
Everyone wrong but ass i always say circumstance alters the case and each person is inflinced by someone elses action
Date: Jun 09, 2013 08:50 am Title: Chapter 8 when it all comes crumbling down
omg i'm glad that Michael finde out the truth realy but i'm sad that lisa still lied to him she is not worth his love i hope Michael and Tati will finde the love in ech other
Author's Response:
The truth always hurts the ones the lies effected, Lisa just needs to stand up to her mother and stop letting her control her life tell her mother to leave her alone and then actually MEAN IT if she did that in the begining she ouldn't be in this MESS, and one can never say for Michael and Tati... which means NOT TELLING
[Report This]Date: Jun 09, 2013 07:20 am Title: Chapter 8 when it all comes crumbling down
As much as I love Michael he is being a dick the man is married . And now Lisa is heartbroken , I know Lisa did do worng but it was only becuase her mom and she does love Michael . Thanks for the update
Author's Response:
Yes he is but Men are Men they see things there way and will do what ever they want to justify there action yeah it was Lisa's Mothers fault but he was never married to lis'a Mother and she had free will she didn't have to do it and she didn't have to lie and that where his argument is coming from he can't TRUST her any more when a relation ship has no trust it has nothing, and to be michael jackson he can't risk staying with someone he can't trust... in Real life if you break his trust in you YOUR OUT and she's out
[Report This]Date: Jun 08, 2013 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 3; Making it Right
I think it's hilarious and ridiculous how Michael approached Tatiana first with the kiss and these bitches say Tatiana needs to fuck off. She didn't even do nothing ! Anyway, this story is really interesting and you should keep it up .
Author's Response:
THANK YOU someone finally gets it HE did WRONG she DID NOT HE is the cause to the tatiana drama NOT HER thank you for noticing and standing up and saying it, Thank you for reading and yes it is interesting and it's going to get even more crazy as we go along but thanks... and hold on it's going to be a bumpy ride.
[Report This]Date: Jun 08, 2013 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 7: My Wish Came True, Family Emergency... The Truth is OUT
Wait what I dont just the last part about termination of prenancy ??? thankx for the update <3
Author's Response:
Temination of pregancy = legal term for aborttion
[Report This]Date: Jun 08, 2013 06:05 pm Title: Prologue: At the end of her Rope
I have been waiting so long for a lmp and mj story thanks love them together <3333 plz dont let them fight
Author's Response:
glad you like it but i can't promise not fights all bets are off with this story i just write it how i see it hope you can hang in there though it's going to be a bumpy ride
[Report This]Date: Jun 08, 2013 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 5: Welcome to Acapuloco - Pt 1
I love this story and love the pics you included . Do you know how long I have ben waiting for a lmp and mj one . Thanks for this I really hope she gets pregnat and is happy I love them togther <333
Author's Response:
your welcome but be forwarned this is not going to be a happy story there is angst drama and death in it but i hope you stick on for the ride thorugh
Date: Jun 08, 2013 12:47 pm Title: Prologue: At the end of her Rope
Right now I feel for Michael and the twins, but nothing for Lisa nor her mother. I also support Michael and the decision he makes, if he stays with Lisa then I support it, but if he chooses Tatiana I support that. It's up to him how he chooses to handle it, after all it's Priscilla's and Lisa's fault for the drama in the Marriage. Lisa should have stood up to her mother, it is her marriage and Priscilla's racist problems are not hers to deal with. The pressure may have been hard on Lisa, but I don't feel it's an excuse to treat Michael the way she did. And now she's bringing children in the middle of this crap, as if they are going to make things right. That's equivalent to people who think that having kids are going to cure their marriage, when in actuality more times than a little it ends with he children getting hurt. That's why I hope that Michael can find happiness for him and his children, forget about Lisa and Priscilla. He's going to be dad, his children are all that matter now.
Author's Response:
I love how people have picked character sides in this story it's interesting to see how everyone roots for differnt people, I'm actually suprised so may were for Lisa and I'm glad you see where michael is coming from, your right it is his diecison and you can't be mad at that yes it is pricilla's faukt more then Lisa she was doing what she was told, yes she should have but blood is hard to go against she did it for fear that if she didn't and stayed the same would happen and then she would TRULY be left with nothing. yes Pricilla nd the whole Memphis clan are racist, her on aunt screamed at him when Lisa and Michael came with janet to the Elvis even in fron of a whole crowd of people calling him a child mosletor in front of the press, and you saw how pissed pricilla was at the fact Michael was getting more attention for being there with lisa then the whole damn EVENT
No that is not an excuse, yes that is the sad part about it... children NEVER fix it they just become a shuffled around issue and the children do end up getting hurt, I will say knowing where I'm going with this story Michael WILL find hapiness but there will be MUCH angst before we reach that point, not telling who wins in the end just michael will be happy.
