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Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 08, 2013 03:31 am Title: Chapter 8

oh gosh please next part soon i wonder what will Michael say



Author's Response:

Yeah, I'll update in a couple of hours :)

Reviewer: RhythmChild Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 07, 2013 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 8

Oh. My god. Please Michael oh PLEASE just say yes! SAY YES! LIKE FLOETRY YES!



Author's Response:

Hahahha,

We'll see Michael's reaction :D

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 07, 2013 10:33 am Title: Chapter 7

omg just tell each other  feelings gosh I like this story



Author's Response:

Hahah, thank you so much :)

Reviewer: Eltoie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 07, 2013 06:46 am Title: Chapter 7

Good thing that they'll talk about it. Will seems like a good man for Michael. ;)

Liked the chapter! <3



Author's Response:

Yeah, they're good together...

Thank you for the review :) <3

Reviewer: Eltoie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 06, 2013 03:44 am Title: Chapter 6

I just read the whole story and wow! You've got talent! I loved it! This is gonna be one of my fav's! :D

It's a really good story and I loved the part where Michael was acting silly and drunk. Plus, it's great that you update so often. ;)

Pls continue! <3



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Yeah I update so often because I'm on a break from school for 2 weeks...it probably slow down after next week :/

But yeah thanks again :) xxxx

Reviewer: Hanna_MJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2013 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 6

Okay what is Michael's deal?? Haha poor Will. Michael obviously has a thing for him, and he clearly knows about his feelings. He's being weird lol



Author's Response:

Hahah, yeah...Michael is being weird :S

Thank you for the review :D

Reviewer: RhythmChild Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2013 08:26 am Title: Chapter 5

SO i read the chapters again.

And you might be GAWD.

Because now I'm begging for an update within the next hour. I've been snapping at my screen like it's Will for no reason.

"GO INTO THE ROOM! GO INT THE ROOM YOU BASTARD!"

I need help. bye. lol.



Author's Response:

Thank you :)
Not going to lie, I cried when I saw this review...i don't even know why...i think it's cause I miss someone...Sorry

What am I even doing.

I'll try and update again today :)

I don't even know where the story is heading yet... xx

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2013 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 4

oh my this is getting good gosh both are in love so cute

Reviewer: Hanna_MJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2013 11:58 am Title: Chapter 4

Just go to Michael's room and everyone will be happy! Hahah 

love it! :D



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

We'll see...

Reviewer: RhythmChild Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2013 05:42 am Title: Chapter 3

Whew....that's some willpower right there. 

I actually think WIll did the right thing. It wouldn't feel right if Michael wasn't all the way present whilel this was going down. I hope MJ sees that WIll showed his true goodness at this point; he is one solid friend, feelings notwithstanding.

Good Willy!



Author's Response:

Hahah Yeah!

Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2013 04:41 am Title: Chapter 3

Will has right he loves him he don't want just a fun like Michael he want a real realatioship



Author's Response:

Yeah...we'll have to see how Michael feels eh?

Thank you for the review :)

Reviewer: ILoveMJ777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2013 12:18 am Title: Chapter 2

:)

 

THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD, LOL.:) I WANT MORE.:):):) PLEASE CONTINUE.:)

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Author's Response:

Thank You, Your reviews mean everything to me :) xx

Reviewer: ILoveMJ777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2013 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

GREAT STORY!!:):):)

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Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: kjfinn Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2013 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 2

Ooooo. This is exciting already. Left me hanging at the end but, whatevs... This is good continue please!

Author's Response:

Haha, sorry bout dat.

Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: RhythmChild Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2013 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 2

now i'm a major slash, and my only suggestion to you is the make the chapters longer because certain readers like myself end up exploding at cliffhangers and I am currently rocking back and forth sobbing that this was the end of the chapter. :) other than tthat, keep doing what youre doing.

can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Yeah, I'm trying hard to make them longer!

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