Reviewer: TatianaJackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 14, 2013 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 7

Shit is getting more tense up!

Update soon

Reviewer: Monique J Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2013 05:15 am Title: Chapter 2

Oh HALE NAW, JOSEPH.

Reviewer: cabagepatch1023 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2013 09:27 am Title: Chapter 6

That had me  the ground laughing!  LmfaLmfaooo!    Mannn marlon is a messs!  Abd the sergeant lmaooo!   Whew. Mannn. Good chapter!   Keeep on going!

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2013 12:09 am Title: Chapter 6

looooooool this chapter had me done. I bet Curly Fry *cough* I mean Mike learned not to be carrying expensive stuff out in the hood like that again. smh and I hollered every time Marlon's liver lips were mentioned. I ain't right. And done at them showing fear looool they ain't 'bout dat life. Michael already thinkin' bout quiting lol. And lawd if that was just day one then there's no telling how the rest is gonna go. I can't lol

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2013 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 5

Jermaine ain't got no life smh. And not Mike dressing in skinnys and putting on perfume and RayBans and what not to go to the hood. Loooooool lil punk! I'm jk. Nah for real though, that's why he got clowned lol Marlon should have been like "guy code bruh" Some things you just can't do when going to the hood and get away with it. I'm surprised they didn't try to steal his shades 'cause I would have looooool. 

This part right here-->"It's dwarves, you illiterate fuck!", Tank retorted before turning his attention to Marlon and I. <--I hollered. Tell me why I read that in Tyler the Creator's voice though. That just sounds like something that he would say.

Anyway, I hope Mike doesn't get too fearful on the job and ends up messing something up. Good thing him and Marlon are partners so they can back each other up. Good chapterrrrrrr :)

Author's Response:

Lmfao perhaps they thought MJ was bold for coming to the hood in that attire lol. And Jermaine stats shading and messing with his younger brothers lmfao. That's just how he rolls, unfortunately. And lmfao I'm sure Michael will be sure not to fuck anything up. Or well, lets hope he doesn't ;) 

thanks for reading!

Reviewer: TatianaJackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2013 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 5

CONTINUE PLEASE!

 

Author's Response:

I definitely will! :D

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2013 09:47 am Title: Chapter 4

Oh lord Marlon is so dumb loooool. If he was in the hood sticking his tongue out at people for real they would have whipped his behind. I'm wondering how this new job is gonna go for them. Hopefully nothing will go wrong even though I'm pretty sure something will. 

Awww at Jackie played as a concerned big brother tsk tsk. Mike and Janet's relationship is too adorable.

I laughed too hard when Jermaine called them gay lol.

And I knew that Joseph was still gonna be blah smh. 

Anyway, this was a lovely update ^_^

Author's Response:

Lmfao he couldn't get whooped because of Mac lmfao. And yeah, Sigmund is concerned about his lil bros ^__^ thanks for reading, gworl

Reviewer: TatianaJackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2013 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 4

More drama and suspense 

Continue please 

You have me dying 

Author's Response:

Lol I will :D thanks for reading!