[Report This]Date: Sep 01, 2014 05:55 am Title: Chapter 7
They make a great couple.
[Report This]Date: Sep 01, 2014 05:28 am Title: Chapter 6
Awwwwwww....
Author's Response:
Yes they do ^_^ <3
[Report This]Date: Sep 01, 2014 02:08 am Title: Chapter 4
Awww... I feeel so sorry for Victoria! <3
Author's Response:
awwww... don't worry, she'll be alright :3 Thanks for reading! :D
Date: Sep 01, 2014 01:46 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh. my. god. I loved this!! The way they're fighting is so fun! They're both so stubborn! And I think Victoria is right about what she said about kids. I personally know some brats who's parents aren't raising them at all. They're being cruel brats for no reason at all...
Author's Response:
lmfaooooooooooooo they had issues when the story first began...but hopefully they got resolved. and the kids comment...lol you're right but MJ thought all kids were innocent :3 I'm glad you're enjoying the story though! ^_^ <3
Date: Aug 24, 2014 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 30
Continue please
Author's Response:
I will ^_^ like, real soon. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2014 09:49 am Title: Chapter 30
Dang her momma ain't tried to be sweet or nothing. She just came out the blue acting like she ran the place. Kind of reminds me of Joe tbh. And I'm mad she tried to sue her own daughter. What kind of mess is that? Smh
Anyway, that was sweet of Michael to take care of her like that and Victoria's reaction with the little girls was cute. But I'm mad Carol tried to be all nice to try and get Jeremiah to spill lol. She tried it smh
Oh and her mom does look mean. She looks like she doesn't take any mess.
Author's Response:
Yeah she's not a very nice person lol. Very shady and rude. And worse than that but... Well you'll find out later lol. And yeah it's cuteness all around :3
[Report This]Date: Aug 06, 2014 01:16 am Title: Chapter 29
Awww the flashback was cute. It was interesting to see that Michael and Victoria were actually friends when they first met. And the little flirting back and forth between them was adorable. That young innocent love a86;a039; As for Caroline...something is wrong with that woman for real. She has to be the reason why poor Victoria never really had any friends because of her crazy ass. What kind of mother would want for her child to use people like that and for fame at that? Smh. The thirsty is unbelievable. Anyway, I hope that we'll be able to see how Michael and Victoria's friendship fell downhill. I feel like it was most likely because of Caroline though.
The shooting for 'Jam' didn't go as bad as I thought it would. They all seemed like they had a good time even with Victoria having a cold.
But oh gosh at her momma showing up. I knew it was only a matter of time. Hopefully this won't go so bad but then again, Victoria has been holding on to the things of her past and we don't know if Caroline has changed or not so this should be interesting. Poor Victor.
Author's Response:
Yeah the thing for Jam, Victoria always acts positively when she's around Michael. Her mothers's absense was a good thing but now... Well now someone's in trouble lol. And poor thing went through some things with her mom so her mom returning isn't too much of a good sigh. Lets see how "Victor" plays this out. And yeah the flashback was real cute ^__^ except for the end part of course *sigh*
[Report This]Date: Aug 06, 2014 01:03 am Title: Chapter 29
I can personally relate to Victoria's childhood relationship with her mother only it was my dad that I had issues with back then. Her mom obviously needs some professional help or she should just cut her out of her life. No one needs a parent like that in their life and they are better off with out them. I can tell that her mom is going to bring a lot of drama to the story until either Victoria cuts her out of life for good or she goes back to Eroupe. I'll keep my fingers crossed for Victoria and Michael.
P.S. Ironically my name is Victoria too, lol
Author's Response:
Awww :( well I can't really identify her on that front but her mom does have issues. Lets hope she does cut her mom out of her life for good. And yeah, her mom is full of drama and only wants to bring trouble. So yeah, lets just see how she handles everything and lol cool! I love the name Victoria :)
Date: Jul 20, 2014 04:21 am Title: Chapter 28
Lol that was funny continue
Author's Response:
Lol thank you! I will ^_^
[Report This]Date: Jul 18, 2014 12:51 am Title: Chapter 28
Hmmm I wonder how this thing with Victoria and her momma is going to go since she said she was ready to speak to her. Hopefully it won't go too bad and bring out the worst in Victoria since she's been making progress. And if she does decide to go to Chicago, I wonder if drama is going to unfold with the situation of Victoria and Naomi on the set of In the Closet being vice versa for Michael having some kind of jealousy with Victoria and Michael Jordan tsk tsk.
Author's Response:
Yeah, Vicky's mom wasn't really a good influence on the poor girl lmfao. So she's nervous that her mom is back for many reasons. And LOL MJ gets jealous at the drop of a hat so lets hope he won't do that on the set of Jam; IF she goes of course :P
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2014 09:13 am Title: Chapter 27
I read the end of that last chapter so wrong when I thought that "Vicky" was someone else lol but anyway, Darius seems like a cool dude and he and Victoria seem pretty close so Michael should have nothing to worry about. His little jealousy streak was cute though. I was side eyeing Darius for some of the names that he called out when he was trying to guess who Victoria was dating. He's such a troll lol. Anyway, I always say this but Mike and Vicky are so cute 😊 Their lives are really about to be even more hectic though when Mike goes on the road and she starts filming.
Author's Response:
Lol you definitely did. Mike doesn't want any dude near his girl even if he is a bestie lol. He's a jealous lil baby. And yes, their lives will get crazy busy real soon. Lets just hope they can weather the storm of all that work ;)
Date: Jun 10, 2014 10:35 am Title: Chapter 27
Darius was such a mess with those other guesses lol.
Author's Response:
Lmao he was allllllll types of wrong
Date: Jun 10, 2014 02:21 am Title: Chapter 27
Awww that was cute, continue please
Author's Response:
Lol thanks! And I will ^__^
[Report This]Date: Jun 04, 2014 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 26
Victoria knew good and well that she liked Michael from the start. She been trolling on him since the beginning of time. Poor Michael for being so sweet and not knowing how to handle that "she-devil" lol although if it was me I would've pushed her in the pool lol. He was good for that. But yaaaay for the flashback. It was cute :)
Author's Response:
Oh trust me, he definitely wanted to push her into the pool lol. And well... We'll see how more flashbacks go lmao. But she was playing games though. And who knows? Maybe you'll learn why she acts that way towards him lmfao. Thanks for reading!
Date: Jun 01, 2014 05:28 am Title: Chapter 26
I fucking love this PLEASE PLEASE continue
Author's Response:
I'm glad you do and I will! Thanks for reading!