[Report This]Date: Apr 24, 2013 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 30
*sigh* whateverrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. Piss me the fuck off, girl lol
Cute though. Very well written :)
Author's Response:
Hahah thanks I guess.....:L :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 24, 2013 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 30
Maaan why'd you stop there? Hahah just kidding. It just made me even more eager to read the ext chapter! Lol
Finally Will. It's about time!!!!! Haha
great chapter! :D
Author's Response:
Hahah! Cliff hangers are just my favourite thing :L
Thank you :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 24, 2013 07:49 am Title: Chapter 29
I want 500 roses too! That was so sweet of Mikey. :)
plz continue! <3
Author's Response:
Thank you very much darling :) <3
[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2013 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 29
Okay Will...we get the point. Now go to Michael and tell him that he's forgiven... lol
I feel so bad for Michael, yes he made a mistake, but everybody does, and he's shown just how sorry he is.
please update sooooon! :D xx
Author's Response:
Hahah! I know right he's being so stubborn.
Thank you very much darling, I'll update in like a day :) xxxxxxxxxxxx
[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2013 09:27 am Title: Chapter 28
Michael and Will need to be back together! :'(
Nice chapter, after this I played Don't Walk Away. <3
Author's Response:
Yeah. I was listening to it on repeat like all day...
Thank you very much :) <3
[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2013 12:46 am Title: Chapter 27
AHHH AT LEAST THEY ARE TALKING AGAIN, GREAT. MAYBE MICHAEL COULD WIN HIM BACK I HOPE. PLEASE CONTINUE. GREAT STORY MY FRIEND.:)
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Author's Response:
Thank you darling :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2013 12:38 am Title: Chapter 26
I FEEL SO SORRY FOR MIICHAEL. HE TRULY LOVES WILL, NOT LISA. HE DIDN'T EVEN REACT TO LISA VERY MUCH. I HOPE WILL UNDERSTANDS, AND COMES BACK TO HIM. PLEASE CONTINUE.:):):) GREAT STORY.
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Author's Response:
Thank Youuuuuuuuuu :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2013 12:28 am Title: Chapter 25
YEAH! I'M GLAD MICHAEL STAYED COMMITTED TO WILL. LISA ALMOST HAD HIM. WAY TO GO MIKE. LOL. GREAT STORY PLEASE CONTINUE.:)
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Author's Response:
Thankkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk yaaaaaaaaaaaa:)
Date: Apr 23, 2013 12:21 am Title: Chapter 24
OMG I HOPE MICHAEL HASN'T GOTTON HIMSELF INTO TOO MUCH TROUBLE. LISA MARIE SEDUCED HIM. MAYBE WILL WON'T HAVE TO FIND OUT. PLEASE CONTINUE MY FRIEND.:):)
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Author's Response:
Thank you :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 22, 2013 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 28
No...it can't be that easy :(
Will needs to stick up for himself. I mean I feel for Mike, I really do. But Will...idk what id do if I was him. But I wouldn't just give in.
Idk. Your story man
It's great, keep it going :)
Author's Response:
Hahah.. No it won't be that easy dont worry :)
Thank you :)
Date: Apr 21, 2013 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 14
Oh this is just great! Don't worry about including too many details (that's not possible!). Details make a story real. I enjoyed the towel silliness. And for some sick reason I love any description of Michael's hair and what it's doing or what's being done to it. It's one of his features I feel we tend to underestimate. Please keep up the graphic sex!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2013 11:52 am Title: Chapter 26
Will has to come back. I know he will. He might be just upset after his mom's death.
Such a heartbreaking but beautiful chapter! <3
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for the review :) <3
[Report This]Date: Apr 20, 2013 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 25
Ohhh damn, Lisa! Michael ... you should not have done that! Wrong!Wrong!
Believe me or not.I have my doubts if Michael loves Will. Actually, Mike is addicted to Will. Addiction, dependence of this love. Mike loves the freedom he has being himself with Will. Lisa is the woman who can make his dream come true in being a father.
In fact, Michael could have said no to Lisa.But...
I hope Will do not break up with Mike.
I love seeing them together!
Thank u!
ps: and whether Will also betrayed Mike, huh?
Author's Response:
Hmmm
Thank you :)
Date: Apr 20, 2013 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 25
I love how he wants to blame her like she was some evil succubus who left him no choice. They were both durnk, and they both did it together. Now she has to deal with his childishness....wait, actually she doesn't. I hope this proves to her he ain't worth it. Anytime a cheater blames the mistress, you know you got to let him go.
BE STRONG WILL YOU DESERVE BETTER
Author's Response:
Hahah. Thanks for the review :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 20, 2013 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 24
Michael is just dead fucking wrong.
Lisa is not even the bad one here. Lisa wanted to get back someone who she let get away, and she even backed off, she just wanted to kiss him once more, and then HE kept it going! He could have said no, and he didn't and he used her man. Bottom line, he USED HER!
Author's Response:
Mmmhmm! Preach!