May you please update if you, have the time to.

Just checking in again. Are you done with the story or is it on hold again?

Dropping in again and patiently awaiting updates!

I think there should lots of parts of this suggestion:ok michael goes on his HIStory tour right and bianca has the urge to want michael to have her all the time that she keeps showing up at his hotel rooms in his bed naked or in lingerie waiting for michael to show up from his concert and when he walks in the room, he's all sweaty, tired, and not in the mood, but bianca is hot for him and forces to have her ( and what i mean by force i mean like when he is trying to explain he isn't in the mood she interrupts him by attacking his lips, pushing him on the bed, ripping his shirt, rubbing his dick. Basically just attacking him aggresivally not letting him get a word in and fuck his brains out.) that is what i would like to see happen in the story, just a suggestion, please write back if you read. P.S. please suggestion my review in the story.

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APPLEPIE1958

Entirely too much. 

Honey child, honey child! These two crazy motherfuckers plotting to harm their own child! Can you say, PSYCHOPATHS !? And, Lisa's fatal attraction ass needs to let it go! The man doesn't want you and this hoe has her NERVE, when she was cheating the whole time they were dating. Now, Shawn wants to blackmail Bee into being with him, and Kelly seems to be up to the same damn thing! I worry about Bee's and Michaela' s safety from all THREE of their crazy asses!

The thing that gets me, is that Shawn knew from the BEGINNING that he was Jaylens biological father and like the simp and crazy bastard he is, he let this charade go on just to get close to Bianca. They both planned this.

MY feathers are ruffles right damn now. And, I like the fact that Bee and Mike talked this out without accusations. Because, let's be for real here: I can see why MJ didn't want to tell her that. He didn't want to hurt her or his daughter by losing Jaylen, a child he has raised since birth.

And, Lawd why do I expect their crazy to be genetic and Jaylen begins to act just like his biological parents? Crazy as fuck, I tell ya'!

Suggestions: Michael continues to work his ass off to show Bee he is the real McCoy. Jaylen and Michaela catch these two in bed together. Kelly and Shawn show up to court demanding something in regards to Jaylen. Biance goes back to Shawn but it's nothing but drama there, and she discovers he's been sleeping with her friend Jasmine! Also, I saw no mention of birth control whilst they were having sex, if you get my drift. Hopefully, MJ doesn't give up but he has to prove himself ten times harder to Bee.

Lisa leaks that sex tape as revenge and Bee stands up for him because she cares. Also, Shawn kidnaps Mickey to get back at MJ.

P.S. Please tell me Eugene got lucky after his date!? He deserves it.