[Report This]Date: May 06, 2013 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 9.
Sorry hun, I been out the last three days on my son's soccer tour around California... Anyways I imagened that way when Mike was talking to his rat, he must be dreaming or something because of the sparkles. I feel that his too lonely... That Jan is something else poor Mikey he should move out! haha, so lovelye hon... please continued...
Author's Response:
Thanks Mam and glad you had fun with your son :) aww...
Date: May 06, 2013 05:35 am Title: Chapter 9.
this is starting to be very interesting ;P hehe
Author's Response:
Thanks ;)
Date: May 05, 2013 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 3.
THAT WAS GREAT. THE STORY IS STARTING TO WARM UP.:):) THE NIGHT RIDER SCENE WAS VERY SEXY. PLEASE CONTINUE.
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Author's Response:
Thanks girl!!
Date: May 05, 2013 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 8.
I don't get it what is Michael talking to a rat? What really happened to the story it was going very well! Umm ::))
Author's Response:
Ben who was his pet rat, is his conscience giving him advice hope this made sense to you.
[Report This]Date: May 03, 2013 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 7. Part 2.
Dam, I bet that the rat is old. Mikey is till very inocent and Roy in turning him around, wille the girlfriend is gone. I really think that Roy will be the winner!! haha!...
Author's Response:
Hahahah...yeah let's see thanks sweetie :)
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2013 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 6. Part 2.
Ok here we go.
Michael met Roy. The chemistry between them is obvious! Michael is getting attracted to him but what about Roy?
Roy seems to be a wild guy ... who lives life freely. Michael is Jeova Witness , shy and very private. Maybe Roy could bring some excitement to Michael's life.
Will Michael seduce Roy or will be otherwise?
And the girl who Michael was dating... I wonder if she appears suddenly to see Michael ...
Thank you!
ps: Can you try a long chapter,please? :)
Author's Response:
Thanks girl, and like I said, I just have to get more ideas ;)
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2013 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 7.
Wow that was a steamy dream, love it hun and your so welcome. I love when writers give feedback. Love the story Hun.
Author's Response:
Thanks sweet-pea :)
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2013 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 7.
Oh dear! dam his want's him, that was a hot dream, Haa! haaa!,love it...
Author's Response:
Thanks deary! :)
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2013 07:42 am Title: Chapter 6. Part 2.
Roy might be jealous of April, ha ha! please continued...
Author's Response:
Hahaha! Thanks sweetheart :)
Date: May 02, 2013 01:50 am Title: Chapter 6. Part 2.
mmm i think Michael want him a little bit ;p
Author's Response:
Lol! ;p
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2013 12:34 am Title: Chapter 6. Part 2.
Oooh, I like it so far. I think you've captured Michael's character quite well, which is something many authors manage to muck up, lol. I can't wait to see how Roy and MJ's relationship progresses. I always love Michael paired with more of a dominant, brazen kind of guy. My only suggestion would be to make the chapters a bit longer, but thanks for taking the time to write this. I can't get enough MJ slash! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much there Mam, and Of course I will just gotta think of more ideas :) again, thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: May 01, 2013 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 6.
i would love for you to make this chapters longer if it's posible, i notice you do give feedback to your reviewers and i like that, i also like the sotry dear please continued:)
Author's Response:
Thank you Miss I'll try :)
[Report This]Date: May 01, 2013 07:58 am Title: Chapter 6.
He just want it to point it out at Roy about the girlfriend, I think that Roy will feel jealousy somehow, ha! haa!...
Honey this is soooo sweet love it...
Author's Response:
Yeah hahaha! You got that right ;) thanks dear :)
Date: May 01, 2013 07:42 am Title: Chapter 6.
oh wow
Author's Response:
Thanks babe :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 30, 2013 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 5.
Wow they want him married, nooo! Michael don't let them decided for you... Tito is funny.
Author's Response:
lol!! Yeah Tito is one heck of a guy thanks dear!