[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2014 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 6: Madonna-Whore Complex
This chapter was.. lmao. No words right now. None. Madonna is a real airhead to me right now. DING. DING. DING. Olivia takes the win!
Author's Response:
Never liked Madonna. Apparently Michael didn't either! Which is what inspired her appearance in this story. Well, that and her tacky white dress where her boobs were hanging out for all to see.
I once read that Michael spent time hanging out with Madonna, and his conclusion after all of it was that he thought she was a horrible person and even named one of his snakes after her. Hahaha no not that snake, one of his pythons was apparently named Madonna. And I doubt she knew about it at the time. Talk about shade.......
[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2014 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 4: Powerplay
Oh its hot. Olivia is good. Too damn good. Poor Mike.
Author's Response:
He never stood a chance, did he?
[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2014 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 3: It's On (Like Donkey Kong)
"Would you like a cookie?"
Oh I laughed like it was the end of the world.
Btw, I love the way you right. The words just flow and I love that.
Author's Response:
Cookies are mentioned again in a later chapter. What can I say, I have a sweet tooth.
And thank you for your kind words. They really mean a lot to me as all your stories are awesome!
[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2014 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Yogurt Wars
While reading as you described what Michael wore had me laughing. I love Michael in this story already. oh and the thing about having drama, I love drama and I can't wait to read it.
Author's Response:
I know you love drama, that's why I mentioned it. I love how in response to a large proportion of the reviews for your stories, you always say "No more drama for a while" and every subsequent chapter is like a soap opera. You just can't help it, well neither can I. I keep thinking "I need to tone it down" but as I'm writing all these crazy things come out. We both have the same disease.
And Michael as a gangster, well that's about as un-Michael as you can get. Which is why I tried to describe it comically. I don't think that's a look he could ever quite pull off no matter what reality we're in.
[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2014 07:40 pm Title: Prologue
This was so.. Even though its only the prologue it was written beautifully. The words just.. gahh. You got me.
Author's Response:
Awwww thank you girl! Your comment made my day.
The prologue for this story took me forever to write. I always have a hard time starting, once I get going I speed up.
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2014 09:03 am Title: Chapter 38: The Eye Of The Hurricane
OOOH MY GOD THAT WAS JUST..... GAAAAAAAAH
I'm literally fucking drowning in my tears that was so perfect and romantic and beautiful and sweet and omg :')
Thanks for making my day with this glorious chapter! :D I just PRAY whatever Julius is planning doesnt work and isnt anytime soon, let them enjoy this damnit!
Can't wait for more XD
Author's Response:
Awww thank you! I'm glad you liked it. Need to inject some happiness between all the drama.
I'm working on the next chapter right now, hope to have it up soon. Much sooner than last time!
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2014 08:43 am Title: Chapter 37: Mushroom Cloud
OH MY GOD WHAT?! Whoa this chapter was too much, I'm so relieved they arent siblings because that would have been so wrong eek
"Who the hell are these people? I don't think I want to be related to any of them."
Hahahahah you said it pal XD
But oh my god Julius is the reason Olivia's parents are dead?! Smh I hate this man
I wonder what Mike's planning to surprise Liv with, I'm praying he'll propose! XD
I'm too anxious to read the next chapter already up :3 Great update love!
Author's Response:
I had to leave the incest cliffhanger at the end of the last one, I couldn't resist. But no, they aren't related, that would be too twisted even for me.
Julius is an evil sociopath. As is often the case with such people, he hides it well at first. Olivia is in for a horrible surprise, she sort of trusts him, and it is going to bite her in the ass. But I'm not going to say how you'll just have to wait and see!
You'll find out Mike's surprise in the next chapter!
Date: May 30, 2014 02:22 pm Title: Prologue
My face when I saw this story... and then when I saw that you were the author... Wish you could've seen it... I will DEFINITELY be reading this story. Starting TODAY. I'm happy that you had one but I wasn't sure and my dumb self didn't check but definitely going to start reading this and shooting reviews your way. *two thumbs up*
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love all your stories so that really means alot to me :) I can't wait to hear what you think. This story has a fair amount of drama, just to warn you.
