Date: Apr 24, 2013 04:46 am Title: Chapter 4
He's already falling for the girl! Gosh Michael, calm down the anaconda, you only just met her.
Great so far!
PS: Savanah = Cock block/ awkward third wheel. Ahaha
Date: Apr 24, 2013 04:42 am Title: Chapter 2
Great :) Though it sounds pretty far-fetched, can't wait to read more
Date: Apr 24, 2013 04:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Haha, cute! He's so bold but so discrete, how sneaky! Lol continue
Date: Apr 23, 2013 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 4
This is a bit....wheres the rest.
Date: Apr 22, 2013 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 3
girl keep going you top right in the middle what wrong with you lol
Date: Apr 22, 2013 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 3
Keep going girly....dont be shy to be agressive, funny, all out in your....let your instincts sway-write for you!
Date: Apr 22, 2013 03:21 am Title: Chapter 2
Update soon plz!
Date: Apr 21, 2013 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
I like this keep going
Date: Apr 21, 2013 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 2
Can u make the next chapter a bit longer..thanks
Date: Apr 21, 2013 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nice chapter darling!
GO GO GO!
Author's Response:
thanks writing chapter 2 now.
Date: Apr 21, 2013 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is great!...Zoey shld call or text Michael...wish I cld sit with them sipping coffee!....continue...luv the plot!
Author's Response:
yeah me too,i wish sip coffee with sip coffee with him too