[Report This]Date: Jan 03, 2014 10:54 am Title: Chapter 33: Wanna Be Startin' Something
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Oh. My. GODILOVETHISTORYSOMUCHITSSOAMAZINGANDMAGICALANDEVERYTHINGGOODINTHEWORLD!!!!!!!!
*breathes*
I have NEVER in my LIFE enjoyed a story more than this, its so PERFECT!! 0_o
I cant believe how gross Jermaine is... Ew.
And Priscilla is such a BITCH ermagerd
PUBLISH AGAIN SOON, I love this so muchh!!!!!
Author's Response:
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE AWESOME REVIEW!
I'm glad that you like my story.
I'm working on the next update, should have it ready soon.
[Report This]Date: Dec 28, 2013 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 33: Wanna Be Startin' Something
Someone smack some sense into Celine's head please. Omg, she is a bird
"That's not hypocritical at all Mr. Crotchgrab. Besides, there are thousands of fangirls out there with glittery vibrators named ‘Michael' so don't even start." LMFAO!!!!!!
I completely forgot Olivia and LMP were friends. I guess Olivia is going to be her confident. I bet Olive wil do everything in her power for LMP to have custody of her children. But one thing: LMP better stop staring at Olive's man like this!!! Having daydream and shit...
I might be horrible but... Freddy got what he deserved. I know Olivia said she would take care of him but I hope she didn't have him killed. She's smarter than that!
CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER :)) Love you girl :)
Author's Response:
OMG YOU USED A GIF FROM THE WIRE YOU ARE AWESOME. Best. Show. Ever. You just set off a fangirling cascade.
You will find out whether Olivia is guilty or not in the next chapter, which I've just about finished. I'm such a slow writer sometimes!
LMP wants Michael and she wants him bad! I can't blame her but if she doesn't keep her hands off I will............
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[Report This]Date: Dec 28, 2013 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 32: It seemed like a good idea at the time......
I really don't like Celine and Olivia arguing over a man. And Jermaine? Oh pls! Celine could do way better but I guess her judgement is clouded by the good sex she had with Jermaine... *dick too bomb*. Lmao @ Olivia for being turned on while watching Michael fighting! She's a mess. And I don't know what's you're trying to do with LMP. Are you trying to make us love her lol? I feel bad for her, her marriage and her shitty ass mother, I hope everything gets better. I think Michael is going to be her confident or the othe way round... I ccan't way to see how Liv reacts to that!
Awww they made up! They are adorable :)!
Author's Response:
Celine is one of those women whose brains liquefy and run out of her ear in the presence of a penis. She has terrible judgement when it comes to men.
As for LMP, you'll have to wait and see! I'm not going to tell you what will happen. I'm not trying to make you love her per say, just paint her in a more well-rounded light. She is evil in most fan fics and I find it unrealistic. Not to say that she doesn't have her share of problems, she's got a truckload!
Thanks for the review and rate! I'm horrible at responding to these quickly, but I am almost done the newest chapter. So be on the lookout soon!
[Report This]Date: Dec 12, 2013 06:47 am Title: Chapter 33: Wanna Be Startin' Something
Olivia had him assaulted, the assailant probably went too far though
Author's Response:
Maybe. Maybe not.
Date: Dec 11, 2013 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 33: Wanna Be Startin' Something
Oh shit, I think I know who got Freddy killed. Imma keep my mouth shut for now though lol. Can't wait to see how this plays out. And oh my GOD Celine and Jermaine are engaged?! Why am I not surprised smh. I knew from the get-go they were gonna end up together, but ENGAGED? Whoo unh-unh, this isnt good. Great chapter girl, keep up the good work!!! :)
Author's Response:
Yeah Celine is a moron when it comes to men. It's like her brain cells shrivel and die whenever she sees a penis.
I'd be interested to hear your theory about Freddy's murder. Of course, I won't tell you if you're right or not but it will let me know if I"m doing my job properly as an author. I don't want it to be too obvious.....or do I?
