[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2013 07:19 am Title: chapter eleven
Awwww Ash ! She's the best !! :)
He's coming Michael <3 I'm wondering sooo much what will happen in next chapter !
You've got to keep writing sweetheart XD u go girl <3
Really thank for ur effort, this is really great and I love it sooooo much !!! *kisses*
Author's Response:
I like ash too :) she reminds me of my little brother (he's seven)
I'm glad you like it because a week and a half from now, I will be updating a lot!
[Report This]Date: Jun 12, 2013 08:54 pm Title: chapter eleven
Ashley and Xavier being together is just so funny!! Lol! I was so relieved to know that he's not going to excuse himself from Michael but he needs to tell Ash soon please continue and ten whole stars for you :)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like them together :) I'm still debating on when xav should tell ash but most likely by chapter sixteen or eighteen :P
[Report This]Date: Jun 09, 2013 04:51 pm Title: chapter ten
OH, How long do I have to wait to know who it is ?? *whines some more T^T*
Now all you gotta do is get going with that writing and update soon !
Please Please ??
Author's Response:
Don't worry, I'll be posting it either late tonight or tomorrow evening depending on how work is :)
Date: Jun 05, 2013 05:21 am Title: chapter ten
Michael
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Maybe, maybe not ;)
[Report This]Date: Jun 04, 2013 08:53 pm Title: chapter ten
Woah, that's all I have to say :/ NOOOO XAVIER WHY!? Turning down Mike's invitation!! I'm gonna have to make him pay... >:( please continue ten stars for you ;)
Author's Response:
I didn't reveal who Xavier turned down just yet, but I guess you'll have to wait and see in the next chapter :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 04, 2013 06:05 pm Title: chapter ten
Oh, he better have picked Michael! He can see his friend any ol time, for Pete's sake, lol!
Author's Response:
That is an excellent point! :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 01, 2013 09:36 am Title: chapter nine
Aw, cuuute! they're goin' on a date, yay! Sorry, I've missed reviewing the last couple chapters. Life's been...interesting, lol. I'm totally pleased with the story thus far though, and I ook forward to the next part. seeing you've updated puts a ray of sunshine on an otherwise dark day. :)
Also, is Michael not a virgin in this story? If not, it only detracts slightly for me, since MJ seemed very virginal in his 20s, and I tend to assume writers will portray hims as such, but anyway, just a thought. :3
Author's Response:
I'm glad seeing me update makes you happy :) I want to make Michael a virgin in this story, however I don't I want to make him seem like he's totally inexperienced in the love department at the same time...
Date: Jun 01, 2013 08:41 am Title: chapter nine
awww that was sweet
[Report This]Date: Jun 01, 2013 12:15 am Title: chapter nine
Yay! Another chappie *clap* :D it looks like Michael can't get enough of Xavier now ;) please continue ten full stars for you :)
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2013 04:49 am Title: chapter one
I love it how MJ has his sensitive and darker moments. Truly a great story. Can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2013 09:35 pm Title: chapter eight
Wow, Mike really likes Xavier but because of his religion, he feels like his demons are about to eat him up whole but I like the part with the phone call with Liz Taylor please continue :) 10 stars for you :)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like the phone call from Liz :) I thought at this specific moment mike needed a friend so I thought Liz was the perfect person to cheer him up somewhat :)
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2013 09:29 pm Title: chapter eight
In this chapter, Michael hoping that he wants to be as happy as Liz is, when he's her age. it reminds me of him singing the finale parts of 'Elizabeth I love you' song. I remember the lyrics was 'Elizabeth, I love you, The world knows your work now, I pray one day I'll be just like... you~~~' XD the performance was beautiful <3
You want me to like this chapter ? God, I Love it <3 I want to read more and more ~ Please update soon honey :)
and btw your new banner, Xavier looks so fineeee ! <3
God bless you girl, have a beautiful day :D
Author's Response:
omg, its been so long since I've listened to that song! When I get home I think I'll go and listen to it :) I'm glad you like the chapter and banner! And yes Xavier looks fine, how could you not like a face like that? lol
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2013 09:16 pm Title: chapter seven
The desire that had laced through his eyes were no longer there and replaced by a sadness that clenched my heart. <- that really clenched my heart too !
This chapter was sooooooooooo hot, and I really love it <3 lol
I'm gonna read next chapter right now !!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it! :D
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I'm glad you like it! :D
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I'm glad you like it! :D
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I'm glad you like it! :D
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I'm glad you like it! :D
[Report This]Date: May 25, 2013 07:19 pm Title: chapter seven
Wow... That was HOT!! It was a shame that he had to leave so soon :( please continue!!! 10 stars for you :)
Author's Response:
Imagine what would happen if he stayed ;)
Date: May 25, 2013 05:44 am Title: chapter seven
love it that was so hot i hope they will be together soon
Author's Response:
Don't worry, just give it sometime and before you know it, they'll be together :)