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Reviewer: chelley Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2015 12:56 am Title: The Grammy's

Wow. This was just one complete melt down, but I do feel where Michelle is coming from (hint: although I saw the original Grammy 🏆show/performance on YouTube) he's freaking Michael Jackson!! I understand on his part it's humiliating and heart breaking, but he's freaking Michael Jackson!! No one can hold a candle or even compare to him. No one is on his level. He is really the one and only truest entertainers of all time. From the performances, the videos, etc. 

Sick it up Mike, you always come back 50x stronger and better so it's OK. 

Reviewer: chelley Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2015 12:34 am Title: The Rough Patches

Damn Michael. That's really harsh. You can sit up in rehearsal and gaze over Tatiana figure and the way her clothes fit and invite her to the Grammy's 🏆but not YOUR wife Michelle? Then told Michelle to deny if people ask? Really? Honesty, I'd go with someone else too. 

(PERSONAL THOUGHTS) : Fame or not, you DONT act that way towards someone you "SO-CALLED" love and can't wait to marry and be with. 

Reviewer: chelley Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2015 12:16 am Title: Marry Me

Damn Mike. Can't be happy for her? You know she loves 😍 you. Chill dude. 

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Date: Apr 17, 2015 12:03 am Title: She's the One

Wow 😮😱 things just took a drastically turn on the first stop of the tour I see, but glad to hear that they kept making up, sticking it out, and finally getting married 💍 

Reviewer: chelley Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2015 11:53 pm Title: Falling in Love

I also love 💟 how sex wasn't such a big deal either. I'm 20, will be 21 July 30th and I'm still a virgin too. 

Reviewer: chelley Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2015 11:50 pm Title: Falling in Love

Michael living a double life on the low lol 😂 but marriage 💍 well at least she would know that he really, truly is serious. The whole joke with the 💍 size lol that's a good one. If it was me, I don't even think I would've picked up on that. 

Reviewer: chelley Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2015 11:36 pm Title: Robert

So Michael and Michelle kiss 😘 then she ends up with some guy Robert 💑 who she "SUPPOSEDLY LIKES" so much, gets on the phone a42;📞 with sexy ass Michael who tells her to end it with Robert, and she does. So now, she with Michael I guess? Bayb girl 👩 knew she liked 😍 Michael from Jump Street so poor little Robert was in the equation for nothing. LMAO 😂 😂 😂 OK. 

 

Reviewer: chelley Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2015 11:23 pm Title: Friends

So the "SUPPOSED FRIEND" sold Michael out. No the stories wasn't true, but sold him out anyway. You really can't 🙅 trust people now days ESPECIALLY if you are wealthy and have fame. If you're wealthy and have fame, you don't have any friends, they're just people you know because everyone wants to claim they know you, use what they can get out of you, and want your money 💰💱💸💷💶💴💵💳💰

Michael and Michelle FINALLY got their feelings out of the way 😃😆

Reviewer: chelley Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2015 11:03 pm Title: Janet's New Dancer

Lol 😂 I just love how nosey 👃 Michael is and how he was doing all this snooping around. 



Author's Response:

Lol! New Reader! Welcome! Did you read the first in the series (Michael: Magic, Madness, Untold Story)?

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2014 10:26 am Title: A Conversation

I really enjoyed part three! Reading Michael's POV almost makes me want to read the entire trilogy all over again! I don't think you understand how badly in love I am with this series! Anyway, even though there is a lot of back and forth between Michael and Michelle, there's no denying that those two are inseparable. They belong together. Point. Blank. Period. I just hope that they'll be able to make it work this time. Can't wait for part four!!!

Reviewer: MJStanForLyfe Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 26, 2014 06:42 pm Title: Authors Introduction

Omg, I'm so glad you updated! I thought you weren't going to write anymore. I've literally read this story and the other ones over 10 times. If you think no one is reading and you're writing for nothing. Trust me, you aren't. I check back everyday to see if you have an update. I'm so happy for this!

Also if you don't mind can you touch on this topics:

I believe in the story Layla is like 14 or 15 (or younger) but I think these would be intresting point of views.

Paris and Layla : (love, sex , boyfriends, friendships, fun times, bad times.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! I;m glad you're still reading and enjoying them!! It means so much to me!

 

And yes, as far as Paris and Laya...that is definitely coming up in the future. Good suggestion! :)

Reviewer: BitchesLoveMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2014 01:06 pm Title: Authors Introduction

OMG :D! I haven't started reading the new chapters yet because I'm fangirling so hard :). I was reading your stories the othr day. I'm so glad you updated this :) <3

Reviewer: Moonwalker95 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2013 05:46 pm Title: Prologue

Omg I so glad your putting his story up :) can't wait to read the rest xx

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2013 10:55 pm Title: "Wait For Me"

Yes! YES YES YES of course I want part 3!

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2013 11:01 am Title: "Wait For Me"

Oh gosh! Just when I thought that they were making progress they just had to take 5 more steps backward! Michelle didn't have a reason to get angry though because she asked for it herself. She should tried to understand where Michael was coming from. I can't wait for part three! ^_^

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