Date: May 06, 2014 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 37: Mushroom Cloud
Dang! I'm so lost cause its been awhile since I've last read this story, but this chapter was just wow! Is all I can say.lol
Author's Response:
Awwww thanks girl! I thought all my readers disappeared so thanks for your comment. It made my day!
Date: Mar 28, 2014 08:10 am Title: Chapter 36: Bombshell
WHOA!!! I did NOT see that coming. I knew Liv's parents dying in a car accident wasn't completely true. In the back of my mind I was always like "hm...what if her parents are still alive?" OMG THIS IS SO JUICY!! I cant wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Girl you'd better buckle up and hold on tight. The thing with Olivia's parents that you hinted at will be explained next chapter (I'm almost done!) and from here on out things are going to get EVEN CRAZIER.
Date: Mar 28, 2014 07:47 am Title: Chapter 35: Hitting The Fan
Yooooo. SEE, I KNEW LISA WAS UP TO SOMETHING. I can't wait to see this shit. And damn Liv, calm the fuck down!! I mean its understandable that she's that way because her sister is in custody for questioning, but STILL. Anyways, awesome chapter!! :)
P.S.- I love that disguise Michael's in, its so funny xD
Author's Response:
Olivia needs to learn to control her temper.
I love that disguise of Michael's he looks so sleazy it's hilarious.
And you're right about Lisa she is not to be completely trusted. When is she ever in MJF?
[Report This]Date: Mar 27, 2014 08:18 am Title: Chapter 36: Bombshell
Hmmm, what's a bit of incest got to do with running a successful business? Absolutely nothing, of course. Julius could drink Andy's blood from his lover's skull without as much as a stomach ache.
Author's Response:
You're right, Julius is a cruel and brutal man. Not to mention batshit insane.
[Report This]Date: Mar 27, 2014 07:25 am Title: Prologue
OMG, I definitely need to read again the last 5 chapters lol.
Author's Response:
I don't think my writing was clear enough. There's so much drama that it is hard to keep track!
[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2014 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 35: Hitting The Fan
I love how Olivia does not play when it comes to family or the ones she loves! You can really rely on her to do anything possible to help ;)
"He's just jealous he isn't as handsome as you are sweetheart." Olivia chimed in as she reassuringly stroked Michael's forearm.
Lmao I love how she just stated that as if it was the most obvious reason (probably was haha) XD But omg who did murder the dickhead?! I'm not a very good Poirot when it comes to this story lmao XD
Oh god.... Lisa, Lisa, Lisa...
Lord fucking help her if she tries it on with Michael and Olivia finds out... Go speak to Miss Ross honey. XD
BTW duuude I love Michael in that shirt
Gosh he should be illegal cos he's killing me. *______*
Ok I'm done, I think haha XD
Author's Response:
Yes the shirt with the leather straps is hella sexy. It makes me want to unbuckle him everywhere.
Lisa isn't dumb enough to make a pass at Michael when she is staying under the same roof as Olivia. She's got more sense than Diana. But that doesn't mean she should be trusted completely........
As for who murdered Freddy, it was Julius. Remember last chapter when he killed Tony? Tony was the hitman he hired to get rid of Freddy. I thought that part was obvious but maybe it was only to me! I may need to edit it to make it clearer, you aren't the only reader who missed that detail. See this is why I love reviews! They help me to improve.
I haven't explained Julius' motivations yet.
[Report This]Date: Mar 21, 2014 07:09 pm Title: Prologue
I love Olivia she's such a badass and I love the way she defends Michael. Their relationship is so damn adorable too! Great job with this story I'll be looking forward to the next update :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm so happy you like my story.
Olivia is a badass. I hate weak female lead characters so I've made her that way on purpose.