Date: Apr 22, 2012 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 5
This shit makes me sad :( you are potraying MJ like a crazy fucking physco!!! I'm honestly tired of reading stories like this. Can't you right something else? Damn I'm really pissed off. I'm sorry but I'm a huge die hard MJ fan I cry almost everyday becuase of his death and he atleast deserves respect! You're a good writter but you really potrayed MJ badly :(
Date: Apr 22, 2012 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well I read the first chapter and I gotta admit it was okay but the fact that Mike raped the girls is not what a fan should write
Date: Apr 22, 2012 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wtf? Honestly why did he raped the girls? I KNOW IS A FICTION STORY but its gone too far
Date: Oct 29, 2011 09:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my damn they caught haha awkward. Great story by the way do a update pls
Date: Jul 04, 2011 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 4
really great greeeeaaat!!!!
Date: Jan 31, 2011 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
thanks :)
Date: Jan 31, 2011 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 5
No joke! Can't wait for part 6!