[Report This]Date: Feb 18, 2014 12:14 am Title: Chapter 12 | Expectations vs Reality
Kayden is a little freak tsk tsk. And aww at Michael being disappointed. I could imagine him looking like a little sad puppy :/ She should tell him how she really feels so that he won't feel like she's brushing him off.
Author's Response:
Yeah she's a big hornball
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2014 09:46 am Title: Chapter 11 | Surprise!
That dream that Kayden had made me raise eyebrows for a second until I realized why. lol Michael...that sly dog. His hunger for her was strong lol. He was putting in work and then some. It would be funny and so awkward if Rose really did hear them lol
Author's Response:
I was gonna do an awakward moment chapter with Rose and them but I couldn't make it long enough.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2014 09:32 am Title: Chapter 10 | The Girls Are Talking
The kids forgot about the magazine lol I know Kayden was thankful for that. *cooing* at how cute she was when she was telling Rose about Michael lol. She's like a little school girl. And Rose is something else lol. She just got straight to business without a hello or nothing! Noseeeeey tsk tsk. Michael telling Kayden about his hospital visit was adorable ^_^
Author's Response:
That magazine is gonna come back up later. Yeah, Rose is the nosey big sister that no one asked for lol
[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2014 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 9 | Another Fucking Ghost
I'm glad that Kayden came to her senses and realized that Michael is only trying to help. She better stop being stubborn by going out alone when Michael already warned her. Good thing it was someone friendly that she ran into and not Dorien or his little posey. I hope that she keeps Martise's warning in mind.
Of course Rose would ask if Kayden slept with Mike lol. Everyone has at least one of those nosey friends tsk tsk. Ya gotta love them. Can't wait to see how Rose's reaction to the news with Kayden and Michael is going to be.
As for this tabloid, lol Kayden should've known that that incident was going to come back to bite her in the butt. She better make up an excuse to tell the children before chaos arises lol.
Author's Response:
I had to make her super stubborn, she's so use to doing everything herself that it's hard for her to cope with someone trying to help her.
[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2014 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 8 | Whiplash
That was sweet of Michael for not wanting to take advantage of Kayden in the state that she was in. *gushes* He's such a gentleman. Kayden is a hornball lol but then again, Michael is too. They're so adorable.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like this chapter, cuz I was so worried about it.
[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2014 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 7 | Back To Reality
Oh wow. I just knew that Dorien would be back. I wonder what the history between Kayden and Dorien is for him to do something like that. Anyway, I'm glad that Kayden swallowed her stubbornness and took Michael's offer because her life really is in danger.
Author's Response:
When you find out the history between them, you are gonna flip !
[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2014 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 6 | What Happens In Vegas...
Lawwwd I just...
It's already one thing to have gotten some the night before but then they woke up playing these "games" and got the hand works when supposedly being "just friends". I don't even know how to act right now lol. I love their relationship.
It's kinda true how Kayden was saying that they behaved like they were a couple. I mean they had been conversing for a while before she knew who he actually was so the chemistry is strong. I can see where she was coming from by declining the job offer too because they could definitely cause some issues when you're messing around with your boss.
Author's Response:
You don't underdstand how much I love that gif. Holiday Heart is my movie !
They would get in SOOOOO much trouble cuz I don't think either one of them can control their hormones and someone would probably find them.
[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2014 09:05 am Title: Chapter 5 | It Never Rains In Southern California
lol girl that was alsghagh! Lawd have mercy! I don't even know what to say lol. I knew it was coming but the way it did...
I can't even think of anything else to say right now. I just salghaglhg.
Author's Response:
Glad you like it. It took me a month to write that scene.
[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2014 08:36 am Title: Chapter 4 | Just Friends, Right?
The tension! The tension! I. Am. LOVING. THIS. TENSION! lol Yessss at Michael offering her a job and her accepting. Good thing she did agree to go off on the trip or she would've missed a great opportunity. I giggled when she said that she needed to read a book on abstinence lol. And I definitely hollered at that trick that she played on him. I could imagine his facial expressions while reading it lol. This payback from Michael is about to be something serious lol.
Author's Response:
This really was a fun chapter to write.
[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2014 08:22 am Title: Chapter 3 | Vegas Baby
This was a cute chapter! I love the interaction between Michael and Kayden. They're like two playful teenagers lol. *gushing* at Michael confessing that he liked her. I think that Kayden knows and is just in denial. I know that she likes him too. This trip should be interesting ^_^
Author's Response:
At this point Kayden is living, breathing and driking denial.
[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2014 01:59 am Title: Chapter 2 | The Hangover
Aww. The day after didn't go so bad after all. At least they're on decent speaking terms. Kayden better take that trip to Vegas with Michael. She knows she wants to tsk tsk.
[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2014 01:46 am Title: Chapter 1 | Unmasked
This is pretty interesting! I'm already liking this based on what's happened so far. I never would've guessed that John was really Michael based on how he was described lol. That was a pretty good disguise. That was sweet of Michael to invite Kayden to his home to keep her safe. I wonder how this stay with Michael is gonna go now though since that little incident happened. And I wonder what's up with this Dorien guy. He seems like trouble. Anyway, this was a great intro!
Author's Response:
I always like Michael's disguises and wanted to write about it. Then I started thinking, 'what if Michael really met someone and they didn't know it was him'. I though it would be a pretty cool intro. Especially because I had no clue how to make him and her meet.
[Report This]Date: Dec 16, 2013 05:40 am Title: Chapter 11 | Surprise!
I love this story soooooooo much!!! One of my favorites for sure, love :)
Author's Response:
Aww yay! thank you, I'm so glad you like it that much!
Date: Dec 15, 2013 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 11 | Surprise!
Very good. Continue soon?
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I'm not sure. I have the next few chapters partially written and idk if I want to do two small chaptrs or one long one yet.
Date: Dec 06, 2013 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 9 | Another Fucking Ghost
Update soon, I love it!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it!
I'm actually working on the next two chapter right now, so hopefully i get those done soon :)