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2013 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 33: Wanna Be Startin' Something
I think Freddy's list of enemies is log enough. I couldn't pick just one likely suspect. I'm worried though about Lisa's depressive ass camping at Olivia's...
Author's Response:
Freddy's life is much more complex than I've given away so far.....as you shall see, he had major secrets. As for Lisa, well, a girl can always dream. And dream she will.........lmao. I have a major twist planned with her but I'm not going to tell you. You'll just have to wait and see :)
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: Dec 10, 2013 05:42 am Title: Chapter 17: Curveball
AWWWW shit! And we all know whose behind them false allegations, *sighs*
Let the drama commence!
(Its evident I'm one slow ass reader LOL, to be fair I've been distracted by catching up with the awesomeness that is Legend Of Korra. XD)
Author's Response:
Girl this is just the tip of the drama iceberg.
Thanks for the review and rate! Latest chapter is up.....time for you to catch up. I can't wait to see your reaction to some of the later chapters.
Date: Dec 02, 2013 10:01 am Title: Chapter 32: It seemed like a good idea at the time......
loving it
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad. And thanks for the review :)
Date: Dec 01, 2013 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 32: It seemed like a good idea at the time......
aww that was nice, im glad they made up. please update soon girl, you know i cant get enough of this!! haha
Author's Response:
I'm glad too they are too cute to be fighting :) Well, the update wasn't soon but here it is! Enjoy.
Date: Dec 01, 2013 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 31: Payback
LMAO that picture of michael on the end credits pretty much expresses how i feel. how can she be so stupid?! she needs to sit her ass down, swallow her goddamn pride (because im sorry i love liv's character but her ego does get in the way at times) and LISTEN to michael explain the situation. and using jermaine to get back at michael is not a good idea....lordy lord...
Author's Response:
Yes she's being an idiot. I promise you that she will come to her senses. Right now she's just trying to hurt Michael so he can feel her pain. And you're totally right about her ego, she is very proud and very stubborn sometimes to her detriment.
Date: Dec 01, 2013 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 30: Ain't No Mountain High Enough
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA OH MY FUCKING GOD!!! I QUIT LIFE, IM DONE. NOPE.
Author's Response:
Quite the shocker I know. At least Michael didn't give her 'the shocker' lmao........I wonder how he's gonna come back from this one?
[Report This]Date: Nov 15, 2013 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 32: It seemed like a good idea at the time......
Great chapter! Though, God help me, you could have spared me that image of Priscilla and her collagen stuffed face. Yipes, I'm gonna have nightmares tonight!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I found this chapter difficult to write so I'm glad to hear that.
Priscilla's face terrifies me. It looks like it's made of teflon and can't move at all. I fail to see how that look is preferable to aging. Give me wrinkles any day.
Date: Nov 11, 2013 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 29: The Clash Of The Titans
AWWW NO HER AND DIANA ARE GONNA FIGHT? COME ON MAN!!! Lord this is too much for me, I'm gonna need eight bottles of vodka after this....
Author's Response:
It is going to be EPIC. Olivia will lay the smackdown WWE style.
Date: Nov 11, 2013 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 26: State of Shock
Omg......alright I need to admit something. I don't really like the fact that Jermaine and Michael are fighting. I mean, I know that they did have issues with eachother in real life and all but I don't think Jermaine was all that vile LOL. But other than that, loved this chapter :)
Author's Response:
Haha I beg to disagree I think Jermaine was probably pretty vile he did impregnate his brother's girlfriend (Alejandra) and he wrote and leaked that bullshit song 'Word to the Badd" about Michael in the early 90s. He also apparently slept around and cheated on his ex-wife all the time. Of coure I could be wrong I don't know him personally and am being completely judgemental. he could be the nicest guy in the world. But that character would be no fun to write in the story.
Date: Nov 11, 2013 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 25: Lies and Betrayal
Oh lord what is Jermaine up to now....*sigh*
Author's Response:
He's up to no good, of course. As usual.