Date: Jun 08, 2013 11:42 am Title: Chapter 7: My Wish Came True, Family Emergency... The Truth is OUT
Well good he knows now, but the question is what is he gonna do? Yes Lisa made a mistake. But she's pregnant now and that obviously means she wants to have his children. If she didn't, she wouldn't have let herself get pregnant again. She made a mistake. Michael is gonna have to be a man and stop acting like a spoiled bitch and talk to her. Find out her reasons for doing it and how her sorry ass mother threatened to throw her out of her own father's estate. Furthermore, whatever is going on why the fuck Tatiana's bony thirsty ass feels the need to be involved is beyond me. Like bitch, why is your nosy ass all in the mix? This has absolutely NOTHING to do with you. This is between Michael and Lisa. She is carrying his babies! Not you. She has his last name and took vows with this man. That trumps any and everything your dense ass has to say. This shit is ridiculous now. Michael would be a complete and sorry bastard if he left Lisa or cheated on her while she's carrying his children. At this point, I'm pretty sure he's gonna do something fucked up, so I hope Lisa leaves his stupid ass and files for full custody of their kids.
Author's Response:
yes he knows, but you also look at what ype of mistake she made, she lied she ABORTED HIS child, we all know how michael is about children and I seriously doubt he suports abortion unless it's ABSOULTLY nessary life in danger nessary, so that is Definately a big mistake to swallow, yes she is pregnant now but is she pregant because she so much wanted his kids or is she pregant for 1 fear he would leave her if she didn't 2 guilt and neither of those are reasons to have a baby because having the baby WON't wash away guilt it will still be ther and as we all know having a baby NEVER saves a marrage.
yes she made a mistake and yes she has to lieve with it but should he have to lieve with it when ALL her lies that she used to cover it up made the issue wose and there is NO relationship without trust, and how can he TRUST her after that, He is going to talk to her but it was hard at the time to do so it was hard to face the truth we all lie to ourselves a little to keep the fantasy of a bad sitation away, he didn't want to think of her doing that after as much suport as she gave him in his time of need to turna around and betray him like that worse thenanyone ever had
would the reson be enough to save them, yes i believe it would make him have doubts about it and make him think but forgive her in time maybe but that does nothing for them now, he is hurt she is hurt, all he sees is lies.
Tatiaa doesn't want to be involved but because he confided in her she is concerned for him and relise her friends have been pushing her in difern't direction and even what abby said to her was resonable, NONE of them said go sleep with him but TALKING is fine, the proximty thing is ther problem. hey cool it tatia isn't runing all up in betwen them you don't see her knocking on ther door you don't see her PURPOSLY showing up where they are at, it ALL Michael it's the pursuer not her so give the girl a break.
this story is about people and what there emtions can do them and can cause them to do and lets face it a man is a man and when a man says he's DONE with you he's done, i personally had to learn that the hardway No mater how much you want to work it out when they are done they are DONE but i'm glad to have made ytou feel so much emotion, yeah it a train wreck waiting to happen but hey if were read stories for drama freeness where would the fun be in that everyonis haily ever after and nothing goes wrong but you read for drama and in life things don't work out like you want them to that's life
Date: Jun 08, 2013 10:24 am Title: Chapter 7: My Wish Came True, Family Emergency... The Truth is OUT
ooooh boi lisa! knew she shud of told him, tatiana michaels married! michaels gonna b vex!!!!
Author's Response:
Oh hell yeah he is Read the New Chapter and you'll se how VEXED he was
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2013 01:13 pm Title: Prologue: At the end of her Rope
I look at Tatiana as a clean slate, and all she did was kiss him. Yes they were wrong, but hell all they need to do is stop hanging out with each other alone. So that they can avoid having sex, but a friendship is not wrong. Lisa on the other hand is the real enemy here, not Tatiana. So far Tatiana hasn't done anything horrible so she's cool with me, but the second she f*cks up, she will be on hitlist. Michael, Tatiana, and Lisa are all doing wrong, but Lisa is the one who is the biggest problem here. SO FAR. If Michael and Tatiana fall in love and become happy after he finds out about Lisa having an abortion, then I'm all for Tatiana as long as they are happy and they treat each other right, all well that's Lisa's lost.
