Date: Jun 01, 2013 01:06 pm Title: Characters
very awesome story. nice plot and i love fanfics like this.
BUTTT my problem is is that I just read another fanfiction that is a lot like this one- teacher and student. her fanfiction has the same exact plot as this one, and she made hers before you. in her fanfic the teacher (michael jackson) asks to give her a ride home and other things...
i am not saying that you are copying, just that the plot of her fanfic is way to similar to yours. i saw that in her review section you read her fanfic all of the time too.
its cool but EXTREMELY similar to a teacher's love by sydlovesmj.
but post more chapters:) we will see!
Author's Response:
Trust me i know i didn't mean to 'copy' it but our plots are completely different. Yeah Michael is the teacher and what not but in her story they hit it off and it's all love and games. My story is about Michael filling the emptiness he feels and the girl is the 'bad ass' of the school. She doesn't really like him either but he can see right through her hardcore attitude. So he helps her. No sex until later haha
Date: May 29, 2013 10:32 pm Title: Cold Shoulder
nice story;) I like it and will continue to read. good job so far.
sydlovesmj xx
(author of a teachers love lol)
Author's Response:
thanks sweetheart love your story by the way
[Report This]Date: May 23, 2013 02:33 am Title: Characters
I want moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! Please!
Author's Response:
Your wish is my command
[Report This]Date: May 22, 2013 04:15 pm Title: Cold Shoulder
More plz
Author's Response:
of course
Date: May 22, 2013 07:17 am Title: Cold Shoulder
Well yes, he is sexy!
Author's Response:
right!!!!
[Report This]Date: May 19, 2013 05:42 pm Title: Planning
loooooove it!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!
Date: May 19, 2013 02:58 pm Title: Planning
Gurl I love this, I need more now !!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much ima hop on that right now
Date: May 19, 2013 02:09 pm Title: Characters
Thank you so much I can just use that thank you and when in the world is you gonna update possessive 2
Author's Response:
Im working on it i typed half but caught writers block so im changing it and i will update it as soon as im done with it..sorry for the lonnngggg wait
Date: May 19, 2013 02:00 pm Title: Planning
She is in the hospital for a check up by her new doctor mr.jackson.
btw she has asthma
Author's Response:
Oh well you can start her off with having an asthma attack and she gets rushed to the hospital or she could be on her way for a check up to see if her asthma has lightened up a little
Date: May 19, 2013 01:37 pm Title: Planning
This gon be gooood. Ooohh. Ehy do i keep saying that LOL. Okay anywayss, i wonder what happened with mike that he got another choice. Must have fucked a student or whatever. Quick questiiioonn, just curious , but when r u gonna update possessive 2? .-. Idk i miss it . Loved this chapter btw
Author's Response:
You'll have to wait for an update and Possessive 2 will be updated as soon as i can think of the next chapter..i have some of it already typed but i got stuck in the middle so im going to have to change it but i didn't forget about it..sorry for the longggggggggggg wait lol
Date: May 19, 2013 01:33 pm Title: Characters
I want the main girl in the story to go to the hostpital for the check up but I dont know how I want to start it off
Author's Response:
You could have her doing something that leads her into going to the hospital or something like that. You want the story to build up or you could have her already in the hospital and start the chapter off by describing the area like her looking up at the lights or something..what is she in the hospital for?
Date: May 19, 2013 01:19 pm Title: Planning
Sorry I mean advice
Date: May 19, 2013 01:19 pm Title: Planning
The type of adive I need is like starting off a chapter
Author's Response:
Uhh well what are you writing about that can sometimes depend on how the story starts
Date: May 19, 2013 12:52 pm Title: Planning
update please now plz Im begging you i love this story and i was wondering if you can help me with some things in stories like advice
Author's Response:
I'll update as soon as i can and thanks for the love.
What kind of advice are you looking for?
Date: May 19, 2013 12:51 pm Title: Planning
i wonder what is going to happen at the diner? hmmmm
Author's Response:
You'll have to wait until i update it's going to be good too