Date: May 24, 2013 12:08 am Title: chapter six
Ho ho, is there a love triangle blossoming!? OMG. lol I could see Xavier being the jealous type for sure, can't wait to see what their meeting is like. Yippers!
Author's Response:
And love triangle sounds very tempting, but I'm not sure yet :P and I think you may like the next chapter ;)
Date: May 23, 2013 05:29 pm Title: chapter one
Love it honey please continue. /ml/
Date: May 23, 2013 10:26 am Title: chapter six
i realy love this story i like they are both not gay it will be so good
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it :)
Date: May 23, 2013 02:40 am Title: chapter six
Oh is Andrew supposed to be deeply involved in this story ?? of course I would like him as long as he doesn't hurt Michael Lol I've read this story from the first to this chapter at a one sitting :) and I can't wait to read next chapter now ! Please update soon <3 Love you and this story <3
Author's Response:
I'm not sure what I want do with Andrew, but I definitely want to introduce more characters to the story, especially with the realse of BAD coming up soon :) I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far! The 7th chapter is up now, so no more waiting (of course only until you finish the 7th chapter lol)!
Date: May 23, 2013 01:36 am Title: chapter six
That Andrew has something in mind...
I really like to read their thoughts...they're so confused! lol
So, they're going to meet again. If Xavier designed THAT Bad outfit, I'm sure Michael will love it...
Author's Response:
I like writing their thoughts more than writing their actions, so I'm glad you like it :)
Who doesn't like the BAD outfit? It's so damn cool you would be crazy not to like it!
Date: May 23, 2013 01:07 am Title: chapter five
Wow foursome with three hot sexy ladies ?? Xavier is BAD !! Lol He might have lots of fun that night but I hope nothing confidential slipped out from his mouth ! I already love this story very much <3
Date: May 23, 2013 12:34 am Title: chapter four
I love it I love it I love it !!! Xavier is sexy as well isn't he ?? *smile*
Date: May 22, 2013 11:11 pm Title: chapter two
Xavier was not a gay ?? Why was I thinking he was :) now I'm wondering if Michael is a gay or not in this story :) I just can't wait to read rest of this story !! xoxo
Date: May 22, 2013 09:15 pm Title: chapter six
Mmmm... Good indeed ;) hmm... I'm alittle suspicious about that Andrew guy let's wait and see what happens please continue dear :) ten full stars for you again :) keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comment and rate :) I'm sure Andrew won't cause too much drama ;)
Date: May 22, 2013 02:05 pm Title: chapter five
hahahahahahaha poor boy
Author's Response:
LOL I think everyone is feeling sympathy for Xavier now in their own way :) thanks for the comment!
Date: May 22, 2013 06:18 am Title: chapter four
I LOVE THE WAY XAVIER HAS IT IN FOR MICHAEL. HE REALLY WANTS HIM. I CAN'T BLAME HIM LOL. PLEASE CONTINUE THIS SEXY STORY MY FRIEND.:)
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Date: May 21, 2013 09:07 pm Title: chapter one
I completely agree with Dragdoll. I love the romance/fluff, it's my favorite part!
Date: May 21, 2013 08:30 pm Title: chapter five
Love when a story has real romance, when not only sex is involve. Love it!! Please keep the romance. Love the chapter Xavier better hold hi heart before it comes out of his chest when he see's Michael, Haha!!
Author's Response:
:) me too, I prefer both parties to actually get a chance to know each other before they doing the dirty deed, seems more realistic too me. I'm happy you loved the chapter and don't worry I'll keep the romance up! Thanks for the review and comment!
Date: May 21, 2013 08:04 pm Title: chapter five
SO cute, I'm really loving this! Xavier's gonna give up the ho life for Michael, lol. This story reminds me of Starlight Love, except xavier isn't a total jerk, and his attraction to Michael was immediately recognized. Aw, I bet they'll ignite sparks when Xavier comes over, can't wait! I'm really enjoying your characterizations and pacing. They're gonna make such an adorable couple. Keep it up! ^_^
Author's Response:
Starlight Love? Is it on here? I haven't read many stories on here yet, but if it's good, I wouldn't mind reading it :) I'm glad you like the characterizations and pacing, I'm trying really hard not to rush things because I have a terrible habit of doing so -.-"
Thanks for the review and rate!
Date: May 21, 2013 07:56 pm Title: chapter five
This is getting very good if I do say so myself ;) heheh poor Xavier was getti g nervous lol! Please continue! :) ten stars for you ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks :) I'll try and update tonight, if not most definitely Friday :)