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Reviewer: ludiwats Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2016 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 3

Do you continue that story ? It's seems interesting ;)

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 07, 2013 11:13 am Title: Chapter 3

haha boothang gosh Jack he is crazy i hope Michael is going to be ok

Reviewer: Southern_cutie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2013 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 3

girl Lol you didn't kill Michael!!!! you're just drop dead sexy!!!!! girl get it!!!!! I need  learn how to do that!!!!

Reviewer: ALLFORLOVE77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2013 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 3

Ohhhh, poor Michael!!!!!

And lucky Jess!!!!!!

I really like this story, hope you continue soon!! :)

Reviewer: Hanna_MJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2013 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 3

Omg!!!! Hahah I am loving this story!!! I hope Michael's gonna be okay though. Oh what am I saying? Of course he is! Lol

Please update soooooon! ;))

Reviewer: Rate Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2013 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 2

Love it so far! Continue!

GO GO GO!

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2013 04:33 am Title: Chapter 2

omg Michael is he ok what is going on?

Reviewer: Hanna_MJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2013 04:09 am Title: Chapter 2

Ooh I love this already!! Poor Michael though.. But I can imagine who the lucky girl is ;)) can't wait to see where this is gonna go!! :D great job! 

Reviewer: Southern_cutie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2013 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 2

ohmahgad ohmahgad is he alright?! someone help him!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2013 05:12 am Title: Chapter 1

hehehe love it already i hope Michael will fight for her

Reviewer: CrazyForMikezilla Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2013 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hahaha her brother's so funnyy :D anyways, this sounds cool :)

Reviewer: Southern_cutie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2013 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

lol i loved this!! and I think that if he really did hurt u likeI think he did then u need to get over him!!! and hopefully Michael can help in that process ;) great job keep it up!!!

Reviewer: Cali_Santana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2013 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

I like it so far continue please!!

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