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Reviewer: BabyGirl25135 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2013 12:08 am Title: Chapter 10

Buuuuurrrrrrnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!

 

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2013 01:34 am Title: Chapter 9

I just knew that Mike was gonna be feeling Tank's girl. I smell trouble ahead *snickers* Can't wait to see how this goes.

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2013 01:14 am Title: Chapter 8

This chapter had me hollering from beginning to end especially when Marlon called Mike gay and when Lil T said Marlon had hot dog lips loool. Leroy knew he was wrong for joking around with their jobs like that. Ole troll lol. And then the cracking back and forth had me too done! I loved it lol. Nah for real though, that was nice of Mac to give them a second chance.

Reviewer: Monique J Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2013 01:10 am Title: Chapter 9

He said she got a stank .... [falls on the floor]

Mmm. This gon be a problem. The girl was bad. [whispers] The girl was dangerous.

Reviewer: tatilova Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2013 10:41 am Title: Chapter 9

LMFAOOOO!!!! Hahahaha they killed me!!! Update soon girl I love that story

Reviewer: TatianaJackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2013 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 9

Do I smell Michael and the woman liking each other?lol

What's her name?

Reviewer: tatilova Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 26, 2013 01:02 am Title: Chapter 8

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!

Reviewer: tatilova Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 21, 2013 06:32 am Title: Chapter 8

UPDATE!!!! UPDATE!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!

Reviewer: Monique J Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2013 03:23 am Title: Chapter 8

Okay, I fuckin' DIED when they was goin in on Mike's pants. And then two hot dogs stacked together.... my god. LENETTA. Lmao.

Reviewer: TatianaJackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 04, 2013 12:36 am Title: Chapter 8

Wow.Update soon

Reviewer: tatilova Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 03, 2013 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 8

Daaaamn that was a tough one!!!! Can't wait to read the next one

Reviewer: Monique J Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 02, 2013 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 7

Let's get an update, Netta Pooh!

Reviewer: tatilova Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 29, 2013 03:00 am Title: Chapter 7

Hey!!! Where is the next chapter??!!! I'm so waitin' for it!!!

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2013 12:39 am Title: Chapter 7

Lawd I knew they wouldn't be able to hang loooool. And not Sergeant being Mac's brother though! Mac knew he wasn't right for that lol. Done at Marlon being a lil punk. I hollered when Jermaine started picking on Marlon's lips and when Joe was like they probably quit and were making up lies as they went along. Loooool the struggle. Oh at Mike getting bold and disrespecting his daddy in his house lol. He gon' mess around and get kicked out. Time to call up big brother Jackie. Anyway, I wonder if Mike is actually gonna go through with trying to get the job back.

Reviewer: Koala_Cookie Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 14, 2013 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 7

Fuck a job, Michael needs a girl lol

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