[Report This]Date: Jul 28, 2013 11:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Girl.Continue this story.Michael is a pretty boy(lol)
Continue Chapter four
Author's Response:
Lmfao I most definitely will! :)
Date: Jun 04, 2013 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :D
[Report This]Date: Jun 04, 2013 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 3
The shade that's constantly thrown at Jermaine though lol. I was too done at him talking about the smell of the bus. Aww at big bro Jackie letting Mike stay with him though. That's what family is for. Ohhhh lord at Mike and Marlon running into Mac. Can't wait to see how this goes.
Author's Response:
Lol it is. He annoys everybody lololol. And yeah Jackie didn't mind helping MJ out :) and yup Mac is Back lol. Should be interesting
Date: May 28, 2013 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
its so perfect...update soon please... :)
Author's Response:
I will! Thanks for reading! ^__^
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2013 10:37 am Title: Chapter 1
Great keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you and I will! :D <3
[Report This]Date: May 23, 2013 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow. Joe just had to come a ruin everything. The way that you portrayed him lowkey reminds me of my daddy smh. Mike was throwing all types of shade lol. Bruh be illin'.
"Momma needed to realize that Satan don't like to say grace." <--idk why but that line had me cutting up. Mike knew he wasn't right for that one.
But seriously, that was a low blow that he pulled on Joe and it was even lower for Joe to hit him like that. He mad lol. Anyway, I enjoyed the chapter boo! <3
Author's Response:
I'm the queen of low blows myself lmfao. Yeah Joe's an ass in this and lmfao MJ will always be shady. Thanks for readin gworl! <3
Date: May 22, 2013 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Please update soon! I'm really excited for this story because Michael's personality in this story actually feels like Michael! Well, minus the cussing haha
Author's Response:
LOL! Just imagine Daryl from Bad trying to curse xD. And thanks so much!!! <3
Date: May 21, 2013 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
lmfaoooooo i'm crying this was so funny and i like how you make Michael sound like a bad ass i'm so curious to what the job is gonna be and I cant wait for the love part good job ! :)
Author's Response:
Lmfao I'm glad you liked it!! And I'll be sure to bring in the romance part pretty soon ^___^ <3
[Report This]Date: May 21, 2013 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
First off, this was a GREAT intro! The interaction between Mike, Janet, Jeremaine and Marlon was priceless lol. Tell me why I was cutting up when Jeremaine got mad at Mike and Marlon and called them ugly. And then Marlon got shut down smh lol poor thing. He tried. Of course the chick was gonna be eyeing Mike down. I mean, who wouldn't? But seriously though, Mike and Marlon gotta be lost as idk what if they don't know what Mac was up too. A brother in the hood on the corner in a Rolls Royce...that just automatically means trouble smh. I can't wait for more! I'm loving this already.
Author's Response:
hjhdvghvgvdgvd!! right that part had me laughing too! I didn't even know it would be funny until I read it again lmfao! and maybe they're not completelylost lmfao! And yeah Mike is always getting looked up and down lol! thanks for reading! I'm glad you like it xD <33