Reviewer: missmj2014 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2013 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 9:OMG

OOOOMG Michael n Ashton 

are going on a date!!!!!

I hope Ashton don't show out!!!LOL

Please update Soon!!

Author's Response:

Thank you soo much 

meh too!!<3

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2013 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 7::CRAP!!!!

Damn mike :(

Author's Response:

Lol I know!! :<

Reviewer: April Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2013 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 5:;Don't Leave Out This Room No Matter What

Thank you! Lol and your welcome! Im starting top really like this'd book

Author's Response:

Thank you sooo much!!

And you welcome!!<3

Reviewer: CrazyForMikezilla Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2013 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 6::Oh God No

Oh shit!!! Btw cud u please make the chapters a lil more longer? Not trying to beg lol. I loved this chapter too! <3

Author's Response:

LOL!!<3

Okay the next chapter will be 

longer Thank you.

Reviewer: April Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2013 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 5:;Don't Leave Out This Room No Matter What

Nic eee girl. I like it :) keep going! BTW.... How did you put up pictures lol

Author's Response:

Thank you so much

And the only thing you do is right click on the mouse of your favorite pic

and you will see copy URL, then on this site you see 

a pic of a little tree where you write your story and you click on

it and you will see image URL and you right hand click and you click paste

Then right after you do that you click inside the preview box.

And Thanks again Sweetie

Reviewer: True_Critic Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2013 09:41 pm Title: Chapter : What the hell you looking at ?

This sounds almost like another story but i like your writing style though.

Author's Response:

Awwww Thank you!!<3

But I promise you I will never

try and copy someone else writing.<3

Reviewer: MikeMakesThisNookiePop Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2013 07:48 pm Title: Chapter : What the hell you looking at ?

She need a muthafuxking ass whooping!!!! I mean beat down my nigga! Her ma need to grab that damn belt and left her ass by one arm and just start going ham on that shit!

Author's Response:

LOL IKR!!<3

Reviewer: Aaliyah247magic Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2013 09:59 am Title: Chapter 1:: School

Great start!

Author's Response:

Thank you Everone 

should read my story ,

Against The Odds