Date: Nov 16, 2018 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG this story is getting so good, plz continue soon!!
Date: Dec 20, 2017 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 8
Elliot i really want you to clear my doubts ( And then die in the most terrible way ) djdksksks
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2016 06:09 am Title: Chapter 8
Continua, você me deixou muito curiosa! Tadinho do Michael, estou com muita pena dele
[Report This]Date: Feb 09, 2014 10:07 am Title: Chapter 8
I just have to say, I LOVE YOUR STORIES so much!!!! Four days ago I found your, "Our Love is Dawning" and I just couldn't stop reading. And then I read this story. I loved reading it so much that I just had to create an account and write a review. I am looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response:
Wow! Thank you so much! That means a lot, honestly!
Thank you - History Girl xx
Date: Jan 25, 2014 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 8
OMG!!! I can't wait to find out what will happen!
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2014 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 8
OMG I'M SO WORRIED ABOUT MICHAEL. ELLIOT IS NEGLECTING HIM SO MUCH. HE HASN'T HAD MUCH FOOD OR A DECENT BATH IN AGES IT SEEMS. I HOPE HE ESCAPES ELLIOT WITHOUT GETTING HIMSELF INTO EVEN MORE TROUBLE. HE CAN ALSO ESCAPE LATER IF HE GAINS MORE OF ELLIOTS TRUST NOW I THINK. I WISH MICHAEL THE BEST. XD THIS IS A GREAT STORY. XD:):):) PLEASE CONTINUE.XD I LOVE THIS STORY. XD I'M GIVING IT ANOTHER 10.
Date: Jan 25, 2014 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 8
Too late! Panicking now! Omg, this story has me on pins and needles! Michael can get away, I know he can!! You definatly have my attention and are carving at my heart with a spoon; in other words - excellent writing. Looking for your update!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!!
We'll see what happens to Michael!! :D
Date: Jan 25, 2014 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 8
This is pretty intense. Poor michael!! I wonder if he gets to escape? Take the chance and get punished? Back out completely? I can't wait to see!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'll update soon!! :D
Date: Jan 25, 2014 09:57 am Title: Chapter 8
I am so glad to see the update. Your story draws me in so much. I cannot help worrying about Michael. Elliot, please don’t hurt Michael and let him go!!! :'(
Author's Response:
We'll see Mwahahah! I've already decided what will happen x)
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2014 06:41 am Title: Chapter 8
i fucking love this story omg, i really wonder how it's gonna end!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! Wait and see :D
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2014 01:04 am Title: Chapter 7
OMG!! XD I LOVED THAT. THIS STORY IS SO INTERESTING AND SUCH A GOOD READ. IT HAS IT'S OWN UNIQUE FLAVOR THAT'S WHAT MAKES IT SO INTERESTING TO ME AND I LIKE THE CHARACTERS. XD ELLIOT REALLY HAD MICHAEL GOING IN THIS CHAPTER LOL. XD PLUS NOW MICHAEL AND ELLIOT OR FALLING IN LOVE. XD I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT, PLEASE CONTINUE. XD I'M GIVING THIS CHAPTER A 10. GREAT STORY.XD
Author's Response:
Thank you very much :D
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2014 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 7
Elliot is trying to induce Michael to love men just like Elliot said at the beginning. I am wondering if all the prisoners are dead. Has he ever really let go any of them?
By the way, Michael is such a cute PYT and he can seduce any man or woman if he wants. I have no doubt on that and needless to say, Elliot also has an obsession with Michael.
This story is great and full of unexpectedness. I really enjoy it. Keep on writing, please. <3
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'll update soon! :D <3
Date: Jan 21, 2014 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 7
Wow, this is crazy! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'll try to update soon!
Date: Jan 20, 2014 08:27 am Title: Chapter 7
Uh! This is emotionally exhausting! I can't take it! I hope Michael is acting; winning this jerk's trust, and then he gets away, and then we all go kill Elliot.
Author's Response:
Oh my God, I don't know how you're gonna like the rest of the story xD But, we'll see what happens :D
Date: Jan 20, 2014 08:12 am Title: Chapter 6
Noooo! I'm beside myself with woe! Michael has lost his brian or something! I know it's a coping mechanism, but - but - I have a rescue mechanism!
Author's Response:
Hahhaah, You're reviews are so cute to me! You're the only one objecting to the true LOVE...or is it love? Ahahhaha