Date: Oct 29, 2013 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 31: Payback
Oh, Liv... Nooooo! Gosh that's messed up. I'm happy to see an update and can't wait for the next one. I love this story and your writing. :)
Author's Response:
Oh yes, Olivia just led on the thirst monster that is Jermaine........there will be unpleasant consequences to her actions.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: Oct 28, 2013 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 30: Ain't No Mountain High Enough
Update please! It's been a while.
Author's Response:
Latest update tonight! I know it's been FOREVER I have no excuse. Well, actually I do I was out of the country and then I had a HUGE exam. But I still feel really bad because I hate when good stories get left hanging. I hope people are still reading. I promise I won't stop updating this one till it's DONE no matter how long it takes.





Date: Oct 06, 2013 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 4: Powerplay
oh my god, Olivia is BOLD! love this!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you like it. Olivia can be a real bitch at times. Hopefully as the story progresses you'll like her character more.





Date: Sep 22, 2013 11:15 am Title: Chapter 30: Ain't No Mountain High Enough
DAMN DAMN DAMN, Camille?!?!!?! What was that for?!??! Oh God, I fucking hate Diana for doing that! Stupid bitch, smdh. When he wanted her before, to be his, she fucking ignored his feelings and now that he's famous and CLEARLY has a girlfriend, that idiotic Homewrecking famewhore just has to come and ruin everything?! SMDH. Oh God, she annoyed the fuck out of me. -_- poor Olivia. I can't say Michael is guilty, because he clearly isn't, but damn, Camille. How can you play with a persons feelings?! A sister is dying over here!!
Author's Response:
Hi Shinie,
Good to hear from you girl! What's a good story without DRAMA!? I know, Michael didn't do anything wrong. Well, he could maybe tone down the horniness and double check where he puts his penis but you can't blame the poor guy for being overenthusiastic. But will Olivia see it that way?
I promise that the next chapter will piss you off even more.
Thanks for reading, reviewing, and rating!





Date: Sep 18, 2013 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 30: Ain't No Mountain High Enough
That was pretty low of Diana to come on to Michael in his mother's home. I hope Olivia kicks her ass and Katherine cuss her out.
I was wonder if in the chapter you be continuing the plot about Alejandra and Celine. Now that Jermaine is at the get together I was hoping they would both call him on his bullshit and his cheating ways. He can't be just trying ruin Michael's relationship and not has his called into questioning.
Author's Response:
Hi Vicki! There will be a lot of Celine in the next chapter, I wrote a good chunk of it from her point of view. I'm trying to tie everything together with Jermaine/Mike/Olivia/Celine and Jermaine's bullshit actions in an.....unexpected way. That's all I'll say for now.





Date: Sep 16, 2013 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 30: Ain't No Mountain High Enough
Yay! I'm glad the story is back :)!
"She learned that the most powerful weapon in her arsenal rested between her legs; her vagina was something she used often and without regret"
GIIIIIIIRRRRRRLLLLL! LMAO!
Wow, Diana only wants someone to worship her. And now she wants Michael because he has someone in her life... Miss Ross just wants attention and I hope Michael won't fall in her game. Aww, look at him, he is so naive, not seeing the stare battle Olivia and Diana had! :)
"That's what happens when you only talk once a year."
Olivia is baaddd! Throwing shade left and right, I see you hunny!
Jermaine is pathetic and desperate! Damn, someone needs to quench his thirst. Trifling! What was he thinking when he invited Diana?! Listen, even if Michael decided to elope with Diana, does he really think Olivia will let him comfort her with his penis? Knowing that he is fucking with his sister? That he masturbate in her bed?! Bitch, please! Someone needs to knock some sense into his head! Does he need Mike to punch him again? We NEED Michael to punch him again.
Diana's thirst is serious too. Damn woman! Buy yourself a dildo or something...
*reading the last part*
YOU DID NOT DO THIS?! NOPE. NOPE. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
I think it's going to be like in this episode of Martin where Gina decide to kick the girl (played by Beverly Johnson) instead of Martin's. I mean, he just had sex with Olivia two seconds ago! Olivia needs to take a deep breath and remember Michael's feelings for her and Diana's thirst for attention. And acting like she doesn't trust Michael in front of Diana would be a bad move. A bad, bad, bad move. The only reason why Michael was excited that was because he thought that was Olivia's DSL on his penis.
Then she needs to remove her earrings, her heels and kick the shit ouf of Diana Ross.
And Michael... Listen, I have no idea what he can do to be forgiven. Good luck with that!
CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
Author's Response:
HEY ANNIE! Thanks for reading and reviewing. Just a heads up you are NOT going to like the next chapter.
Jermaine is delusional and needs to be locked up. As far as his plan goes, maybe it isn't as ridiculous as you might think.........or maybe it is? Muahahahaha.
Diana will definitely get her comeuppance. As for Olivia forgiving Michael, you'll just have to wait and see what she does.........





