[Report This]Date: Jul 15, 2013 10:45 am Title: Chapter 7
Awwhhh "Fun Day" literally was a fun day lol!! Victoria did great with the children and that was so sweet of her to give Amy her sunglasses :')
YASSS Victoria beat MJ lmao they're both so competitive!
Oh I can't wait for them to go on their first date *squeals* :-)))
Lovely chapter!!! I enjoyed it very much it kept me smiling the whole time ^____^
xoxoxoxo Toni
Author's Response:
lmfao she did a good job! She actually has a soul! lmfao and yes they are and will remain so in a lot of ways. Lol aw snap, first date.. *giggles*. thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Jul 14, 2013 11:31 am Title: Chapter 13
I can't wait to see how things go for them in the future. Them so cute! :D
Author's Response:
Lmao I can't wait either! Thanks for reading! ^__^
Date: Jul 14, 2013 11:26 am Title: Chapter 13
:O lovely :D
Author's Response:
Thanks! ^__^ <3
Date: Jul 14, 2013 09:01 am Title: Chapter 13
Good very well done gurl. I can honestly say I loved everything about this chapter. Update soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! And I'm glad you enjoyed it ^___^ <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2013 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 13
Awww Mike and Victoria are so cute lol. The grocery shopping scene was adorable. It's amazing how the kids were able to recognize him even though none of the adults could. Mike had that special affect on kids lol. Victoria is one lucky girl. Breakfast in bed by a man who can cook? You can't go wrong with that. Her interaction with Bubbles was cute too. Its funny how she was able to just freely express her feelings out like that to a chimp lol. But it all worked out for her good *cough* the sex scene looool. Anyway, I enjoyed it. ^_^
Author's Response:
loooool yes, and their banter with each other even had me fangirling loooooooool. and yes, kids are able to see his magic even when he's hidden under all that garb xD and haha MJ gave her the royal treatment! das love ^__^ *COUGH* the sex scene was looooooooooooooooooooooooooool I ain't e'em gone go dere. thanks for reading! ^__^ <333
Date: Jul 13, 2013 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 13
Damn! That sex scene was the bomb ish! I've been waiting for an update for an eternity..lol jk maybe not an eternity but its been awhile. Anywayssss i loved this chapter and story. It was sweet, cute, and sexy. Keep it up!!
Author's Response:
lmao! I'm glad you're enjoying it gurrrl, and I will! thanks for reading! <33
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2013 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 2
I just started reading this story & i love it!
Author's Response:
Glad to hear that! Hope you're enjoying and thanks for reading! <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2013 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 6
Michaellllll was bold AF in this chapter lol he definitely ain't hiding his feelings for Victoria and he made it crystal clear that he wants to try and help her change and become a nicer person :)) I hope this trip to Neverland brings them closer together *squeals* this is getting too good!!
Author's Response:
lmfao he's not playing games! lmao like literally xD and welp, we'll just have to see how it goes! Thanks for reading! <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2013 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 5
The partyyyy was AMAZING!!! Eddie had me CTFU with his silly self lmaoooo Victoria's apology to Mike was genuine and I'm glad they were able to put all that behind them.
HOLY FUCK I did not expect this to happen *squeals* The chemistry between MJ an Victoria was abjahfhafhfahhffd LAWD now things are about to get real lmao Victoria knows she wants some of this sexy man, don't fight it *wiggles eyebrows* :-)
Great chapter! xoxoxo Toni
Author's Response:
lol this is one of my fave chapters that I've written! Thanks for reading! and giiiirl lmfao she does, she does! That was the start of something new ;) <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2013 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 4
Welp that didn't go well :/ But I think after that conversation Victoria had with her brother it seems to have opened her eyes a lil bit and hopefully she'll change and stop being such a bitch lmfaooo I'm hoping for a REAL apology at this party and maybe MJ and Victoria can maybe try to be friends :)
Author's Response:
lmao of course it didn't! Her childishness came back. But the party definitely could change things :3 a lot of things... thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2013 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 3
I like Victoria she seems like a successful, independent woman who don't take shit from nobody, but honey all that attitude ain't cute lmaooo well at least she's going to apologize to Michael so that's the first step lol can't wait to see what happens next :)
Author's Response:
She REALLY doesn't take crap from anybody tbh but also she kind of has an attitude issue lol. Poor baby. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2013 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
Damnnnn Mike and Victoria obviously can't stand each other but HOLY SHIZZ all that unnecessary bickering was to much lmaooo they were both going at it like lil kids.....I died @ "black or Yellow" CTFU I can't with these two.
Author's Response:
LOL they have issues but Victoria did kind of start it I guess xD drama, drama, drama! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2013 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
*squeals cause Dangerous era* Lmfaooooo
Omfgg this is going to be good I can tell :-) Awwww I love Victoria and Jeremiah's brother-sister bond I wish I was close with mine :(( welp! lol
Anyway so far me likey :-)
xoxoxo Toni
Date: Jun 13, 2013 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
black or yellow ???
I nearly died there
Author's Response:
I'm so laaaate but LOL! She's a mess;__; thanks for reading!
Date: Jun 13, 2013 09:02 am Title: Chapter 11
Just started this story yesterday and