Author's Response:
Thank you for at least giving Tatiaana the benifit of the doubt, yeah she shared a kiss with Michael but see the thing you all are forgetting in your phrasing of he kissing situations MICHAEL kissed her not the other way around He did it not her.
of course they are going to hang out with each other alone because they can't talk candidly otherwise there problem is self control becasuse they have a sexxual atraction to one another YES they all are doing wrong i'm glad that is understood no one is innocent in this situation
I'm not going to give away anything but you just have to see how the Michael and Tatiana thing plays out
Date: Jun 07, 2013 10:47 am Title: Chapter 6: Acapuloco Night's Pt 2
What do you do? Stop listening to your ho ass friends and leave him alone. Let Michael be with his wife and work out their issues. Have more respect for yourself instead of being a sideline ho. That's what the hell you do. I don't like Tatiana's character at all in this. Has nothing to do with real life. She's so fuckin dense in this story I can't. Any woman with any type of respect or dignity knows she can't befriend a man she still has feelings for and that man is MARRIED. Every time he reaches out to her, she needs to tell his ass NO. No talking, no meeting up, nothing. Tell him to talk to his wife. That's the only woman he needs to be concerned about. I'm gonna slap the shit outta Michaels dumb ass too.
Author's Response:
Hey Not all of her friends are hoes there is only one friends that is a real ho, but you have to have that dinamic you know there are friends that agree and others that actually give you good advice to stay away from the dude.
se is it so easy that michael and his wife work out there issues, do you think michael can forgive for that, some woman don't have that self esteem to be able to say to a man LIKE HIM that they have been with before I'M DONE and actually be done, when there are unresolve issue from before of course they are going to keep being sweat back in or fall in love with the exactly the same type of guy.
No you can't that for certain but some woman think it will be differnt they think that they can reslove the issue and still keep them as a friend, hey she did try she had the resove to tell him to leve her be before she got to the beach but as soon as she found out what was truly wrong with him she got sucked into his vunerablity and it made her vunerable again
yeah Michael need to talk to his wife but he was scared to be faced with the truth of what she had done to him the truth hurts ans as you will read in the next chapter it stings
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2013 09:53 am Title: Chapter 6: Acapuloco Night's Pt 2
What do you do?
"stop listening to these vapid bitches… the man is married and I suggest you stay away from him until he is otherwise"
THAT! THAT IS WHAT YOU DO!
Author's Response:
Yes she need to not listen to ALL her Friends and true as Cheryl said she shouuld do but temptation is a BITCH
Date: Jun 07, 2013 09:16 am Title: Chapter 6: Acapuloco Night's Pt 2
oh wow i hope Michael will finde what Lisa did soon i want him with Tati
Author's Response:
Next chapter, the chapter i posted to day and the one I post tomarrow will be the confromtation
[Report This]Date: Jun 06, 2013 03:01 pm Title: Prologue: At the end of her Rope
Lol. I can see that people are letting their hatred Tatiana in real life interfere with their judgement. I don't feel it's well enough into the story to be hating anyone, except Lisa. Tatiana may still be attracted to him but she has done a decent job at not going back to who she was before. Remember the Tatiana in real life might be different from one in the story. Michael was wrong for kissing her, but I feel that if a person can control themselves when their drunk then how come its not safe to drink and drive? My advice is don't drink if you don't know what you're capable of. But I disagree that everyone can control themselves when drunk. I can say that I feel that they are both beginning to skate on thin ice as far as sexual attraction. And so therefore they need to check themselves. But Lisa and Priscilla are the only ones on my bogus list. Michael and Tatiana haven't done anything to get on that list yet. As far as the kiss I would disagree that a cheating husband is an excuse to have an abortion. Even if Michael did sleep with Tatiana, Lisa was just as wrong for deceiving Michael and aborting his child. Period. As cliche as this sounds "Two wrongs don't make a right."
Author's Response:
Yes they are aloowing it to cloud there judgemnt of how they really feel in this situation tward Taitiana, No it isn't but when you get a few motre chapters in you'll get it... yes thank you for recognizing that she is trying to resist him but she has her moment where she gets caught up into him
true about the drinking situation, but that was definatly a perfect storm for for Idle hands in the devils play ground.
yeah they do skate on thin ice but that what make the story so thrilling the big question hangs in the balance 'will they or won't they' yeah they do need to check them selves but give them props for not saying fuck it in the first chapter and michael and tatiana cheating right off the bat they are trying to resist temptation
Pricilla is a BAD influince on lisa sad to say because she is her mother but she is the one that created this ball in the begining but Lisa guilty to if she had not gone to her mother to warn her and just let the cards fall where they may none of it would have happen but if it wasn't for characters making mistakes we would have suspensful fan fiction now would we
Lisa was wrong for the abortion the fact of the matter there she walked into that doctor office she laid on that table and she alowed it to happen Lisa didn't hold a gun to her head and walk her through the process until it was over she wasn't knocked out and woke up and it was done she was conscious and in sane body and mind when SHE walked in there and told the doctor each time she asked she was sure so no two wrongs don't make a right