Reviewer: MJzNubianQueen Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 17, 2022 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 39: Green Eyed Monsters

Thoroughly enjoyed this
Hopefully someday you will return to finish it x

Reviewer: lulito Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2021 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 2: Sex and Despair

Good one

Reviewer: Dahlia Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 05, 2018 07:06 am Title: Prologue

Please update this story is so awesome.

Reviewer: honey Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 3: It's On (Like Donkey Kong)

cool premise!

Reviewer: givinmebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2016 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 11: A River In Egypt

Simon Cowell would fit in perfectly :)

Reviewer: femalien Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2016 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 39: Green Eyed Monsters

Please don't abandon this story! Please! It is one of the best I've read on this site!

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2016 08:28 am Title: Chapter 18: I'll Be There

Hey there,
You have written such a n elaborate story so far, so why don' t you keep on updating? Please keep up the excellent work. It is so much fun to read as it is so skillfully written. The characters are so real. It is a shame if you don' t go on. Please, please, please a thousand times keep on writing and finish the story.
Respectfully, Gigi

Reviewer: Ilovetotour Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2015 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 39: Green Eyed Monsters

Please update this story is so goooooodddd