Date: Sep 10, 2014 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 22 | By Any Means Necessasry
I am glad to see that have updated.... I see writers block is gone.... This is a great chapter... Kade is opening up to Michael a step in the right direction... Good job with the writing... Looking forward to the next chapter...
Date: Sep 03, 2014 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 21 | Not Yet
Well Hot Damn!! That was smoking hot!!!!!! This story is off Da Chain..... Great Story... I hope there is more to this story.... I loved it... I found your stories two days ago.... I love them...... Keep up the good work...
Author's Response:
Oh wow you read the whole thing !! I'm glad you like it tho. Don't worry. I'm still writing it. I'm just having the worst case of writers block. The next chapter has been almost done for almost two months now. I just need to get it done.
Date: Jun 14, 2014 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 21 | Not Yet
this chapter tho....
please keep it coming!!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2014 09:44 am Title: Chapter 21 | Not Yet
Awww Shaniiiice
Thank you for the shoutout. Girl your story really is great so don't let anyone tell you otherwise *_*
Now on to the story...girl...Kadeland...
Chileeee. I can't even say anything else. They did that lol. They DID THAT!
And aww at Kayden feeling a little guilty because she isn't quite ready to tell Michael that she loves him back. Michael is such a sweetheart for understanding her situation. They're so cute ^_^
Author's Response:
Youre welcome and Thank you Shy !!
YES THEY DID !! Go Kayden, go Mkey, get freak, do the nasty lol
You Kayden is a marshmellow for Michael.
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2014 06:05 am Title: Chapter 21 | Not Yet
*phew* fans self!
This chapter gave me life.
That was MEGA AND MUY CALIENTE
Author's Response:
Date: Jun 04, 2014 10:00 am Title: Chapter 21 | Not Yet
Wow great story!
Author's Response:
Thank you !!
[Report This]Date: Jun 04, 2014 07:40 am Title: Chapter 21 | Not Yet
A shout out AND a sexy MJ gif? 
This chapter is just...
And when Michael and Kade talked about 'love'? 
When I resort to gif-speak, it means you left me speechless :) Your prose has evolved beautifully, and that is saying a lot as you started this story strong. I wish half my students could write like you do!
Author's Response:
I was trying to out do chapter 5, i hope i succeeded. Thank you, I've noticed that too especially when I read some of my old work. Plus it's gotten much easier to write now, than it was a year ago.
Date: Jun 02, 2014 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 20 | Kadeland
Oh ma gawd, I cannot breathe. Michael eating the mangos and....just... SDKJVBKDSFBVKJDFSBVKJDFKVJBFDKVDKFJBVDFABJLDFB!!!!!
YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON OR ITS YOUR ASS, YOU HEAR ME!!
Author's Response:
haha Ziggy that's what you get for that cliff hanger you left me with lol
All I'll say is, soon.
[Report This]Date: Jun 01, 2014 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 20 | Kadeland
Noooooooo! I'm caught up. That wasn't supposed to happen
You were right when you mentioned how you felt like the last several chapters were really starting to show off your skills. You've hit your writing groove, so to speak. And it is only your first story!
Author's Response:
I quit writing this a few months ago, but when I started again I found my writing process and what works for me. Which I'm glad for, because I really wanted this story to be good, even though it's my fun/experiment story. But don't worry I have another chapter coming soon. Probably tomorrow or way later today.
[Report This]Date: Jun 01, 2014 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 19 | Off Limits
Stop hatin' all over yourself. It was a corny ending, and sometimes chapters need to have corny endings. They are best used on special occassions, such as this chapter ;)
Author's Response:
Yeah, but sometimes I don't want the scenes to feel too corny, like they're not possible.
[Report This]Date: Jun 01, 2014 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 17 | S-L-E-E-P
That's what he gets for not listening to her.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you're invested in my characters lol one of my goals when writing this, is to have people call Kayden, Kade.
Exactly, if he woulda just got out his feeling for a minute there wouldn't have been an arguement in the first place
[Report This]Date: Jun 01, 2014 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 16 | I Cut The Wrong Cord
How can he expect her to call him first if he doesn't even answer the phone when she called him OR call her back before coming?! pffft. Girl, you are getting me emotionally invested in these characters....
Author's Response:
The logic of a man is something I'll never understand lol but I know his pride was hurt. , so he acted an ass lol
[Report This]Date: Jun 01, 2014 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 15 | Shit
Well, I knew that whatever happened, the rest of the day was going to have to be downhill after that wakeup call. Still, 
Good thing she switched cars!
Author's Response:
If Michaels Rolls Royce would have gotten messed up, that would have been the end lol
Date: Jun 01, 2014 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 14 | Stay
Hehe. I love creative license.
I like how you have some cliffhangers, but you also include the more "minor" moments. It adds depth to the exchange
Author's Response:
Thank you, I really want to protray them as a believable couple and not just two random people put in a story together, so I'm really glad you noticed it.
[Report This]Date: Jun 01, 2014 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 13 | Mystery Trip
Sorry, took a break from commenting while I read. Still reading, though :)
Kayden sure chose the worst possible time to nap.
Author's Response:
Oh don't worry about it.
she really did though. But in her defense she was running on E.