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Reviewer: Star Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2014 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 4

Update please!! this is really good! Aww i hope she doesnt abort the baby! 



Author's Response:

Thank you... we shall see what she decides to do.

Reviewer: ayonnah629 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2014 10:29 am Title: Chapter 1

I really like this story and the secret too.. hopefully she doesn't abort the baby.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading my stories.

Reviewer: mjlover1972 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2014 08:56 am Title: Chapter 4

PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!! DONT ABORT THE BABY PLZZZZZZZ DONT. FAMILY FIRST!!:):)):)::)):):):):):):):):):):)):):):):):)):):):)

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2014 08:07 am Title: Chapter 4

Ola really is being very selfess I hope she changes her mind and have the baby. Thanks for updating can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Kunda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2014 07:51 am Title: Chapter 4

Wowowowwwww! No he didn't. 

Btw, I've been waiting for this chapter for forever! Lol. 

But now everytime I think of Ola all I see is that incredibly ratchet 'thriller' tribute video, you know the one. The 'remember'. 

Gawd. I was a catastrophe amongst catastrophes. I lost allll the respect for her I had as Michaels leading thriller lady. 

But nevertheless. Five star. 



Author's Response:

I know girl. I was cracking up for days. I couldn't even get thru watching the whole video, I was laughing so hard. But I heard she did that to be funny, if so mission accomplished.

But thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: MyKOJAKson Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2014 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 3

suki suki now!! keep on going girl! great suspense, I can't wait to see MJ'S reaction lol!

Reviewer: BrittBratt96 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2014 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 3

Lol I know Mike is shocked as hell!

Reviewer: Kunda Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2014 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 3

Ohhhhh don't keep me waiting tell me tell me tell me. :) I love this story. All three chapters 

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2014 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 3

Yay thanks for the update sweetie I realy hope you continue with this it's one of my favs can't wait to see Michael's reaction.

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2013 09:46 am Title: Chapter 2

I missed this story glad to see you updated please continue. I can't wait ti see what happens next.

Reviewer: MyKOJAKson Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2013 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

Omg!! I am so happy you decided to do this!! and thank you so much for dedicating this story to me, I feel so honored! Keep on going! p.s i love that its whitney from "passions" lol!



Author's Response:

I know Whitney "Brook Kerr" thats my favorite actress. Passions use to be my favorite show back in the day... I miss it. But as you can see this Whitney is wayyyyyy different from the Passions version. She isn't that Whitney. My Whit is more bold, edgy, and a lil ghetto. Same name and face but different upbringing and personality.

 

Anyway I a glad you are enjoying the story so far. And I dedicated to you because you are amazing. Thank you...

Reviewer: SparklyBubbles Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2013 07:56 am Title: Chapter 1

This is really good so far :) Ill be waiting for more soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2013 03:18 am Title: Chapter 1

Girl this is really good you should make this a longer story I really hope u consider it.



Author's Response:

Oh I have every intention on doing so. Thank you for reading.

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