Date: Nov 04, 2013 02:41 am Title: Chapter 3
Victoria needs to take a reality check and hop off her high horses. She is mean and being a child star is no excuse for acting like the whole world owes her a favour.
Author's Response:
Lol yeah I guess I can agree with you. But she's got a difficult personality so *shrugs* lol she'll learn :) thanks for reading!
Date: Nov 04, 2013 02:33 am Title: Chapter 2
A few minutes more and we'd have witnessed a boxing match....Hahaha!
Author's Response:
God I'm late but looooool yes you might have! They were a mess in this chapter smh. Thanks for reading!
Date: Oct 06, 2013 08:00 am Title: Chapter 16
lol Naomi has no filters whatsoever! She just didn't care tsk tsk.
Side eying Victoria for wetting Naomi's weave though. She knew better than that. That's like an automatic beatdown. No matter how jealous she was that was just rude. And then she went and gave Mike the silent treatment without even trying to find out all the facts and then 'gon get mad when he started ignoring her. *judging*
But anyteewaaayyys they got it innn. *Snoop Dogg voice* Dey got the good good.
Not here for Karen. Ole sloth face hussy.
Hmmmm....wondering who this unexpected guest was...guess I'll have to wait to find out. ^_^
Date: Oct 06, 2013 01:04 am Title: Chapter 16
Don't tell me this is an ex at her damn door. Smdh. And I knew Vic would have some issues with the video and ms no edges Campbell chile. Lmao mm hmm. But Mike knows better and now she better too. Mike is taken. And Imma need for Karen's amateur makeup skills havin ass to fall back too. That bitch knows Michael and Victoria are a couple. Mike kept some messy bitches around him. Smh. Ugh. At least Michael know he better keep it cute and on mute with his video hoes. Vic don't play that!!!! Cuz lawd knows if she ever does a film and love scene with Denzel or a Boris Kodjoe, he will be a jealous mess.
Date: Aug 31, 2013 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 15
Tell me why I was laughing at Mike trolling on Jeff though. I knew he wasn't right! Jeff didn't even have a reason to get mad because he knew what he had done was wrong. His triflin' behind. Victoria better be glad that Mike came and played 'Captain Save a Hoe' loooool otherwise her day would have been just too tragic. smh I really can't with Michelle and Victor though. Those two are a mess and a half.
And I just knew that as soon as Mike mentioned her coming on the set for his film that you were gonna say ITC. I know you too well tsk tsk. I'm ready to see Victoria's reaction to Mike and Naomi if Naomi appears in this story *snickers*
Date: Aug 31, 2013 07:20 am Title: Chapter 15
Update, very good chapter!
Date: Aug 31, 2013 05:04 am Title: Chapter 15
Just wait till Victoria sees Ms. Chocolate long legs lol
Date: Aug 31, 2013 12:31 am Title: Chapter 15
Lmao I'm so glad they have Jeff a dose of his own medicine. He better get his shit together and keep it together chile. He don't want it with the King and his woman. He will get drug for complete blood and filth. Lmao. And interesting.. She's going with him to In the Closet short film shoot huh? That should be funny. I know she will not hesitate to tell Naomi no edges havin Campbell to back up off her man. I know that! And Michael will get his ass snatched too if he don't keep it cute and on mute. They are such a cute couple though. I love them. Mike and his boo Victoria. Neither of them are going anywhere.
Date: Aug 02, 2013 05:33 am Title: Chapter 1
please keep writing;)
Author's Response:
I will, thanks! :))
Date: Aug 01, 2013 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 14
Ohhh Lord Jeff is coming back?! This is about to be a mess lol. MJ's reaction was better than I thought it would me. smh Victoria should have listened and put that restraining order on Jeff like Mike told her to do in the first place. Things are about to get heated tsk tsk. I can feel it.
P.S. I do know ole boy that you have as Jeremiah!! I told you I just needed a visual! lol
Author's Response:
Yup that trifflin sucka is coming back unfortunately smh. And yeah things will get a little crazy maybe, but then again maybe not lol. And she's very hard of hearing lmao and she doesn't take advice well. But we shall see how things go! And lmfao! I knew you would know him lmao
Date: Aug 01, 2013 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 14
They're so damn cute. Seriously. And aww at Gabby being Victoria. I kinda figured that would be her based on the banner for the story. Lol. They are a very sweet couple, good to see them progressing. All this baby talk makes me wonder will she get knocked up soon. Lol
Author's Response:
Lmao a baby lmfao. Ion know about that but then again who knows? And yes they are quite adorable. And yes haha I love gabby :) thanks for reading!
Date: Jul 16, 2013 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 11
wow Jeff was out of damn line for popping up like that with his fake ass apology :/ Thank God Michael was there to protect Victoria or else who knows what Jeff's crazy ass would have done. Jeff is lucky that Victoria didn't press charges, Welp hopefully he'll leave her alone.
Date: Jul 16, 2013 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh Lawddd first of all Jeff is a complete asshole and now he's at Victoria's house being a total cockblock!!! lmfaooo like mannnnn wtf does he want? I can't wait to find out, and Mike was just about to put it down ;) hehehe XD
Author's Response:
looool right like "bitch what do you want?". he was on his stalker status and being a complete cockblock. thanks for reading! ^_^
Date: Jul 15, 2013 11:34 am Title: Chapter 9
Asgahjsibxxsdjhkkxnjxx VICTORIA GOT THE D!!!! YASS get it all Lmfaooooooo I'm so perverted lemme stop ;) lol I have to agree with Bethany the relationship is going fast but whatever they're cute together lmaooo They said "I love you" to each other awwwwhhh :') My heart!! lol
Great chapter :-)
Much Love, Toni
Author's Response:
lmfao you're so peverted!! and yeah, too fast but you know mike was the king od fast relationships irl lmfaaao. Thanks for readong! ^_^
Date: Jul 15, 2013 11:10 am Title: Chapter 8
They're so cute together :-) and it seems like they both have a lot in common. The kissssss *flails* lol Welp I can't wait to see what happens next *wiggles eyebrows* lmaooo
Author's Response:
Yes, they're pretty adorable ^___^ and yup! Look what happens when you actually get to know someone lmfao xD. Lol! Dat kiss doe, yaaaas. Thanks for reading!