Date: Sep 16, 2013 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 30: Ain't No Mountain High Enough
Somebody needs to give Miss Ross a black eye. Scratch that, two black eyes. And a displaced jaw.
Author's Response:
Oh believe you me, Olivia will not let her get away without serious damage.
Date: Sep 03, 2013 10:56 pm Title: Prologue
So did Mussolini, Idi Amin and Ghaddafi....
Author's Response:
You have a point.





Date: Sep 03, 2013 03:08 pm Title: Prologue
"Maybe I'll get you to like Lisa's character?"
GIIIIRL, no
Author's Response:
You know you like it:
I'm going to bleach my eyeballs now.





Date: Sep 03, 2013 05:24 am Title: Prologue
And I did a little something for you :D
Follow the link :)
http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/9761/f1mw.png
Author's Response:
OMG THANK YOU SO MUCH I LOVE IT! AND I LOVE YOU TOO! That is so sweet of you Annie.......virtual hug:
I love the picture you found of Claudia Schiffer. And Michael looks delicious in that jacket.
I will definitely use it when I update next.





Date: Sep 03, 2013 05:02 am Title: Chapter 29: The Clash Of The Titans
oh ok. We know Latoya was forced to do it but they didn't know. And if I was Olivia, I wouldn't have called Toya and bitch and certainly not in front of everbody. That's family.
Jermaine is trifling. And Alejandra is not better. In what world do you fight the woman YOUR fiance fucked? You should be beating Jermaine ass! Lash your wrath on someone else!! And Alejandra? Didn't this bitch had children with Randy too. Get lost.
"Just you being here helps tremendously Sugar. You and your tight little ass never fail to make me feel good."
FREAK
Ms. Ross better check herself before Olive wreck her neck. We know Olive aint playing. Cant wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response:
Olivia can still be a bitch at times despite the fact that being with Michael has softened her. She isn't afraid to speak her mind, irregardless of tact.
We all know Michael was an ass man so I've incorporated a bit of that here. Olivia thinks she's corrupted him but I think he just feels more comfortable expressing it now, LOL. The perversion was always there.
And trust me, Miss Ross thinks she's the ultimate diva bitch but she's in for a big surprise.





Date: Sep 03, 2013 12:11 am Title: Chapter 29: The Clash Of The Titans
I never quite liked her for the way she played Michael when he was so young and vulnerable. She used him as a boy toy and that must have crushed his already frail self esteem. Nope, Miss Ross is no friend of mine....
Author's Response:
She definitely thrives off male attention with little respect for the feelings of others. Yeah, I'm not her biggest fan either. But you have to admit, the bitch knows how to make an entrance:





Date: Aug 30, 2013 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 28: A Low Boil
I feel bad for Latoya because she is scared of her husband and this is why she did those things. But I think Michael is super pissed and this is why we need the next chapter soon lol
Author's Response:
You're right but nobody understands that yet. Right now Michael is hurt and angry and he isn't too willing to even think about talking to Latoya. Maybe things will change though at some point.........but you know he's going to be stubborn about it because that's the way he is.





Date: Aug 30, 2013 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 28: A Low Boil
The legendary Jackson's thrist
I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTERRRRR
Author's Response:
YAAAAAS those boys are all thirsty as hell.