Date: May 21, 2013 02:59 am Title: chapter four
LOVING this story! Yay! I'm kind of addicted to MJ slash fics, and this one is a refreshing addition. I really like the contrast between Michael and Xavier's personalites, and I can't wait until their relationship grows. It's so sweet how Xavier can't get Michael off his mind. You've got a permanent reader here, can't wait for your next update!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it! I will most likely update today or tomorrow depending on how I feel :)
Date: May 20, 2013 06:30 am Title: chapter four
Poor Xavier...you can't stop having dirty thoughts when you want, it's quite impossible lol
Date: May 19, 2013 07:45 pm Title: chapter four
No matter how hard he'll try Mickey got him. Please continue::)
Date: May 19, 2013 06:13 pm Title: chapter four
So, he can't stop thinking about Michael huh? Hmmm... Please continue ten full stars for you :) ;)
Author's Response:
Thank for the rate and comment, I'll update soon :)
Date: May 17, 2013 02:21 pm Title: chapter three
The magic between them is on, love it darling.
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: May 17, 2013 09:08 am Title: chapter three
So no one of them knows they're gay yet. That's interesting. It'd be fun...lol
Author's Response:
At first I was going to have Xavier be gay then try and "woo" Michael but I thought that would be too typical :) thanks for the review and rate!
Date: May 17, 2013 02:06 am Title: chapter three
WHAT A GREAT STORY, I LIKE IT. IT KEEPS BUILDING MOMENTUM. IT'S FUNNY HOW MICHAEL SAID TO FRANK, THAT HE DOESN'T LIKE ANYONE, LOL. FRANK DIDN'T DENY IT BECAUSE HE KNOWS IT TRUE, LOL. I'M GIVING THIS A PERFECT 10, PLEASE CONTINUE.:) GREAT STORY.:)
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Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it :) I don't know much on Frank but he seems like the type of person who doesn't like a lot of people :P
Date: May 17, 2013 01:49 am Title: chapter two
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WOW!!:) THAT WAS REALLY GREAT, AND VERY INTERESTING. I REALLY LIKE THE PART WHERE XAVIER, SAID HE WANTED TO PIN MICHAEL UP AGAINST THE TABLE AND.... LOL. THAT WAS A REALLY HOT VISION. I BET MICHAEL WILL DEVELOPE A CRUSH ON XAVIER TOO. I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT PART.:):):)
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Date: May 16, 2013 09:27 pm Title: chapter three
wow... What a chapter there sweetie :) Janet thinking that Mike and Xavier were doing something naughty then Michael himself wondering if he's gay or not hmmm... This has some twists and turns; I like it ;) please continue! 10 full stars for you :)
Author's Response:
Awe thanks, I'm glad you like it :)
Date: May 16, 2013 10:23 am Title: chapter two
Keep going, I already LOVE it!!!
Date: May 16, 2013 07:58 am Title: chapter two
This is so good! Please continue .
Date: May 16, 2013 06:30 am Title: chapter two
omg he even can turn a stright men to be a gay what a powerful men ;P
Date: May 16, 2013 03:23 am Title: chapter two
Loved it. I like this story so far. Really well written. Can't wait to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Thanks :) I'll try and post another chapter later tonight (its four o'clock pm right now)
Date: May 15, 2013 08:47 pm Title: chapter two
Awkward moment lol! Please continue!!! :) :)
Author's Response:
I would feel extremely awkward if that ever happened to me -.-" Thanks for the review and rate!
Date: May 15, 2013 06:13 pm Title: chapter one
This is my new review on this site, I like this type of stories. I'm putting you to my favorites list/
Author's Response:
Thanks that means alot :) I hope you continue to enjoy this story