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Reviewer: Dragdoll Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2013 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 13.

That hottie belong to Michael, and I think that Roy is into Michael. The way he said his glad to hear his sweet voice his flirting with him.  Please continue girl!



Author's Response:

Hehehe.... Thanks sweetie :)

Reviewer: dreamlover Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2013 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 13.

OMG!! he must be that hot probably to have the sisters dreaming, Haha! so sweet love it hun please continued...



Author's Response:

Thanks ;)

Reviewer: dreamlover Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2013 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 12. Part 2.

I think it was great! poor Michael he's really tempted by Roy's sexyness and he should go to that party and I hope that Roy won't hurt him, well just a little haha! anyways, please continued...



Author's Response:

Thank you very much there :) yeah, Mike is tempted lol! 

Reviewer: Dragdoll Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2013 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 12. Part 2.

I'm looking foward for that special moment, continue is getting good.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much there Dragdoll :)

Reviewer: dreamlover Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2013 12:28 am Title: Chapter 12.

Anxious to know when Michael and Roy would meet again... continued hun...



Author's Response:

Thanks you'll be seeing him quite soon ;)

Reviewer: dreamlover Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2013 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 11.

good for you honey, spend time with your sister and a friend. I don't know what to say about the chapter only that his religion would condemn him if he ever gets involbed romanticly with a man. Humm isn't it? anyways continued hun...



Author's Response:

Thanks again there Mam :) hmmm... You are absolutely right let's see what will happen soon ;)

Reviewer: Dragdoll Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2013 06:23 pm Title: April Thompson and Penny Lawyers

This is cute shot but cute, him I'll put you in my favorites.



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Thanks :)

Reviewer: dreamlover Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2013 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 10. Part 2.

He's probably thinking of Roy, I know she don't deserved it and she's looking out for her dreams, her distant would make her lose the man she loves. He needs her too and I think that he feels lonely and Roy would be there for him.  I hope that Roy really loves him and won't end up hurting him... So sweet hun please continued...



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: dreamlover Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2013 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 10

I think she is leaving Michael behind for her dreams, is  more likely that she'll regret it. 



Author's Response:

Oh she's not; she still loves Michael but, it is her passion; she really didn't want to leave him behind at all but the Jacksons including himself, wanted for her to make it better for herself and to follow her heart.

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2013 03:52 am Title: Chapter 10

aaawww that was sad and sweet



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Thank you.

Reviewer: ILoveMJ777 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2013 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 6.

AHH IT'S CUTE HOW MICHAEL MISSES HIS GIRL FRIEND, BUT ROY IS PRETTY HOT THO, I THINK HE WILL LIKE HIM MORE. SEXY STORY PLEASE CONTINUE.

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Reviewer: ILoveMJ777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2013 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 9.

HAHA!! THAT WAS HALARIOUS HOW, JANET, RANDY, AND LATOYA MADE FUN OF MICHAEL MOANING. I THOUGHT IT WAS DELICIOUSLY HOT!!:):) I WISH I COULD HAVE BEEN THERE,LOL.:) PLEASE CONTINUE. GREAT STORY!!:) 10.

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Author's Response:

LOL!!! Thanks again!!

Reviewer: ILoveMJ777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2013 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 8.

:)

 

I LOVE THE DIALOG BETWEEN MICHAEL, AND HIS FAVORITE PET BEN.:) I DO BELIEVE IN LIFE AFTER DEATH, AND I BELIVE THIS, AND THE LAST CHAPTER ADRESSES THAT WELL.:):):) I LOVE THIS STORY. PLEASE CONTINUE.:)

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Author's Response:

Thank you glad you're loving it! :)

Reviewer: ILoveMJ777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2013 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 7. Part 2.

AH I THOUGHT THIS PART WAS VERY CREATIVE, AND CUTE. THIS STORY IS REALLY GOOD, PLEASE CONTINUE.:):) I GAVE THIS A 10.

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Author's Response:

Thank you so very much!! :)

Reviewer: ILoveMJ777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2013 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 7.

:)

 

GOD THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HOT!! LOL:):):) I LOVED THAT. PLEASE CONTINUE.:):)

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Author's Response:

Hehehe thanks :) :D

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